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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MSN_Vanny

Indu Di...speechless again!!! 👏 👏


I know this story will make me cry for hours, but I certainly don't mind! 😭 😭

It's just so...beautiful! 👏 👏

I loved the way the mood of the night lighten up! Kids are such a delight!

And the added RD bit was hilarious!!! 🤣 I can picture it! 😆

And AarYa...my lovely AarYa! Oh God! 😭 😭 Aarti's pain and suffering is hurting poor Yashu equally! 😭 😭

Love this Di! It was awesome!!!! 👏




Hey Vanny...Thank you. 🤗

Don't worry I won't let you cry for long. I myself like to stay clear of any morbidity, so I shall only portray what is required...pwomise!!😃

The Yash/Aarti bit...exactly...that's what I want you to remember when you learn about Aarti, that she finally found solace in the arms of a man who is with her all the way in her joys as well as in her pain.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sunrio80

Your such a brilliant writer. You always knew how to capture your reader's heart eh😉. Seems Aarti's past was not good or she suffered so much during her younger years. Her past was traumatic thus just speaking about love upsets her and dazed her off...? Or maybe more questions will be answered in your next update. Looing forward to the next part




Thanks pal...All the queries will be cleared up in the next couple of chapters when Aarti's past unfolds. I am yet to give it much thought, though I have a vague picture of how her childhood was.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: InduG64


Thanks my dear dear friend...I always need those pep-up words from you. 🤗
Writing this story is as simple as it is difficult, if you know what I mean. I don't want to upset any of the readers here. Already many are expecting the worst.
Through this post I want to convey that Aarti's past is not gory or brutal in a physical sense and in the manner everyone is scared of. There might have been a few inadvertent instances, but she did suffer in other ways...ways that an innocent child should not be made to. 😔




Anytime Love! 🤗 🤗

I understand what you're saying sometimes the easiest thing can be the hardest one as well, I know some and holding their breaths awaiting for doom but I got a feeling I know where you're going with this and I'm eager to see it all come through your beautifully writing 😉 😃

Aww now I'm really eager to find out about Aarti's past as well as Yash's.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Zetter




Anytime Love! 🤗 🤗

I understand what you're saying sometimes the easiest thing can be the hardest one as well, I know some and holding their breaths awaiting for doom but I got a feeling I know where you're going with this and I'm eager to see it all come through your beautifully writing 😉 😃

Aww now I'm really eager to find out about Aarti's past as well as Yash's.




*Sigh* you know me so well...a tremendous relief that I tell ya. 🤗
Just pray I get through this without goofing up bad.😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sara1990

Wonderful update

Loved it
So Aarti had a bad childhood????




Thanks Sara.

Yeah she did...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sheema_rajoo

Indu I'm literally clapping and cheering for this part. Take a bow. From start to end it was just amazing. Aarti's past is truly affecting her and now Payal has already started sensing it when she asked her mother whether Aarti's father loved her. Aayu is so adorable. I loved the part where he went knock knock may I enter the hug zone and the way he was teasing girls for easily crying.

The most fun part and close to my heart is the kids teasing their mother on her expressions/gesture when she scolds or gets angry. It's exactly how I feel when my mother tries to scold me or tries to get angry as it looks really funny. Sometimes when she's "scolding" I would just burst out in laughter and she would too. So thank you for bringing back that sweet memory.

Haiyee.. The romance part was too good. I nearly got a heart attack Indu (that was the speed my heart was beating). Yash untied the knots of her blouse with his teeth☺️ I nearly fainted with this line and that kiss.. *sigh* *sigh* "gheri lambhi saans".. Thank goodness it stopped there, if not I wouldn't be alive to comment. ☺️☺️ It was so beautiful that Yash knows his Aarti so well that even though she tries to hide, he can just look through her.

I was honestly shocked and really sad/hurt when I read the last part that Aarti who was 10 years old felt she deserves to be hated. No kid should feel that way. That one line is more than enough to show the dept of insecurities and hatred she felt for herself. It was so saddening as this kind of self hatred and low self esteem leads to kids taking adverse actions. Thank goodness Yash was there to save her.

Oh Indu you're just amazing. I just love your work more and more. Every update is showing a little more of Aarti's past which is really hard to relive. I can't stop saying this that you're just a fantastic writer and each updates just makes me feel so much. I absolutely loved everything about this updates. The family moment, the kids teasing their mum then the almost just desserts and aarti reliving a little of her past plus yash visiting aarti's diaries was just beyond spectacular. I love love love it. All the jhappi's and hugs are for you my dearest favourite writer. 🤗





Oh dear God, you always bowl me over with all that love. I never know what to write in response.

As for Aarti's scolding and being angry skills are concerned, I just wanted to show that the lady does not have a sour bone in her in spite of all that she went through...and the people around her just love her for who she is. The only times she gets genuinely angry is when her kids are harmed in any way...like that school bus incident.

The Yash and Aarti intimate scene was meant to be exactly that intimately comforting. Aarti tries to be normal but avoids him and gets behind the partition without staying around to talk with Yash to get a hold on herself. However, he senses something is wrong and goes to her...she still does not want him to see her face, which will give her away...so she tries to camouflage her expressions behind the kissing...yet the moment she kisses him, she gives herself away completely. That's what Yash meant when he says, "Why do even try to hide?"😳

The line in bold is so right Sheema...Sometimes the one who should be saving you and protecting you and molding your persona becomes your worst enemy. Let's see how Aarti's past unfolds.

The jhappis are always always always welcome...Many more back to you.🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: princess121993

awesome..indu di...i m speeechless..i dont know what to say more...will just say..keep it up...n continue soon




Thanks Charmi. Your expressions are my reward.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: smileymj10


Indu, it's morning at my side, and you made it a beautiful start for me!
Reading this wonderful update while sipping my cup of coffee was like having a heavy breakfast. Such a treat!

Well, what can I say now. I thought the first part will put me on becoming an emotional again. But Aayu took it away.. LOL! to his naughtiness.. The way he and Payal enacted Aarti about her anger to RD. Such cute moment!

Aarti's reaction to Payal was understandable, she was just being protective to her. She don't want her to expect everything into a perfect picture. She just want her to realize that everybody has a chance even the worst person on earth. And I think this perception made her become through Yash. Loved the hug part too..

I love the bonding between Pradhi and Aarya. They seems to be very close to each other.

And the way you wrote about the bedroom scene, sensuous yet romantic. Yash really knows Aarti very well. And he loves her so much that he can even sacrifice his need before hers. Thanks to her diary!!

DIARY (sigh)... it reminds me with my childhood(again). I can relate with Aarti this time. I too, used to write a diary during my childhood.
But unlike her, it has a different story. It is the best way to burst out both pain and happiness. It was like speaking on your own self. Just until my own Yash came..

Looking forward to Aarti's past..

*HUGS




A beeg hug to you Barbie Doll for making me smile after reading such a heartfelt response. You are a sweetheart.🤗

I am so happy that the characterzations appeal to you and you are able to relate to them. It satisfies me and I feel encouraged. Thank you for loving Samarpan as well my friend. It means so much to me.
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Posted: 12 years ago

GOTCHA!!
Been reading some of your response here and become curious about this one..

I hope Yash/Aarti depiction didn't hurt your senses. They are a very-much-in-love couple who have been
married for twelve years now, so that kind of intimate comforting is normal.😊


@bold So, does this mean Yash and Aarti got married 4 years after Payal was born?? Hmm, now am wondering if Payal was the daughter of both Yash and Aarti. I think I have to be curious more of Yash past...



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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update Indu
Loved Aarya small moments
How well Yash understand Aarti
Curious to know Aarti's past
Loving this story Dear

Thanx for pm

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