Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139) - Page 36

Originally posted by: scorpiodreams

thanks for the pm and a lovely update. yash is so caring and knows arthi in and out. seems like some peeping into the past is gonna happen soon

Thank you, my friend.😊

Originally posted by: IsYaRoCHeR

Awesome part, Indu!! 👏👏 Loved it.. ❤️

Okay.. The initial of the part is so cute with Aayu and Payal there and RD marriage plan! 😊

Loved the mini romance but yet it was hot.. ☺️😆!! Loved it.. 😳😉!! And owh.. he understand Aarti very well na! 😳

Owh.. They want to tell Payal only when she turned 17.. And I guess Aarti's past gonna be revealed.. 😊!!

Let's see what's next! I'm loving the story! ❤️ Thanks for the PM! 😃

Thanks Isya...

I am glad you liked all those parts. Your appreciation is always so sweet.😳
Yeah...Aarti's story coming up now.😊

Originally posted by: Shashi1984

Hey! It's fabulous. The feeling of love, companionship, togetherness are beautifully woven in words. Payal and Aarti's relationship is amazing. Yash understands Aarti very well even if she doesn't show him. The diaries indicates that Aarti had a bitter past. Curious to know what happened in her past.

Thanks Shashi...I am glad you could sense the feeling of deep surrender in all these relationships. 😊

Originally posted by: Shwty

Loved it. Very emotional, sounds like Aarti had an awful childhood. Update soon Please.

Thanks Shwty...Glad you loved it.😊

Originally posted by: SAnonymous

Emotional Update Indu.

You did an Amazing job on this update Indu. It was a tough task . You accomplished the task and we got to read the best of human emotions.

Thanks a ton Sarada. The next couple of chapters are going to be tougher my friend. I have my fingers crossed.😳

Indu, wow! I'm absolutely loving this! I think you're going to outdo Sparsh from the looks of things. 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: Surish

Thanks Surish.😊

Originally posted by: jikky_84

Loved the 3rd chapter 😛

But it looks like the past of Arati is really heart- wrenching 😭 But looks at the brighter side, Arati si now happy with her family with Yash on her side who took away her pain and made her live again 😃.

Thanks Asha...Yup, Aarti had a lonely, sad past alright, but then she did get her share of happiness in the end. She had Yash with her...the first person she had laid eyes upon and the first person whose finger she caught on the very first day in this world.😳

Originally posted by: lulujjj

Last two chapters were awesome filled with emotions flowing in between a mother and her daughter, the innocent question by the fifteen year old girl , made her to think about the darkness of her past what are they hiding from Payal, is making me more curious , loved the kids enacting aarti and rd scene , the romance of yash and aarti made me blush. Aww thanks for the PM , please. continue waiting for the next update.

Thaks Naeema. Glad you liked the various parts. I hope Yash/Aarti depiction didn't hurt your senses. They are a very-much-in-love couple who have been married for twelve years now, so that kind of intimate comforting is normal.😊

Originally posted by: ns1970

Superb update👏

Wow words can't explain but Aarti is really a wonderful mother to her children and a wonderful wife a a loving husband Yash

Waing on next update

Thanks ns.😊