'I Choose You' || Jay&Piya FF || - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
RES :) YASHI, i am sorry i am so late :/
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Posted: 13 years ago
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All righhht.

SOOO,

Im on the edge right now. Like should i post an incomplete for now, or finish it up and then post :$ 😕

DOO tell mee! 😵❤️

-Yashi <3 -
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ mrs.luvjaysean

Noo problemmm ;DD ❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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^^m name is shilpa btw :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yashii...please do write the next part..waitingg! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@Yamini I am trying di! Its taaking me a whileee -.- Sorry!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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All righhht!

SOO SOORYY FOR NOT UPDATING! I hadd so much HW . -.-
hehe
SOOO
guuys, and gaals :) I am going to post Part 4 righhht now :D
I knoow this is probably the most-awaited part 😉😆
hehe I tried SUPER hard not to involve tooo much detail ;D


DO leave comments if you like it! 🥱😛

THE PART MARKED IN ORANGE HAS SOME 16+ MATERIAL IN IT. DO SKIP IF YOU'RE UNCOMFORTABLE.

PART 4

I couldn't tell you how much I wanted him at the moment. I just couldn't hold back any longer. I'd die if I let this moment pass. Slowly, I broke out of the kiss, and whispered in his ear.

"Make me yours , Jay."


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He looked at me, surprised, yet his eyes were dancing with joy and passion.

"Are you .. sure Baby? I mean-" he asked with concern, while running his hand through his hair.

"-I don't want to.. hurt you. Don't do this for me, please. Only if you're read-"

"Of coursee I am jaan. And no, im not doing it for youu, you egoistic idiot. I love you, and that's simple." I convinced him.

"I put my hand on his cheek and pulled his fac forward.

"Im ready than ever. I want to be completely yours. " I said, whispering the last few words in his ear.

Jay took a huge sigh.

"If you're asking for it .. " he said , with his sexy grin.

I blushed and closed my eyes, while he kissed my eyelids.

The next thing I know, I was swept away by his strong, hands, and we were going up the stairs. My heart beat getting faster by each step.

We never left each other's eyes.

So, he took me into his kingly bedroom, with the huge majestic bed, remember? And he threw me on it, while I giggled, and leaned along the ledge.

He laughed, and in a swift movement, took of his shirt.

I gasped, looking at his glistening abs. Shit. This man's got it.

I stared at them, wondering what to do.

Before I could think of anything else , he started walking towards the bed. I mean .. me.

My head felt dizzy, with the hotness level in the air. He stopped at the end of the bed, and got on it. True werewolf style. Like, you know, crawling type? Yeaah. That.

So, he started crawling towards me, his abs flexing with every move. My breath stopping, with every flex.

My brain had completely shut down. And I could think of nothing but the hot 'maal' in front of me. Aaghh.

He came reaaally close to me. Inches away from my lips, while I clutched the ledge for support. You know, in case I .. pass out or something.

My face was getting hotter by the second, I could feel it. He came closer and closer, while I unknowingly slid down from my spot, now lying down. With his adoring face looking down at me. Now. Was it.

He dropped down his steaming body on me, as my eyes automatically shut tight, feeling his sizzling kisses on my shoulder. I gripped his hair tight as his kisses got more zesty, and delicious. He slowly pulled one of my sleeves down, as I breathed in sharply, taking in the aroma of the atmosphere. He lifted his head up, as he he quickly took in my lips for a hot kiss. I kissed him back with the same amount of love, nestling my fingers through his hair. After we broke the kiss, he swiftly, but gently took off my top, while kissing me everywhere. I groaned as I felt bliss, He kissed, licked and chewed wherever he found skin. As soon as he felt he was done , I pushed him onto the other side, and got on top of him, kissing his abs, and doing the same while his head was thrown back. We took turns, pushing each other on sides, and revealing things we hadn't revealed to anyone, and marking them with our lips. When every spot was covered, Jay grabbed my hips, and pulled me on top, while he entered me.

We had a long and very hot night, with both of us refusing to let go of each other. ;D

The sun rays brightened the room, making the red and gold colours, illuminate more than ever. I opened my eyes, and yawned, looking at Jay, grasping my waist, with his lips on my neck. I turned to look at him, and ran my fingers through his hair, smiling lovingly at him.

I never felt so complete.

He slowly opened his eyes, looking at me for a minute, and taking in where he was. He smiled and fell back on his pillow grabbing me even closer to him. I blushed and tried to push him away, but his chest was just too hot for me to touch. I became red just thinking about last night. I started to get up, taking my side of the sheet, and wrapping myself with it. Before I could get out, Jay clutched my wrist and twirled me back to him, with his eyes closed.

"Don't you dare leave this bed. " he said with a groggy warning.

I giggled, and got up anyways. Anymore time with him in one bed, will take the life out of me.

I walked to the washroom, smiling over my thoughts, while he came behind me, taking hold of my hips, and whispering in my ear.

"Yesterday. Was. The best night of my life." He said as he dropped his face on my shoulder.

I had officially become a tomato at that point. I ran to the washroom, just before he could start taking over me.

After both of our showers , we went downstairs to have breakfast. Mmm . Toast, omelette and fries. Yup .. fries. Hehe, for some reason, Jay looked as if he had fallen in love with me again. I laughed quietly xD <3 But it was true. After last night, I feel that our bond just got stronger. All of a sudden, I want to just sit by him. Closer than normal. Or maybe lean on him. You knoow!? I feel chipkuu now D: Ahahaa

Soo, I just guess this is one of the stages of love we passed. Aahh.

Time passed by, as we walked hand in hand surrounded by the wild, white flowers in the park. Just walking. Whispering. Kissing. It felt so much better. Like .. like we were newly wed or something! I blushed.

On Thursday, Jay insisted we get our parents together to talk about marriage.

I couldn't agree less. Its time we give our relationship a name. Aaahh. I love the whole concept of marriage! Its soo traditional and classy! The rasams, mehendi, games, sarees, gehne, of course ' The dcor. Ah. I was lost in PiyaWorld once again, as Jay shook me irritatingly.

"PIYA! Mein yahaan tumse 15 minute se baath kar raha hoon, or tum ho ki pholoon ko dek kar koi ho!" He said annoyingly with his signature scowl.

I smirked.

"Obviously baby! Tumhare bathon se toh accha hai! You're so boring , you know.." I said winking and walking. I had a small white-petaled flower, which I was playing around with in my hand.

"Youu . Did . Not just call me boring! " He huffed, as he took hold of my wrist and spinning me around, making the flower fly out of my hands.

"Arree!- "

I started, as I watched the flower fly in mid air.

"I totally know HOW boring I am, jaan. So boring that you're wishing to re-live that night, na? " he said as he got closer to me.

Agh. This is AGAIN where I go into 'automatic blush' mode.

"JAY! Lemmee goo!" I squealed as I struggled my hardest to get out of his hold.

"Ahemm! " A deep voice startled us , as Jay let go.

"Kya yaar bhai! Ruined the romance! " Jay frowned as he took hold of my waist.

I looked with my mouth wide open.

"NEIL! " I yelled as I ran to give him a hug.

"Aap yahaan kaise!?" I asked him, surprised. He looked the same. Exactly like his brother. Cute, Handsome, Well-built and mature. He had a thin frame of glasses now, covering his dark black eyes.

"PIYA! How are you .. Bhabhi!? " He smirked as he pulled his glasses slightly, letting them fall on to the tip of his nose.

I gawked at him , hitting him lightly on the arm.

"Bhai!" I said blushing.

(Purple: Jay's POV 😛)

I looked at them, my two most favourite people in the world. My bro and my angel. By the way, she looks soo irresistibly smexy in that loose white top, and shorts. Ugh. That night's images are still stuck in my head. If I don't get them out soon, Im gonna have a hard time looking at her. I stared down at my shoes , with my hands in my pockets.

"Jay! Udhaar kya kar raha hai? Come here!" Neil smiled as he patted my back.

"Bhai. Sanjana kaisi hai? " I asked him about his wife. As far as I remember, they had gone on a second honeymoon to Lonavla. She was pretty good looking id say. A perfect match for bhai. It was like they were meant for each other. Just like me and Piya.

I looked at Jay, then at Neil. Sanjana is a very pretty girl! I had met her only once or twice at a few weddings, yet every time I meet her, It feels like we know each other for years! She had a naturally pretty look. Straight black hair, with a few honey blonde highlights underneath, Huge, Hazel eyes, covered with beautiful eyelashes, and a smile that could brighten up anyone's day. It was true. They were made for each other!

"Ahaha, Sanjana is great! Don't kill me cause I didn't tell you yet, but she's pregnant. In her third month now. " He said smiling proudly like he's already a father.

Jay looked at him. At first we both were surprised. Then shocked. THEN , frustration took over us.

Damn it. Sanjana bhabhi is expecting, and this bas***d didn't even tell us.

"BHAI! Tu pagal hai kyaaa!? How the fu*k did you never think of telling us first! HUM! Im your other half , you know! " I yelled, saying anything and everything I could in frustration, lightly hitting him.

I mean, look at this man! The nerve of him! Shit. I feel like an outsider now. Paraya ban gaya mein. I thought to myself, as unwanted sour music started playing in my head.

I walked heartbroken. Well, not really heartbroken, but annoyed.

"Arree! Jay! " Neil said as he hopped towards me.

"Im sorry yaar! I swear mujhe bhi recently pata chala! I mean, mein abroad, Canada , mein tha, and I just got a call from Sanju a few weeks ago. Trust me. I was mad at her too. But aakhir mein kar bhi kya sakta tha! I was surrounded by meetings and appointments!" he tried convincing me apologetically.

"Its okaaay, Neil bhaiyya! Jay just overreacts too much these days! Filmy hota jaa raha hai. " I said as I giggled and put a hand on his shoulder.

Neil took us into a bear hug.

Later that evening, we welcomed him into our house.

We had some coffee, and chatted about Canada, Sanjana, his plans for the baby, and everything else we could possibly talk about.

"How about Maya? Or or Meher? " Neil jumped with suggestions, as we were discussing the upcoming baby's names. The xray had shown that it was a girl.

"I like Sana." I said quietly.

"Sana!? That's .. beautiful. I mean. Neil and Sanjana. Sana. Goddamnn that's perfect! " Jay exclaimed , winking at me.

I blushed and looked at my fuzzy boots.

"Maynn, Jay. Beta teri girlfriend kamal ki hai! Imma tell my child, that his bhabhi is her godmother!" Neil said, wiping a fake tear from his eye.

"Kya bhai aap bhi!" I blushed. These 2 brothers. Hayye kya karoon.

AhGod. Look at this woman blush. I swear to god I can sit here all day and watch her. I grinned stupidly at her.

She looked at me, giving me a "What are you doing?" look. I just stared. Damn, those eyes. So beautiful.

"All right guys, you both seem like you want to eat each other right now, so imma take off." Neil winked, getting up from the red couch.

"Jay, keep her happy. She's one in a million. Don't lose her." He smiled and said, just before he stepped outside.

"I will bhai. She's mine now. I wont ever let her go." I said with a strong edge of certainty in my voice.

Piya just looked down at her shoes. Mann, whats good about them? I wanna see her eyes. Her '

The door slammed shut with the force of the cool wind.

We broke out of our thoughts and just looked at each other, smiling.

"Uhh .. ill prepare the food." Piya said, turning to go.

"Um no. I ordered pizza. You need to stop being a cooking freak. -.- I cant take you working in the kitchen all day yaar." I complained. Its true tho. She's been working like a maniac there.

"Uhm. Mr. Khurana, have you seen the state of the thing you call 'kitchen'? Its like a friken cave in there. You better let me clean or ill punch the daylights out of you!" came her instant reply. Godd her arguing instincts were back. I missed them. She looks sooo adorable when she gets mad. Hahah.

"O-kay MRS. Khurana! Whatever you like. Aaakhir, you're a wife. I guess that's their job." I turned around to leave, whistling, very well knowing her reaction next.

I felt a sudden choke on my collar, as her fingers gripped them tight.

"Listen you! I am not a wife yet, and I never will be if you continue this nonsense! Agh. You men. Idiots ho tum! BILKUL thakele! Hmph. Kuch kaam karte nahi ho, bas din raath bak bak kiye jaathe ho." She whispered angrily, her face inches away from mine.

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All righht :D Hopee you liked it! ^_____^ ❤️👍🏼

Youurs truly,

Yashi 😛

Edited by RainOnMe - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMFG that was HOTTT! :O :O ☺️ 😲 gosh they actually did it...woah! i must say you have the courage to write the 16+ stuff, i wouldn't be able to describe it so well as you have Yashi! simply awesome! Loved reading every bit, you always have me hooked on to your writing ;) brilliant! waiting for the next 😍 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Brilliant job Yashi👏
The romance was undoubtedly hawwwttt☺️...
JiYa can't resist each other right...
Neil's character change was good to read👍🏼
Cntnu on...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yashi, i just love this ff...
i'll comment in detail later but first of all thanks a lot for writing the first ever ff on jiya.. i wish i could kiss your hands..
lovely dear.. keep it up...
oh yes, please pm me the updates.. i dont want to miss this..

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