AarYa OS 'You Are My Rain'...Chapter-5, page-55

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prachidalmia

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

lovely update

happy that yash himself is falling for aarti without any third person helping as in pv

loving the realization part

waiting to know who was the person whom yash punched

looking forward for the next update

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: alekhika20
lovely part,cont soon.

Thanks Alekhika

Will try my best to update soon 😊

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: Surish

Thanks Surish ❤️

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: Leevi05
aweome ...waiting for next chap

Thanks Leevi.

Will try my best to update soon 😊

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: saf24
Fantastic update Nikki. Loved every bit of it especially the changes that are taking place with Yash not being bothered hearing Aarti and Vidhi's conversation or even his interaction with the kids. It was a nice fun filled update and can't wait to see what is in store next.

Thanks Saf

Yash is slowly noticing the changes in himself and it'll confuse him for a while. But he want get angry or try to deny those change in his feelings. Rather he will try to Move forward with his changed feelings, this time.

And those changed feeling are not just for Aarti but for kids also.

From next part AarYa's cute scenes will start. Which will slowly bring them closer to one another.

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: Avina-Ashvik
Amazing👏
Loved the way you showed Aarti and Arpita's difference in tastes. Also how Yash realized that anyone saying anything about Arpita did not make a difference to him and how he LOVES small things about Aarti such as her mischievous nature, her playing with her mangalsutra etc.
The way in which he has started to care for his kids and wife especially by assigning them duties is amazing. Yash realising the Aarti's pain post Mumbai's USS RAAT was brilliantly portrayed. Looking forward to Yash's realisation and confession of love.
I think the person is Aman or maybe Prashant. But my guess is more toward Aman. Once again, amazing job done. And please update soon and Thank you soo much for the PM. Best wishes

Thanks once again for reading and commenting. 😛

I want to show the difference in nature between Aarti and Arpita and why Yash will start to fall for Aarti. But I won't portray Arpita as bad, cause Yash really loved her. I'll just show her to be different from Aarti.

Arpita will be shown as a calm and mature person. Whereas Aarti will be childish and naughty and fearless but with full of life.

And Yash will slowly try to learn more and more about Aarti and the more he learn the more he'll fall for her. He'll also realise his mistake post Mumbai's USS RAAT. And will make up for it.

And the mystery person will be revealed in the next part 😛

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: prachidalmia
lovely update
happy that yash himself is falling for aarti without any third person helping as in pv
loving the realization part
waiting to know who was the person whom yash punched
looking forward for the next update

Thanks Prachi

I always wanted for Yash to realize his changing feelings towards Aarti on his own and not through anyone's help. And certainly not Prashant's. but that's what they showed us 😕

So I'm writing it in my version, which is giving me the satisfaction.

And you'll find out about the mysterious person in the next update 😳

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PrincessAshVik

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Posted: 11 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Thanks once again for reading and commenting. 😛

I want to show the difference in nature between Aarti and Arpita and why Yash will start to fall for Aarti. But I won't portray Arpita as bad, cause Yash really loved her. I'll just show her to be different from Aarti.
Arpita will be shown as a calm and mature person. Whereas Aarti will be childish and naughty and fearless but with full of life.
And Yash will slowly try to learn more and more about Aarti and the more he learn the more he'll fall for her. He'll also realise his mistake post Mumbai's USS RAAT. And will make up for it.
And the mystery person will be revealed in the next part 😛

When is the next update? Eagerly waiting.