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Taahir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#371

Indu this was another fantastic update lots of emotional turmoil but I gather that is life . I also enjoyed the conversation between Aarti and Payal that was great

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#372

Originally posted by: Deepti1808
@Indu: I was hoping against hope that you would not take this route.
It just creeps me out. See not even mentioning what it could be. Yeah that is the level of my aversion.

I do not have the courage to read about it. Never did. Even the gruesome bits that come in newspaper are avoided by me and the channel is flipped when something comes in the news.

But But But with your story I am willing to give it a try as I know where Aarti is today in your story so it will be easier for me to deal with her past. No matter how it was. (I hope I do not end up crying along with her though). I am very faint hearted I am afraid.

Coming to the update there is only one complaint that I have that is it ended and that too at a point where the feeling of uneasiness started for me.😭

Deepti...if I think what you are thinking and are scared of...don't be. I am going to go a perfectly human route and have a perfectly logical, nonviolent explanation for Aarti's unhappiness. I am not a morbid person myslef my friend...and I think I am still not much of a writer yet who would write anything dispassionately. I have to feel to write...period. I shall look forward to reading this space when I write about Aarti's past. I just hope I don't disappoint you.

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#373

Originally posted by: smileymj10

GOTCHA!!
Been reading some of your response here and become curious about this one..

I hope Yash/Aarti depiction didn't hurt your senses. They are a very-much-in-love couple who have been married for twelve years now, so that kind of intimate comforting is normal.😊

@bold So, does this mean Yash and Aarti got married 4 years after Payal was born?? Hmm, now am wondering if Payal was the daughter of both Yash and Aarti. I think I have to be curious more of Yash past...

Hey Barbie...I mentioned the married period in the chapter itself. It's just that when it seemed no one had noticed that I mentioned in my response.😃
As for Payal's parentage...let's wait for that...one step at a time.😉

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#374

Originally posted by: salvatore-nina
Indu fabulous update!

Throughout the update, I was feeling tensed and at the edge of my seat. I love the kids for their sunny optimisitc nature and Yash for his support of Aarti and being a strong pillar for her but at the same time I am afraid for what's to come. I don't want to let my imagination run wild but I m eager to see what happened in Aarti's past and am looking forward to your update!

Great job 👏!

Oh Nina...I want you to go happy after you read this thread. Please allow me a little venture into Aarti's unhappy past. All I can say is that what we shall perceive as unhappiness may not have been taken so by Aarti herself...maybe she lerceived the whole thing differently then...and only when Yash came into her life did she realize what she was actually missing.

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smileymj10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#375

Originally posted by: InduG64

Hey Barbie...I mentioned the married period in the chapter itself. It's just that when it seemed no one had noticed that I mentioned in my response.😃
As for Payal's parentage...let's wait for that...one step at a time.😉

Really?? 😲 But u have said it was more than 12 yrs, right? 😕
Okay, maybe I was just focus on their romance that I didn't bother on asking it..😆
Anyway, thanks for clearing my mind..
Take your time dear, am not in hurry... 😳

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: smileymj10

Really?? 😲 But u have said it was more than 12 yrs, right? 😕
Okay, maybe I was just focus on their romance that I didn't bother on asking it..😆
Anyway, thanks for clearing my mind..
Take your time dear, am not in hurry... 😳

Yes my dear I did...and which should be interpreted as 12 +. I deliberately left it open ended, for the reader to surmise. I could have so easily said 17 or 18 years...but then where's the fun if I had done that?😉 😛

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#377

Originally posted by: luv_lvndr
Brilliant update...waiting for the next update...

Thank you.😊

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jasraj123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#378

awesome update
wonder what they are hiding from payal😕😕😕
arya are sooo romantic and understanding
waiting for next update

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#379

Originally posted by: inlieu
Indu, wow! I'm absolutely loving this! I think you're going to outdo Sparsh from the looks of things. 👏 👏 👏

Thanks pal. Oh my God...do you really think so? Don't jump your gun my friend...Let me at least get through the past before you say that...Let me earn that compliment.😳