Sparsh (An SS)--- Part XIV (Pg 130) - Page 99

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Posted: 12 years ago
Another beautiful update Indu
I can feel all the emotions of Aarti n Yash n kids too
Loved the way story is moving
Pls update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Indu this one is full of suprises
AArya first gr8 convo⭐️⭐️⭐️
then prattek knows its maya knows n then got into some 😆😆😉😉
G3 😉
then Palak😃😃😃👏👏👏
No word today as you are just keep on writing better n better inresting n inresting
deeper n deeper .. i am nt as creative as u r so lost my words👏👏👏⭐️⭐️👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great progress dear , keep up soon, realy sweet uptad 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow! Fabulous, mind-blowing part.

Thanks for updating.
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Posted: 12 years ago

g3 is bit (a lot) insensitive huh?! -- says i don't have a problem with widows and then goes on to state her problems with widows...sigh

i adore your ansh and palak❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
Indu this was such a beautiful update especially the way Yash took care of Aarti. Gosh you really have a gift with words. Amazing update. Loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Kittya_Cullen

We're at Chapter 14...and I still have to write a review for each chapter...Procrastination is such a bad thing😆😆


Don't think about it today, you can always do it tomorrow.😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Kittya_Cullen

We're at Chapter 14...and I still have to write a review for each chapter...Procrastination is such a bad thing😆😆

Tell me about it... *sigh* Each chapter is SO wonderful that I find myself short of words every time one comes to an end...
P.S. I thought I was the only one with pending reviews for every single chapter (and then some)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ssroomani



Wow, Indu, that was a sweet update! I am loving the way it is going...❤️




Shobha..thank you.😊 Yup, they are on their way to convergence...but then, what after?😕
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Posted: 12 years ago

Indu, you are messing with my feelings so much with each new installment. The conversation on the verandah steps filled my heart. They are so good for each other.

Yash came back with the medicine just as the local temple announced midnight by ringing the temple bell. He gave the medicine to Supriya and told her he wanted an urgent word with Aartiji. She told him that Ma'am was in Ansh baba's room. He thanked her and said he will see himself out after meeting Aartiji. He entered Ansh's room to find Mishti sitting on the ground next to Ansh's bed holding his hand, head on her arm; she was fast asleep. Slowly disengaging her hand from Ansh's he picked her up, and walking over to the other side of the bed lay her down, tucking them both with the duvet. His fingers trembled with extreme tenderness as he removed a straying strand of hair from her cheek. He stood looking at her for a long moment and then proceeded to take out a single red rose from inside his jacket pocket and placed it on the bedside table. Bending down he placed a soft kiss on her forehead. She smiled in her sleep as he whispered, "Happy Birthday, Mishti!!"

This whole paragraph above, especially the bolded portion, is beautifully written. ❤️

It's really nice to see how observant and aware Prateek is of Yash. Similar to our onscreen Prateek (although I wish he were more proactive these days, but I digress 😆). Also, this "connecting" paragraph to the one I quoted above is so, so good:

The first thing that Mishti saw when she opened her eyes was the rose. She picked it up and found a note attached to it: This rose is for Mishti from her Yashji on her birthday. (PS…Aartiji, please convey her my love and best wishes!!!)…..Tears glistened her eyes as Mishti kissed the rose and held it to her bosom. Suddenly she realized where she was. "How did I get here? Last I remember was sitting next to Anshu." She got down and tiptoed out. Supriya was taking tea for babuji when she stopped her.

I really like the ease with which Aarti/Mishti lets herself enjoy these tokens of affection from him, even without her full realization. Speaking of connections, I love how you continue to weave their instinctive, subconscious hearts' connection into their conversations:

"I can imagine…We men like to flaunt our wounds and scars…..probably to get attention…especially the female ones. (A short pause as she wondered what happened)…You know Mishti was different…she would kill my ego by being completely unimpressed about my bandaged self; my wounds hurt her more than me. In fact, she was so sure of me that even the touch of other nurses didn't bother her…"

He had to sit down as he heard her break into laughter….his heart danced once again listening to the musical lilt after a lifetime.

"But it bothered you (he could feel her grin)…that's why you would make such a fuss about letting those giggly nurses…as you called them…near you…and then I…(she stopped suddenly, realizing what she was doing)…."

"How do you know about…never mind….Mishti must've told you. Aartiji, did you get the rose I kept for her?

"Yes….thank you. I didn't think you would remember her birthday."

"One only remembers what one forgets, Aartiji…everything about Mishti is etched in my heart. What I don't remember is her telling me that you and she shared this day. (He waited for her to say something…and when she didn't, he wished her)…Happy birthday, Aartiji!!"

Palak's proposal at the end is icing on the cake. Yes, pun intended, lol. So good. Yash did tell her that Palak had picked out her Mumma and was going to propose. Now, it's happened. I believe it's becoming a lot clearer to Aarti/Misthi who Yash is truly marrying or wants to marry. But, then, the dilemma deepens -- it's also very clear the Scindias don't want her, a girl with "past baggage", to marry Yash. Exciting storytelling!

Wonderful, wonderful update, Indu, my friend. I'm intrigued to see how Aarti/Mishti handles Palak's surprise proposal, along with Yash and the Scindias. 😃

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