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inlieu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#501

Ah Indu, loved it! 👏 👏 👏

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Sri_Radha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#502

Wow ..Superb update dear..👏 👏 👏

I hate aarti's family😡 ..How much they are torturing an innocent soul..😭

Liked pandit blessing to aarti⭐️

Omg..yash and aarti meet was awesome😛..Yash thinking that she is shy girl..

Poor aarti😭..She shutting herself because of her family..So heart wrenching 💔

Malthi and aarti convo superb👏...Liked the way malti strengthening her confidence.. ⭐️⭐️

Tanya😡 😡😡 ..Glad that yash came to know about her true face

Continue soon

Eagerly waiting for next

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Leevi05

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Posted: 12 years ago

#503

wow awesome work

love it

update soon cant wait

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lulujjjj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#504

Superb update indu

love it malti and aarti confrontation aww it was so cute and emotional.
looking forward for your next update. Thanks for the PM.

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Tahitien-moon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#505

Once again lovely work dear😛

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charmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#506

i m speechless indu di...i cried again...awww...my poor aarti...n now poor yash...that stupid tanya broke his heart...

it is so lovely update...a wow...i have no words...

please update soon

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ns1970

@ns1970

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Posted: 12 years ago

#507

awesome update as always👍🏼
so sorry aarti feels this way about herself but i am sure yash will chage this soon

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bilqeesbint Nazeer

@billieberry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#508

Awesome, perfect, u entertain us with ur beautiful writing what more should I add here a lot to add dear it was *muahhh* thank u for d PM a d WOW! update *waiting for d nxt part*

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cynthiagem

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Posted: 12 years ago

#509

I always get excited receiving a pm for the next chapter. I get so engrossed in the story that it is always never enough when I reachthe end. Thank you so much for the effort you put in writing such a gripping story of Aarti and Yash.

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saf24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#510

Another fantastic update Indu. Beautifully written. Loved every bit of it especially finding out what Aarti's life was like and the little glimpse of Yash re entering her life. Superb job.

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