AarYa OS 'You Are My Rain'...Chapter-5, page-55

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caller123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#151

Edited my comment on page 19

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Lincy_Lins

@lovemoon_003

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Posted: 11 years ago

#152

Awesome dear...loved it...waiting for ur MTB..

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🌹Vinnas💙Chandu🌹

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Posted: 11 years ago

#153

hii nikki di unreserved my post at page 19 i hope u like it as always

have a great time dear🤗

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: caller123
NikkiI really really enjoyed the update.
Yash is really changing...
Arpitha and Aarthi is so different. Aarthi's and Yash's tastes are same while Aarpitha's taste was different from Yash and she tried to do things only as per her wish.
I love the way Yash secretly looking at her every move.
Aarthi is still having insecurities no wonder any one who would be in her position will have it.

I felt so sad when Payal mentioned how much she cried in post Mumbai.
Yash's convo with hidrenwas superb. It shows that he loves AArthi but yet to relize it. I think he mises Aarthi a lot that's why he asked her whether she'll miss her.
I think the hidden volcano of love in Yash's heart will erupt so soon. It will break the shell he's in soon.

Superb superb update Nikki.
Love the last part their blindfold game.
Who is there? To whom did Yash gave a shot?😲
Waiting for the next update eagerly dear. Continue soon.

Kate Yash is changing slowly and gradually. And I feel the more time he takes to remove his confusion and realize his true feelings for Aarti, the deeper his love will grow for her.

Arpita was simply different from Aarti, which I'll show later as the story progresses. But I won't show her as a bad person, cause she was Yash's first true love. And I respect his feelings for Arpita also.

And Mr. Confused is right now secretly watching her, but very soon he'll do it openly, which will start to confuse Aarti 😆

And I wanted Yash to know what Aarti really went through post Mumbai. So the kids are the better source to reveal all secrets and bring them closer.

The blindfold game is their game, which I always loved in PV, so I could I miss it here also.

And the secret person will be revealed in the next update. 😳

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lovely_nikki

@lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: vinnas

nikki you did a marvolus job👏👏 wat more can say and why you say it a bit draggy dont say like that its not really it was much needed to develop the story to high level then only we feel the essence of it perfectly remember my math example😉😊
you mentioned more scenes which we like most heatpad now it done vidhi and bavuri only our yashji time will come later😉 yash teasing arti as jkr remembering theifs scene 👏 yash showing poses like superman palak reminds lal chaddi soo cute and sweetie reminds mumma kept that lal chaddi along with othr cloths in cupboard our arya fully embraced😳 yash givin instructns of taking care of arti in his absence as well as names to 3 muskeeters soo nice⭐️⭐️⭐️
yash already knows about arti hiding medicines but didnt caught her😉 ouch ansh revealing arti"secret how nice again cute angel payel innocently tolds mummas pain 😭😭definetly need to know yash⭐️👏 .
.vidhi arti convo feels so real they are sharing each and every thing like more sisters vidhi explaining about specilitis of romantic bed room 😳soon the room will share more beautiful memories of arya 😳
diff btn arpi nd arti yash notices all this faboulus take👏👏
seems that i again writin ur story in my comment 😉 wat can i do you drive like crazy with your writeups liked loved each and every part of your update waitin to see wat yash will do❤️❤️ this time to get back that naughty mischevious smile on artis face 👏👏
happy for this beautiful updates dear till u come with MTB we will stay here aryaland
eagerly waitin for YAMR next update also and we dont strain you whenever you posts as your availability becoz we love ur writeups soo much that dont get hurry to troble you🤗
becoz we want this lovely surprises😉🤗
hope my comment works to bring smile encouregemnt to you dear as you said🤗
have a great time dear ❤️

Chandu I love the way you describe the whole chapter in your own words. As if I'm writing the whole thing but in a different way.

Yes right now Vidhi and Bhawari are doing the massage, but soon very soon Yashji will do it on his own.

And yes the bed will also come handy during their romance.

The difference between Aarti and Arpita will be explored more later as the story progresses. But I'm not sure when I'll update next as I've to work on other updates also. And nowadays I'm very busy. I'm not getting time to do anything.

But still I'll try my best

And love you for always encouraging and cheering me with your beautiful comments ❤️

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lovely_nikki

@lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: shalini28
yippeee🥳
u have updated my bday gift😉
coming to the update, it is really great di.
U have improved so so so much.
U r just best.

Yes Shalu I finally updated your b'day gift 🥳 and it'll get more interesting from the next chapter 😳

Aww that's so sweet of you for praising your Di 🤗

And I'm happy to hear that I'm improving

I'm best cause my sis Shalu is the best ❤️

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: surprising
beautiful

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: freya123
superb part

Thanks 😛

Originally posted by: luv_lvndr
superb update...

Thanks 😛

Originally posted by: Anuraksha
Awesome dear...loved it...waiting for ur MTB..

Thanks for reading and commenting. MTB I'll try to update soon 😃

Originally posted by: taahir004
Breathtaking update

Thanks Taahir 😛

Edited by lovely_nikki - 11 years ago

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lovely_nikki

@lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: Tanvi.narula
Wuhoo Nikki Di u updated..
I always wanted this kind of Mumbai trip of them
so that they n specially "we" viewers wud hav
got to see so many beautifull scenes b/w r lovable family..
I m loving ur OS Di..
R yashji also is bcuming a happy n funloving yashji
hmm.. Now who is this man to get the punch if r superman..
I guess aman..

Thanx for the pm Di.. 😃

Yes Tanvi I finally updated , one of my stories that is not sad and emotional 😳

OMG Tanvi I so wanted this type of Mumbai trip again, but we got one with Ishita 😡 😭

And yes our Yashji is becoming happy and fun loving Yashji. And soon very romantic also ☺️, but still in a confused state 😆

Poor mystery man got a superman punch for touching superman's wife, do you know who he could be? 😉

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lovely_nikki

@lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: chitsri65
Every being is different from the other and how love changes a person and accepts and goes out of their way to win back the ones whom they ignored/blamed.

Nikki - your thoughts on the above was well expressed in detail...would be looking forward for the promise you made...find out dear ! Good job ! 😃

Chitra that's what I'll try to show here. That how Aarti is different from Arpita and yet still Yash will fall in love with Aarti, which will be as deep (or maybe more) as his love for Arpita was.

And along with his changed feelings for Aarti, Yash will also learn how much he had hurt her and lots of things about her, that he never even tried to Lear or find out.

And the promise I made you was shown in the end 😉 (hint, hint)

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bilqeesbint Nazeer

@billieberry

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#160

finally u updated, 😃 finally i read it😉 nd finally am commenting😆
okay now to d update

Part 2

Awesome write up Nikki di as always,👏⭐️👏

Yashji is stealthily observing aartiji 😆

Love vidhi nd Aarti's phone conversations, Aarti still has some insecurities, love vidhi she is so caring, gives her soothing words nd her banter, real sister-in law😊

Thought yashji will do d massage, how he wished he could do what Bhawari did.😆

Yashji nd kids making out some hush-hush mission😛,

now it Aarti's turn to stealthily observe yashji but kids re there too.😳

Oh yash gonna be busy so assigning task to Ansh, Palak, and Payal.😃 very nice👍🏼

Love d scene ansh nd Payal told yash Aarti scared of sleeping alone, which made him realize his cold behavior post Mumbai

Love d adorable family moment, each person with a name hahaha superman's three musketeer's nd his JKR Aarti.😆😉

Red underwear kids are naughty🤣 nd it embarrassing for Mr.superman😳

Aarti not going to miss yash haha not possible, unknowingly he placed his leg on hers this time nice😛

Who could that man be?😈 disturbing our Aarya passionate eye lock, Uhmm... am I allowed to say it here?😊

Overall love it to d core dear⭐️⭐️👏⭐️⭐️

Superb work Nikki di🤗

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