'I Choose You' || Jay&Piya FF ||

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Posted: 13 years ago
#1

Hey guuys! Im neww to IF, lekin i couldnt help posting this on here :)

I am a TOTAL fan of JiYa ;D Please dooo comment and likee :D

Leave feedback!

Alsoo, Abhiya fans, please dont bash.

Here is the preview :)




I Choose You.

(This ff is in Piya's POV )

I closed my eyes and took a deep breath.

This was one of the times where a girl has to choose between two of her most treasured phases of life. It was my time.

Ive held on to both of them for too long. Its time to let one go.

Dhak Dhak Dhak

My heartbeat raced along with the soft rustling of the dark trees.

We were in the middle of the forest.

Me,

Abhay,

& Jay.

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I know its really short, but id like to know first, whether its good enough to continue or not

Hehee,

SOO

please do leave feedback , and tell me what you think

Love,

Yashi

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Index :

Preview (above ^ ) Page 1 - 'IChooseYou' (a)
Part 1 - Pg 2 - 'IChooseYou' (b)
Part 2 - Pg 2 - 'Me&Him'
Part 3 - Pg 4 - 'RomanceToTheMax'
Part 4 - Pg 7 - 'MakingMeYours'
Part 5 - Pg 7 - 'SettingTheDate'
Part 6 - Pg 8 - 'KundliMessup.'
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow...good start ...pls continue and pm me😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#4
yes good start .jay is a very good actor .
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@abhayraichand1

Ahaa . And what might you be doin here? If youre here to bash, i swear im gonna snap. I already told you no bashing. So , kindly get out . Anyways, glad u find it hilarious.


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Posted: 13 years ago
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PM List;

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(like if youd like to be on this list! + ADD me as a Buddy 😊 ! )

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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow! pls continue it sweetheart :) PM me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome please continue :) !
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ Yamini
@ Pooja

Awww thank youu so muchhh :'D ā¤ļø
lOVE YOUU GUYYS!
Hehee all righhhty :D will post part 1 reaal quick! :DšŸ˜›
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Posted: 13 years ago
#10
Okaaay guyys!
Even thouugh its only like the 4 of youu,

I will post thee coming paarts! :DD

Pleease do leave feedbaack! :D

Once again, Abhiya-ians no offense, but you shouudldnt be here-.- Its a Jay-Piya ff only. PEACEE

hehe,
so here it goees:D


PART 1

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They were both waiting for me to say something.

Silence continued.

I looked to my left. Abhay looked at me through his dark blue eyes, and his strikingly handsome features left me stunned. His broad face, dark hair falling just above the eyes . He looked like the perfect Man in Black.

I did a quick review of what importance he held in my life.

Wait.

I forgot.

He WAS my life. A tear trickled down my cheek, as I brushed it away quickly.

He was everything to me. Always sensing when I was in trouble, and never failing to be by my side.

Yet.

He left me.

The number of times he wouldn't accept me , was just too painful to count.

I squeezed my eyes shut and looked to the other side.

I gave out a small smile at Jay, as he looked reassuringly at me, with a slight grin on his beautiful face.

His well-toned body burst through his light blue shirt. His black eyes, filled with curiosity.

His hair, spiked up in all directions,

Jay Khurana .

He was my wall.

My supporter.

My angel.

The times I was broken from Abhay's rejections, he would always be there for me, making me smile, and realize who I was.

I just owed too much to him.

I kept looking at both sides, for a few minutes.

I squeezed my eyes shut, while the cool breeze blew my curls out of place.

It was about time.

I NEED to choose one, I kept telling myself.

After a long wait,

i looked deep inside my heart.

To see who's face would appear.

Abhay.Jay.Abhay.Jay.Abhay. JAY.

That was it.

I smiled, content with my choice.

I definitely don't regret Abhay. He was part of me.

And im glad he was.

But I cant lose Jay.

I opened my eyes, smiling, and whispered the golden words.

"Jay Khurana. …. I choose you."

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