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Posted: 12 years ago
Kya se kya ho gaya.

PLEASE MAKE ARPITA EVIL.

I do not want Yash to feel sorry for her.
She stole Aarti's diary, hid the fact that she was pregnant. I do not want there to be any sob story behind her.

I just want to HATE her. Please make it easy for me. PLEASE...

Phew...god she made my blood boil.

PS: Sorry could not comment on the previous chapter. Been busy lately.
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Posted: 12 years ago
A wise unselfishness is not a surrender of yourself to the wishes of anyone,
but only to the best discoverable course of action.


Oh no Indu PLEASE do not make Yash MAHAAN. Please... These lines scare the hell out of me.

Best course of ACTION is to give your name to someone else's baby??????😔
Yaar NAHIII
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww poor Yahs he has been taking for a ride for the second time and this time he married the evil BLEEP 😡 😡 😡...Yash knew that the person who wrote the poems and Arpita were too different people but he ignored his instincts but I'm happy that he found out her true colors when they were alone 👏

Aww that was one beautiful poem and it described Aarti to a tee cause we all know that she will fight it and in a way it described Yash also...I love that despite them being apart they are close well their soul are 😳 😳 😳 😳

SP was really pissed off that they tricked them and rightfully so, I can't wait to see how he will treat Arpita 😃

Another masterpiece my friend, wonderful job 👏 👏 🤗 🤗
Edited by Zetter - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Shwty

This was really unexpected! Arpita and Yash get married. She pregnant with someone elses child. How did she get Aartis journal? What is hers and rahuls plan?




Arpita had confiscated Aarti's journal before the exams...remember? She never returned it. In any case, Aarti had left with naanimaasi within a few days of the completion of the final exams.

As Arpita/Rahul's conversation convey, they were on a plan with this marriage.
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG I forgot this is Payal baby we are talking about

Yash do the right thing accept Payal as yours.

Hmm... but then why the devdas avtar in previous updates. Interesting...does he initially withdraw and Aarti makes him see sense and accept Payal???
Now THAT would be interesting.

Indu Indu I am going crazy I better stop commenting RIGHT NOW😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
i knew arpita is good for nothing...im glad yash and mr. scindhiya got to know abt her true colour..loved the poem and the story indu di..waiting eagerly for next part..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jikky_84

That poem was so beautiful Indu 👏 👏


Its very clear that Yahs is getting attached to the writings and writer and not Arpita and you have written it very beautifully how he couldn't connect to the writings and Arpita.

Glad that Suraj Pratap had no doubt on Yash and even the doctor realised he is not the father. But I a surprised by the last sentence

Arpita got down from the bed and smiled brightly at Yash, "Congratulations, Yash!! It seems you are going to be a father."

After doing all these how can she be so cool and say that to Yash that he is going to be a father How did she think that he will believe that he is the father of that child. So is this Yash and Arati's daughter?




Thanks Asha...

Arpita sounded pretty cool there, didn't she? That, and if you dwell a little into her talk with Rahul, is indicative enough that she married Yash for a reason.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: scorpiodreams

never expected yash would marry arpita so soon and how low can arpita stoop...feeling bad for yash. if not for that journal, he wouldn't even have given her a glance.




Yash had to marry Arpita...mainly because of his dadima. He might be confused regarding Arpita, but he was very sure about his dadima's (in extension his parents') wishes.

You are absolutely right about the journal. Apart from what dadima and his parenrs wanted of him, Yash relented mainly because of how he connected with the contents of that journal.
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow beautiful update indu dear !!!!
how wicked is this arpita !!! and how did she get arthi's writings !!!
so she and rahul did all this in some plan to trap yash or his family ah 😡
i am so confused dear !!! so tell me how will arya get married and will yash send arpita after knowing her true colors
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Deepti1808

Kya se kya ho gaya.


PLEASE MAKE ARPITA EVIL.

I do not want Yash to feel sorry for her.
She stole Aarti's diary, hid the fact that she was pregnant. I do not want there to be any sob story behind her.

I just want to HATE her. Please make it easy for me. PLEASE...

Phew...god she made my blood boil.

PS: Sorry could not comment on the previous chapter. Been busy lately.




Hey Deepti...Have missed you. Don't worry about Part 8. As long as you are upto mark with the progress of the story, I am happy.

The last few lines clearly show that Arpita married Yash for a reason. And when you go back to Yash's visit to meet her family, her actions would become clear in her interaction with him. She did make a popat out of him there...😳


EDIT: The subsequent comments: Deepti, what if Yash accepts the baby for the baby's sake...and not only for his family's reputation's sake? What if Arpita leaves him with no other option?

You are right about the Payal part...Isn't that evident? I did mention earlier that Payal is 16, whereas Yash and Aarti were married for 12+ years. 😊...As for the Devdas avatar, that's three years down the line and has a very practical reason behind it. Rest in the next chapter.😳
Edited by InduG64 - 12 years ago

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