Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139) - Page 52

awsome update dear👏👏👏.love it❤️.thanx for the update and pm😊.

Indu - i loved the delving into Arti's psyche. Explore that more would you? Painful as it is, its fascinating to see it unfold. I know i know - i complain about torture of children on one hand and on the other ask you to delve into her psyche - and how can you do one without at least touching on the other?? Sigh...but you are doing this so well, so go on, do.

Don't rush the Yash the saviour angle yet - i may be one of the few asking for this. But Arti and her damaged psyche needs the time. Unless you are going to use Yash to unfold more of her thoughts, as you did Malti.

Why do i even bother making suggestions?? I am just rambling. You will write this as you thought it out and will do a wonderful job of it. And i will sit back, read and absorb...

*Reserved. 💔 ❤️ 👏*

awesome update
aarti is sooo cute and sweet
omggg yash's heart broke down😭😭😭
tanya is sooo 😡

waiting for next update

indu can you please color code the dialogue of arya
please don't mind if you can otherwise please forgive me😉

Superb update Indu!I loved the short conversation between Aarti and the punditji and especially the conversation Aarti had with Malti. Poor Aarti is so damaged from the lack of love she's received from her family that she can't trust herself to be loved by others.

Yash saved Aarti but they didn't recognise each other. Both of them are very lonely maybe the next time they meet will be the start of a new relationship. I really hope so.

I absolutely loved the bonding between Malti and Aarti.⭐️

Originally posted by: Zetter

Wow what a masterpiece Pal 👏 👏 👏...Despite her family trying to break her spirit down with their narrowed minded thinking 😡 I love all those angels that are in Aarti's life and brightens it with unconditional love and colors, Malti, Pandit and Yash ❤️

Yash's soul and mind recognized her even though he doesn't really know it is her, he just thinks that it's a coincidence that the shy girls and this place has on him 😛 😆 but since Aarti had completely shut herself off her soul couldn't recognize him but destiny wouldn't let him lose him, that's why without her knowledge her dupatta brushed over Yash's face and he was her savior once again when that creep tried to harm her 😳 😳 😳

Seriously Tanya is a gold-digger, I loved that Yash just walked away and that Aman told him the truth 👏

Aww Aarti gonna continue her studies, I loved her talk about love with Malti...I got a feeling that Yash and Aarti will meet again and this time she will recognize him cause she will follow Malti's advice 😉 😃

Thanks Zet...You are right about Aarti's Angels. These outsiders recognized what her own family didn't and gave what her family didn't. These angels saw her through her childhood through her adolescence to adulthood with a sensitivity that stopped her from becoming a completely damaged human being. Instead she recognized her talents and found her completeness in her creativity.

Zet, if you notice, there's a withdrawal pattern in all the encounters of Yash and Aarti. A just-born Aarti gave her implicit trust to Yash and slept peacefully under his watchful eye, but in the subsequent two encounters, she was withdrawing more and more...On the other hand, the five-year-old Yash had no issues with the baby, so he approached her without reservations, but in the last two meetings he let her be as she wanted...I am just attempting to show how life comes a full circle for Yash and Aarti in the end...We know how how they ended, so you can guess how difficult my job becomes now.😳