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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rachna1970

Awesome update Indu

Loved Aarya small moments
How well Yash understand Aarti
Curious to know Aarti's past
Loving this story Dear

Thanx for pm




Thanks Rachna...Stay with me.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Indu this was another fantastic update lots of emotional turmoil but I gather that is life . I also enjoyed the conversation between Aarti and Payal that was great




Thanks Taahir...

Yes, that is life...and if one has walked bed of coals to attain happiness one appreciates it more.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jasraj123

awesome update
wonder what they are hiding from payal😕😕😕
arya are sooo romantic and understanding
waiting for next update




Thanks Jasraj.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aarya are so much disturbed by their past in this story , but still , Yash is an angel
lots of things need to come out and maybe all this will help them to see their past without any hesistance one day

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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful beautiful superb work yaar👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh.. gosh...!! The anticipation is building up...!!
Aarti's past seems to be very painful... and a very disturbing one...!!

There is mystery related to Payal too...!! Interesting..!!

The RD.. Aarti scenario was so cute...!! 😆

I couldn't reply for the 2 nd part.. the update.. it was amazing...!!

Btw.. its too late.. but Congrats on being a Dazzler..Indu...!! 😊

Thanks and Do continue!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: keerthus.9

Aarya are so much disturbed by their past in this story , but still , Yash is an angel

lots of things need to come out and maybe all this will help them to see their past without any hesistance one day




Yash and Aarti have moved on from their past and have found their happiness, but the pain gotten from her childhood was so deep that even a reference to it still has the capacity to upset her. Yet the moment Yash puts his soothing balm on her, she calms down and normalizes. At this point, he is the one who remains disturbed...cause what she suffered comes back to him. As Yash mentioned they will bear this together as long as it takes.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Prasadini

Beautiful beautiful superb work yaar👏




Thanks Prasadini.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sia221

Oh.. gosh...!! The anticipation is building up...!!
Aarti's past seems to be very painful... and a very disturbing one...!!

There is mystery related to Payal too...!! Interesting..!!

The RD.. Aarti scenario was so cute...!! 😆

I couldn't reply for the 2 nd part.. the update.. it was amazing...!!

Btw.. its too late.. but Congrats on being a Dazzler..Indu...!! 😊

Thanks and Do continue!!😊





Sia...I had to use these initial chapters to give clues about Yash/Aarti's past as well as to assure the readers that they ended up good. The journey to their Samarpan (total surrender) to each other will begin now...although the romantic in me says that Aarti surrendered to Yash the day she was born.😳


Thanks pal...I am still getting used to the Red...eyes still go to the Aqua first.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Indu first of all I am so sorry for not replying on last two chapters. I wanted to point so many things in that ( that I loved most) but didn't got enough time to do a detailed commenting. 😭.

So I'll read it once again properly and comment on both chapters together.😊

Btw congrats on the color change. 👏

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