Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139) - Page 53

Originally posted by: rutu83

oh aarti- you just want to hug her❤️

and i loved the "you didn't". such a simple phrase yet so much trust and belief in it 👏

foreshadow of the samarpan in aarti's speech😕

Thanks.😊

Your final sentence spot on: This is what it is all about...Aarti's samarpan issue.

Originally posted by: inlieu

Ah Indu, loved it! 👏 👏 👏

Thank you.😊

Originally posted by: Leevi05

wow awesome work

love it

update soon cant wait

Thanks Leevi.😊

Originally posted by: lulujjj

Superb update indu

love it malti and aarti confrontation aww it was so cute and emotional.
looking forward for your next update. Thanks for the PM.

Thanks Naeema.

How are you pal? Hope the kids are fine.😊

Originally posted by: Prasadini

Once again lovely work dear😛

Thanks my poet friend. 😊

Just saw ur PM!
Me here with my little one at work dropping by to say HI to you..
Haven't read the update but will do and leave my comment later. 😳


EDITED:

Sorry for the late comment..

Just finished reading the 2nd half of the update..
As usual my heart cried again..
Hmm, to be honest I don't know how to start and what to type at this moment.
Forgive me if this post doesn't made any sense.

I must say GOD is still good at Aarti. He don't want to let her suffered so much that he keeps on sending angels that will guide her and protect her from the danger that comes her way. And it is in the name of Malti, Pandit and Yash. They teach Aarti what good life has to be.

Payal and Aarti were somehow similar on their perception about their parents. Both idolized them of having a perfect marriage. And thinking that they had no chance of getting them.

I love the advise that Malti has gave Aarti, she knows how much damage the situation have given Aarti on her way of thinking. And she wants to change it.

Good to know that Aarti recognized Yash for his good deeds..

And with Yash, I feel sad for him. But good thing, he found out immediately about Tanya's betrayal and real intention to him, thanks to Aman!

Looking forward for the next.. 😳

Originally posted by: InduG64

Thanks Zet...You are right about Aarti's Angels. These outsiders recognized what her own family didn't and gave what her family didn't. These angels saw her through her childhood through her adolescence to adulthood with a sensitivity that stopped her from becoming a completely damaged human being. Instead she recognized her talents and found her completeness in her creativity.

Zet, if you notice, there's a withdrawal pattern in all the encounters of Yash and Aarti. A just-born Aarti gave her implicit trust to Yash and slept peacefully under his watchful eye, but in the subsequent two encounters, she was withdrawing more and more...On the other hand, the five-year-old Yash had no issues with the baby, so he approached her without reservations, but in the last two meetings he let her be as she wanted...I am just attempting to show how life comes a full circle for Yash and Aarti in the end...We know how how they ended, so you can guess how difficult my job becomes now.😳

Originally posted by: Zetter

My pleasure Pal 🤗...Aw what a talent she has, she is very artistic that she brought Panditji to tears with her painting 😭 😳 👏 IMO her family doesn't know that they are missing out on getting to know and love a gem of a person but their lost are her angels' gain 😛 😃

I did notice the pattern withdrawal between Aarti & Yash and I got a feeling that this time around there will be a role reversal where Aarti will be the one to extend her ahnd and Yash will be the shy one 😉

You take your time my friend, it maybe difficult but I know you got this...Gonna send you loads of GOOD VIBES & HUGS in case you need them or just to let you know that I've got your back *muah*

I do sound like a little kid, don't I...when I ask for the hugs and assurances.😳 It's just that I have my own insecurities...which arise once I have posted the chapter. When I write, everything's forgotten. It's only when I have posted that I start thinking whether I was able to get the feelings and thoughts of the characters across or not. So I never know what makes me more nervous...the substance in the chapter or the awaited reactions to the chapter.😳

You keep your Hugs basket permanently filled up, pal...I shall be needing them more and more now...🤗

Originally posted by: smileymj10

Just saw ur PM!
Me here with my little one at work dropping by to say HI to you..
Haven't read the update but will do and leave my comment later. 😳


*RES

Hey Barbie...Comments can await. You enjoy your time with the little one. Give him a hug on my behalf. 🤗

Originally posted by: InduG64

I do sound like a little kid, don't I...when I ask for the hugs and assurances.😳 It's just that I have my own insecurities...which arise once I have posted the chapter. When I write, everything's forgotten. It's only when I have posted that I start thinking whether I was able to get the feelings and thoughts of the characters across or not. So I never know what makes me more nervous...the substance in the chapter or the awaited reactions to the chapter.😳

You keep your Hugs basket permanently filled up, pal...I shall be needing them more and more now...🤗