Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139) - Page 19

Originally posted by: jasraj123

nice start
love it

ohhh aarti was brought up without mother love😭😭😭
love the arya romance
yash is just can't keep away from aarti😆

love payal and ayu.
he is sooo naughty
thanks for pm

Thanks jasraj...Yes pal, this Aarti didn't have Shobha too.

Originally posted by: doratalk

Love it! Keep it coming.. If it wasn't approaching midnight- I would write more.👏

Thanks Dora. I shall still await your opinion.😊

Beautiful update!

Originally posted by: rachna1970

Wow Indu ,,,great start dear

Loved every part of it

Aarti holding Yash finger ,just wow

Yash so mature with kids n yet so romantic with Aarti

Aayu so cute

Loved the update very much

Thanks Rachna...Glad you approved.😊

Originally posted by: miti16295

amazing update di.

i think all adjectives r of no use to describe your writing di.

so aarti's past opened a bit . it was painful that she is motherless 😭

Aarti had found soul mate in yash from the day she born and showed it by holding his finger .👏

Aaya, the animal lover . he is really cute.😳

yash & ansh 's scene was awesome😊

romance of aarya was lovely ❤️

so, treasure hunt has begin 👍🏼

so yash is the one who brought aarti out of the darkness of her life

waiting for the next one di

Aha Miti...you have no idea how relieved I am that this seems to have been liked by you all. Thank you so much for the sweet words. 😊

Originally posted by: keerthus.9

amazing start Induji 👏

I love it Payal and Aayu are sooo cute and their parents also 😉

love it , completely love it ❤️

Thanks Keerthus. I hope you like it when Aayu and Payal won't be there for a while.😳

Originally posted by: jikky_84

Read both prologue and first part together 😃

Loving the way story has started and it keeps you curious to know more about their past. As we are curious, you have to write more fast 😳 😆

I don't know how I missed Sparsh

Finally found it and read all whole thing in one go 😛

It was just amazing, no words to describe the beauty of your writing and what a wonderful story 👏 👏

You are wonderful writer 😃

Waiting for the next part of Samarpan 😛

Oh my God Asha...you here?...I am thrilled that one of my DC friends has joined me on this journey. Welcome aboard dear friend. Hope I don't disappoint you.

I am so happy you liked Sparsh. Thank you. It was my first full, solo attempt and as such is very close to my heart.😳

Originally posted by: inlieu

Oh Indu, I'm already in love with the story!

Thanks my friend. Stay with me please.😊

Originally posted by: pvejani

just read prologue and part 1😃 ...wow.👏...loved very much.❤️👍🏼..superb work dear...👏.thanx for update and pm.😊

Thank you. 😳

Originally posted by: kdsubs1

Read it and loved it - but i would have to come back and comment Indu. Somedays life sucks - and your part 1 brought a little cheer and smile into my sucky day.

One word though - hai...

Thanks Kat...I understand completely what you mean about those days.


🤗 I shall be right here...waiting.