AarYa OS 'You Are My Rain'...Chapter-5, page-55 - Page 15

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ksen

very nice update.thanks for pm

Thanks for reading and commenting and you are welcome 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Abie10

Yaay! Updated finally.🥳

Nikki..you always brilliant with each update of yours.🤗

Hehe, yash was secretly enjoying Aarti's back in his corner.😉😆 Love the phone convo between Aarti -Vidhi. Aarti is still not out of the first post Mumbai experience she had. She now thinks this time something big will happen but am sure it will be a positive change in hers and yash's relationship!
Their talk on the room changes was interesting as well because it shows how Aarti and Yash have a similar likings. Hope they'll get some quality times in that balcony.😳😳

Aww so loved yash and kids chat. He assign them all to the roles they have to play on their mama. He heard how Aarti doesn't love sleeping alone and how hurt she was by him.😭 Am sure he'll try his bset on making her happy!😃

Love the family nok-jok in the bedroom and yash call Aarti JKR😆 these kids are naughty talking about the red underwear.😆

Yash wanted to here Aarti say she'll miss him along with the kids but she won't make it that easy for him.😛

Another lovely and detailed part. Don't think it was draggy Nikki..pleasant read it was!😃

Abie thanks so much for loving it 🤗

Yash always felt an attraction towards Aarti's bare back, we all know that 😉. So how could I leave such a great chance to show him drooling once more by seeing her bare back? 😉

Yes Abie Aarti is still scared of what had happened last time, post Mumbai and that's why she'll try to stay a little away from Yashji. But the far she'll go, the more close he will try to come to her 😉

And you are right this time the change will bring them closer for ever. And oh yeah they'll get more than some quality time on that balcony 😉

I'll try to show how Aarti and Yash's choice and thinking will match. And how Yash will find her different from Arpita. But no he will never compare them both, as his feelings for Arpita were genuine.

I so wanted to show some kids moment with their parents. And what better place than Mumbai to bring the whole family closer.
So here also I'll try to show some cute family moments will all three musketeers. That's why I showed that superman scene.
And no way, Aartiji won't say so easily that she'll miss her Yashji. But she'll definitely show it one day. 😆




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Posted: 11 years ago
what a nice update..love reading it so much,,thanks for the pm..will be looking forward to the next update,,
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Posted: 11 years ago
Welcome back Nikki!!!!! I love this update😛 ...I always wanted this cute family to return to Mumbai for another holiday especially after both are aware of their love for each other!!!😊
Nice to see Yash's realisation of love is also happening in Mumbai!!!!! Love the description of the bed on the terrace and looking forward to its part in our story!!!!😳😳

Now, who is this character who gets punched by Yash?!!! Aman?!!! Lets see!!!!!!!

Very nice dear👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nan0102

what a nice update..love reading it so much,,thanks for the pm..will be looking forward to the next update,,

Thanks Nan. For reading, commenting and loving it.

Will try my level best to update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: palbhar

Welcome back Nikki!!!!! I love this update😛 ...I always wanted this cute family to return to Mumbai for another holiday especially after both are aware of their love for each other!!!😊

Nice to see Yash's realisation of love is also happening in Mumbai!!!!! Love the description of the bed on the terrace and looking forward to its part in our story!!!!😳😳

Now, who is this character who gets punched by Yash?!!! Aman?!!! Lets see!!!!!!!

Very nice dear👏👏

Thanks Bharthi for the warm welcome 🤗

OMG Bharthi I so wanted them to return to Mumbai one more time. And when they finally returned, they showed us all those messed up episodes, with not a single scene of Aarya and the kids together 😕
And Yash has not yet realized his feelings for Aarti. That's why the poor chap is confused and will keep on getting confused more and more 😆

And yeah the bed on the terrace will play a very important part in the OS ☺️

Now who is the guy who got Yash's special lunch? 😳 Well we will have to wait for the next update for that 😉


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Posted: 11 years ago
yippeee🥳
u have updated my bday gift😉
coming to the update, it is really great di.
U have improved so so so much.
U r just best.

Edited by shalini28 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wuhoo Nikki Di u updated..
I always wanted this kind of Mumbai trip of them
so that they n specially "we" viewers wud hav
got to see so many beautifull scenes b/w r lovable family..
I m loving ur OS Di..
R yashji also is bcuming a happy n funloving yashji
hmm.. Now who is this man to get the punch if r superman..
I guess aman..

Thanx for the pm Di.. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great update nikki👏
Aarya moment amazing😳
Loved the way yash secretly admiring aarti...😛
Phone convo between aarti and vidhi was nice and natural..😃
Poor aarti still fear past mumbai experience...Liked the way aarti frankly tell her opnion about likes and dislikes..👏.Wow..It seems aarya have smilar likes😳
Loved yash cutely giving advice to kids and liked the way he instructed to kids that they have to play with their mumma⭐️
Yash is hurt when he hear about aarti sleeping alone..Glad that yash comes know about this
Tough time for yash.😉..Aarti is maintaining distance to yash and yash falling unknownly to her😳
Once again Lovely update...👏👏
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next part
Thanks for pm🤗

Edited by Sri_Radha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Every being is different from the other and how love changes a person and accepts and goes out of their way to win back the ones whom they ignored/blamed.

Nikki - your thoughts on the above was well expressed in detail...would be looking forward for the promise you made...find out dear ! Good job !
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