Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139) - Page 35

Originally posted by: InduG64

Borna...all I can say at this juncture is Payal's story is part of Yash's past...and that Aarti's saga is separate from this.

Originally posted by: Zetter

Awww what an emotional update Pal 👏 👏 😭 😭...Poor Aarti, I love how she stays positive and that she didn't let her past stopped her from trusting love that last sentence just broke my heart 😭

I love that Aarti doesn't want her sweet little Angel to shut herself off from love 😃

Yash is such a sweetheart, the way AarYa love each other it's so breathtaking, if Yahs can never bring himself to read Aarti's diaries two days in a row that means that precious soul has been through so much 😔

Can't wait for more...Fanatbulous job my friend 🤗

Thanks my dear dear friend...I always need those pep-up words from you. 🤗
Writing this story is as simple as it is difficult, if you know what I mean. I don't want to upset any of the readers here. Already many are expecting the worst.
Through this post I want to convey that Aarti's past is not gory or brutal in a physical sense and in the manner everyone is scared of. There might have been a few inadvertent instances, but she did suffer in other ways...ways that an innocent child should not be made to. 😔

Originally posted by: MelodiousDreams

With that clarification, I'm feeling a tad bit better, but not much...Thanks so much for that tidbit of information, though! 🤗 Now I'm more curious about Yash's past, too. Darn it, Indu! I want to say hurry up and update, but you just updated the previous part! 😕 😆 Nooo, another long wait! (So says the person who has endless reviews to update 😆)

Borna...🤗...Abhi to kahaani shuru hui hai mere dost, thoda sa intazaar karo. I won't make you wait long...that's a promise.😃

Originally posted by: balaraba

Beautiful update indu di, it heart wrenching, lov d RD scene, can wait to know what they re hiding for payal nd dat dairy too. update soon dear:).

Thanks Balaraba...I'll try to update by the weekend, provided my personal and work fronts both ease down a little. 😳

Brilliant update...waiting for the next update...

Originally posted by: Sri_Radha

Wonderful update.👏 👏..Loved it😳

Aayu was so adorable..❤️

Loved the way they teased aarti by acting like her expressions😉..So cute scene⭐️

Payal and aarti convo was emotional😭 😭

Loved aarya little romance☺️

Last part was sad😭 😭...It seems Aarti had a bitter past 😭..

Eagerly waiting for next

Contnue soon

Thank you for the appreciation Radha.🤗

Howsoever sad it was, I have to deal with Aarti's past my friend...then only we can look forward to their falling in love. Like I mentioned earlier, I won't drag it too much. Once I am sure you all got the idea how her childhood was, I'll step onto the next level.😊

Originally posted by: J12L85

Hello Indu dear, another brilliant update with a lot of emotional turmoil ahead for us all especially you as I know that you said this would be the toughest part for you. As much as we wish we could avoid the pain, anguish and scars of life they are vitally important in helping build us up into strong individuals and such is the case even in a story. Characters are more loved for the survival rather than those who always get what they want because this is the similarity between reality and a fan fiction that life is'nt without its share of problems. Aarthis past is clearly smeared with pain but her resolution to overcome that is going to make her character stand out. The admiration from Yash is already an indicator of the survivor she is. I loved how beautifully she explained to Payal that love should not be confined and that there are many expansions of love. I also gathered that the bond between Pari n Aarthi is very strong cause when Prateek questioned her reaction she said to ask Pari which could mean that she has shared a part of her past with her...I could be wrong. I am totally loving this family unity. They have such a serene understanding of each other that even the kids knew how to make Aarthi smile. You also got me thinking that the revelation about whatever it is, is really an important part of her identity. I feel that its something deep and can't wait to see how you bring this about. Aryas moment in the bedroom was something so pure ad special and you sent a brilliant message through this scene that physical interaction is not everything in a relationship. I loved how Yash set aside his needs to be there for Aarthi...for me it was a beautiful moment. Just being in the comfort of each other was more than enough. Again I have rambled buddy but you just give me s much to think about ...lol. Until my next read keep being inspired Indu...you never fail to impress:)

Hi J...Thanks a ton pal. Your comments rejuvenate me each time...so ramble on as much as you want. 🤗

You touched upon love per se. How beautifully Yash and Aarti give lessons of love to their kids...They can do so because love was their savior once. They value this emotion a lot, even though prior to meeting each other (as adults that is) they were deprived of it...or rather one was completely deprived and the other had some strange ideas about it. As for their physical interaction in the bedroom...after so many years of marriage, it is natural that the emotional well-being is connected with the physical gratification. That something had happened to disturb Aarti was crystal clear to Yash. At that moment she needed physical comfort of a different kind. And the fact that he undressed and then dressed her again only shows how comfortable they are with each other regarding their bodies.

Originally posted by: doratalk

Indu- I am intrigued by this story. It promises a lot of darkness in Aarti's past. I love the sensitivity and depth of knowledge that your writing portrays though- love and security can help people deal with their past demons- but to truly overcome them takes longer. Some defenses that you build up are hard to let go of.

I will wait patiently for the story to unfold at its own pace. I haven't read any comments- but please- please- there is no TRP to live up to here. Please don't rush through any part of the story! Deal with it at your own pace!

Great job so far! And thanks for keeping me in your PM mailing list! I look forward to the updates.

Thank you Dora. Love you for the bold lines above...exactly the feelings I was trying to portray. When emotional scars are very deep, they may take years to heal.

Thank you for keeping faith in me and allowing me to go with it at my pace.😊

Originally posted by: InduG64

Thank you, Abie. Well, if the parents have something to tell Payal when they think she is old enough, then it has to be something about her, right? I am surprised no one noticed the number of years Yash and Aarti are married...Shouldn't that have rung a bell?😊

Yes indu, it clicking in my mind that it has to do with payal. Which made me think what could it be? Ha do continue soon

Originally posted by: saf24

Indu, you have the power to transport me to another world when I read your updates. The kids pretending to be RD and Aarti was really nice and a light moment. Yash and Aarti on the other hand, the way you have made their relationship so far is amazing. Just by one look or one action Yash can read her and know that something is bothering her and from that point on he puts all his care into reassuring her that he will always be by her side. You make me fall in love with Yash's character and wish that there are more guys like him in reality. Fantastic job .

Hey Saf...thanks a ton pal...for keeping faith in whatever I pen. I have tried to ensure that readers of Samarpan keep the image of this happy little family in mind when I venture into their sad pasts. Well...there are guys like Yash out there, I can assure you that.😊