AarYa OS 'You Are My Rain'...Chapter-5, page-55

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Abie10

@Abie10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

Yaay! Updated finally.🥳

Nikki..you always brilliant with each update of yours.🤗

Hehe, yash was secretly enjoying Aarti's back in his corner.😉😆 Love the phone convo between Aarti -Vidhi. Aarti is still not out of the first post Mumbai experience she had. She now thinks this time something big will happen but am sure it will be a positive change in hers and yash's relationship!

Their talk on the room changes was interesting as well because it shows how Aarti and Yash have a similar likings. Hope they'll get some quality times in that balcony.😳😳

Aww so loved yash and kids chat. He assign them all to the roles they have to play on their mama. He heard how Aarti doesn't love sleeping alone and how hurt she was by him.😭 Am sure he'll try his bset on making her happy!😃

Love the family nok-jok in the bedroom and yash call Aarti JKR😆 these kids are naughty talking about the red underwear.😆

Yash wanted to here Aarti say she'll miss him along with the kids but she won't make it that easy for him.😛

Another lovely and detailed part. Don't think it was draggy Nikki..pleasant read it was!😃

Edited by Abie10 - 11 years ago

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PrincessAshVik

@PrincessAshVik

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Wow
Loved your OS. Its amazing and you are an amazing writer.
Please update soon and please PM me
Thank you in advance

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caller123

@caller123

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

NikkiI really really enjoyed the update.

Yash is really changing...

Arpitha and Aarthi is so different. Aarthi's and Yash's tastes are same while Aarpitha's taste was different from Yash and she tried to do things only as per her wish.

I love the way Yash secretly looking at her every move.

Aarthi is still having insecurities no wonder any one who would be in her position will have it.

I felt so sad when Payal mentioned how much she cried in post Mumbai.

Yash's convo with hidrenwas superb. It shows that he loves AArthi but yet to relize it. I think he mises Aarthi a lot that's why he asked her whether she'll miss her.

I think the hidden volcano of love in Yash's heart will erupt so soon. It will break the shell he's in soon.

Superb superb update Nikki.

Love the last part their blindfold game.

Who is there? To whom did Yash gave a shot?😲

Waiting for the next update eagerly dear. Continue soon.

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🌹Vinnas💙Chandu🌹

@vinnas

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#124

nikki you did a marvolus job👏👏 wat more can say and why you say it a bit draggy dont say like that its not really it was much needed to develop the story to high level then only we feel the essence of it perfectly remember my math example😉😊

you mentioned more scenes which we like most heatpad now it done vidhi and bavuri only our yashji time will come later😉 yash teasing arti as jkr remembering theifs scene 👏 yash showing poses like superman palak reminds lal chaddi soo cute and sweetie reminds mumma kept that lal chaddi along with othr cloths in cupboard our arya fully embraced😳 yash givin instructns of taking care of arti in his absence as well as names to 3 muskeeters soo nice⭐️⭐️⭐️

yash already knows about arti hiding medicines but didnt caught her😉 ouch ansh revealing arti"secret how nice again cute angel payel innocently tolds mummas pain 😭😭definetly need to know yash⭐️👏 .

.vidhi arti convo feels so real they are sharing each and every thing like more sisters vidhi explaining about specilitis of romantic bed room 😳soon the room will share more beautiful memories of arya 😳

diff btn arpi nd arti yash notices all this faboulus take👏👏

seems that i again writin ur story in my comment 😉 wat can i do you drive like crazy with your writeups liked loved each and every part of your update waitin to see wat yash will do❤️❤️ this time to get back that naughty mischevious smile on artis face 👏👏

happy for this beautiful updates dear till u come with MTB we will stay here aryaland

eagerly waitin for YAMR next update also and we dont strain you whenever you posts as your availability becoz we love ur writeups soo much that dont get hurry to troble you🤗

becoz we want this lovely surprises😉🤗

hope my comment works to bring smile encouregemnt to you dear as you said🤗

have a great time dear ❤️

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roserosey

@roserosey

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#125

oh di first a big hug for ur comeback that too with a everlasting lovely update of YAMR🤗❤️🤗...i always wanted to see tha change in the dynamics of aarya relation in this way after post mumbai track ...that yash realizing by himself abt his love for aarthi and in the mean time he get to know more abt aarthi her likes dislikes her fears her fantasies ...so much more...😳😳

i m so much loving the way u r showing yashs heartfelt feelings for aarthi even though he is still confused to realise😉😳😳...love the way u showed yash to hid behind something and watch aarthis every move and admiring her unknowing to her⭐️⭐️...

and vidhi and aarthis convo left me so happy that i felt like aarthi indeed found a sister in the form of vidhi ...i m so happy di they r sharing each and every happy moment and sad moment ⭐️⭐️...lucky vidhi bhabhi to have aarthi⭐️⭐️...

now the massage scene how can i forget that ...omg yash was longing to touch and feel aarthi🤢🤢...ooh i m soon hoping that to happen di di take ur time and show it slowly in ur style ...i dont mind even if this YAMR gets converted into ff 😳😳⭐️⭐️...

yash and kids tal;k i always love that ...these kids love their mama and papa so much in the same way like aarya love them so much ...my heart went for aarthi when kids said she is scared to sleep alone di😭😭...as she is an orphan may be she suffered it from childhood too...she deserve a lot of happiness now di what not she faced in her life ...😭😭

and yash calling aarthi jkr 😆😆 but it was nice to hear it from yashs mouth so romantic😳😳

how yash distributed the tasks of taking care of aarthi⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ star of the update di⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
i wonder who is that person 😕😆😆 but will be waiting to know what u r planning for us in the romantic terrace of aarya😳😳...
as usual u r rocking di so keep on rocking👍🏼...dont kick me di but pls update soon naa after updating OUR MTB and BOY😳😳

stupendo fantabulous job di⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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Nidhi

@nkmdesiusa

Navigator

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

Loved reading your OS of Aarya "you are my Rain" Nikki!!

seriously missing these two very much i just hope they come bak in a new show soon and resume that beautiful chemistry they showed in pv zmd..

lets hope n pray

Nidhi

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lovely_nikki

@lovely_nikki

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: nkmdesiusa
Loved reading your OS of Aarya "you are my Rain" Nikki!!

seriously missing these two very much i just hope they come bak in a new show soon and resume that beautiful chemistry they showed in pv zmd..

lets hope n pray

Nidhi

Thanks Nidhi for reading and commenting.

And even I wish the same. I also want them to come back together once again and create the same magic once again.

All we can do is hope and pray.

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Leevi05

@Leevi05

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#128

aweome ...waiting for next chap

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saf24

@saf24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#129

Fantastic update Nikki. Loved every bit of it especially the changes that are taking place with Yash not being bothered hearing Aarti and Vidhi's conversation or even his interaction with the kids. It was a nice fun filled update and can't wait to see what is in store next.

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PrincessAshVik

@PrincessAshVik

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#130

Amazing👏
Loved the way you showed Aarti and Arpita's difference in tastes. Also how Yash realized that anyone saying anything about Arpita did not make a difference to him and how he LOVES small things about Aarti such as her mischievous nature, her playing with her mangalsutra etc.
The way in which he has started to care for his kids and wife especially by assigning them duties is amazing. Yash realising the Aarti's pain post Mumbai's USS RAAT was brilliantly portrayed. Looking forward to Yash's realisation and confession of love.
I think the person is Aman or maybe Prashant. But my guess is more toward Aman. Once again, amazing job done. And please update soon and Thank you soo much for the PM. Best wishes

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