AarYa OS 'You Are My Rain'...Chapter-5, page-55

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tanubag

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

AWESOME , LOVELY AND MIND BLOWING😳

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: tanubag
AWESOME , LOVELY AND MIND BLOWING😳

Thanks Tanu 🤗

Tanu you forgot to hit the like button 😳

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Chitra_11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Chitra that's what I'll try to show here. That how Aarti is different from Arpita and yet still Yash will fall in love with Aarti, which will be as deep (or maybe more) as his love for Arpita was.

And along with his changed feelings for Aarti, Yash will also learn how much he had hurt her and lots of things about her, that he never even tried to Lear or find out.

And the promise I made you was shown in the end 😉 (hint, hint)

I know Nikki...the person who received the punch...hope that character I luv is the one - but still - there is another one dear - Arti in a state...and Yashji enjoying the state...samjey ya samjayey...I know u will rock with this particular state...kicking with words...courtesy... state😆

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: chitsri65

I know Nikki...the person who received the punch...hope that character I luv is the one - but still - there is another one dear - Arti in a state...and Yashji enjoying the state...samjey ya samjayey...I know u will rock with this particular state...kicking with words...courtesy... state😆

@bold

Sorry Chitra "hum nahi samjhe is Baar" 😕, who that person is (but I still love the idea)

And the one that I've mentioned is the one that you and I both love 😉 (I hope we are talking about the same person 😆)

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Chitra_11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

@bold
Sorry Chitra "hum nahi samjhe is Baar" 😕, who that person is (but I still love the idea)

And the one that I've mentioned is the one that you and I both love 😉 (I hope we are talking about the same person 😆)

@ bold...ya the same...regarding the state...will resend the msg/pm...have a good sleep dear !

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RIYA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#166

NIKKI hey sweety its lovely like you n aarya are just mesmerizing i feel so privilege to see you grow n coming up with shining stars

Well ch1

wow yash work n family planning a trip for them seems MUMBAI calling aarya back to the place where the seed of love is borne

Aarti restlessness i can understand but the best part is now as they are close frnz yahs noticing it n absorbing aarti cute small body language n gestures

Also i like not only yash but vidhi too is besides & understanding her on divorcee thing

N then again rain to embrace yash who is lost in Mumbai memories n his aartiji

YASHJI is all set with few yet to realize truth taking appointment for aarti n hows his journey has been

Poor aarti really sometime g3 is lil overboard but i know its required at her part too as mother who wanna see his son n dil happy married one

Sonography n aarya moments its actually magical dear

aarti n aayu all set to free from al worries yay n then again aarti lost in his loved one

Was so excite for their Mumbai journey could not resist it n move to ch2

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RIYA

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Posted: 11 years ago

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again the chapter began with yash wondering what all he LOVED correct is it her smile her back her ahir or her smell or her as a ahoel her love aartiji

wow arpita point was unique one but it hot its more to do with yash n aarti admiring yash decor but i like that idea baby chupke se ek romantic room under the sky o my my

bhawari giving massage don't worry aarti darling soon you will have your yashji wat say nikkii ji

omg yash n kids section was so adorable it is beautiful a big round of applause how yash feel her n then care for her n later aarti trying to cheer him from his gloominess on being absent due to work

n in this whole the best touch moment aarti tried to sleep during yash hulk mode at dubey oh dear its really emo

M3, JKR cool n superman too cool nikki with ansh n palak make it more

Aarya r so unique hmm the one who sleep not holding hands but legs ha ha

WOH KAUN HAI well update soon so that we cna have more of aarya soon

Love it dear muaaah👏👏

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: GuruTheBest
happy birthday shalu

Thanks for the wishes 😛

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Nusrat Jahan Mukti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#169

Though I am waiting for the update of MTB so much but in between I was waiting for the update of YAMR coz the concept of this story is very close to my heart and the way you wrote the first part was enough to grab my all attention Nikki...and I must say that you have done full justice with your concept...so there is no doubt that you deserve a standing ovation from all of us.👏👏👏👏👏👏SO finally Arya and kids are in Mumbai... city of dream and Arya romance.😳😳😳.I really loved the convo of Vidhi and Arti.It had contained such clues that should be clearly shown in original PV which we didn't get.Loved the way you have shown contrast between Arti and Arpita.I just loved the concept of terrace...it's so romantic and at the same time very exceptional also...👏👏👏👏
Yash and Kids part was another amazing part.It was very nice to see the cute bonding of Yash and kids.The way Yash was talking with his lil Army and giving them responsibilities was wow for me...specially the duty of Payal was so lovely...and it just touched me and my soul...😳😳😳😳
Yash realization that how wrong he was with Arti in the past and Arti's realization that Yash is changing in the present was beautifully written dear.Both were thinking about each other...both were trying to love in their won way...I am just waiting for that moment when rain of love will be showered on them and they they will take shelter in each others arms without any guilt...without any remorse...and your note has assured me that it will happen in the most beautiful way dear...😳😳😳
Will be waiting for the next part and plz this time dont make me wait so long...😉😉😉

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#170

Riya I'll reply to bath your comments in one 😉

Riya Mumbai is where it all started for them and this is where PV ended but in such a horrible way 😕

But it's my small effort to reminisce all those beautiful AarYa moments through this FF.

Now they've become best friends, Yash feels at liberty to notice her small nuances and which he's doing excellently. 😆

Riya I've showed that after Yash's convincing the whole family has forgiven Aarti. Even Gayatri also. She was this forceful because she wants both of them to be happy and move forward and live a happy life with their kids. That's why Gayatri was so forceful and demanding. As it is Aarti was making excuse. But our smart Yashji was two steps ahead and took her to the doctor, where they got the red signal and thus the Mumbai trip,

OMG the sonography scene is my favorite. It's so

San the second part...

Yash's confusion is increasing for what he's feeling for Aarti. He'll soon start to notice how different Aarti is from Arpita and that'll attract him more towards her.

Even I found the Yash and kids scene adorable and so cute.

I'll try to use all the AarYa scenes in it but with different twists, to give it a different flavor 😳