Sparsh (An SS)--- Part XIV (Pg 130) - Page 98

Originally posted by: angake

Indu, I just finished reading the first two chapters and just wanted to let you know that I am loving it so far. Aarti as a nurse is a very hatke se image. I don't know why it reminded me of an old movie. LOL

I loved the title. Something about it gives you goosebumps. But seems like I have A LOT to catch up.

You are going to enjoy the catching up Kirthi - believe me.

Going back to read the update now Indu. I really have to go back to work but you and Deepti and Puvi just keep me here - no fair.

Originally posted by: kdsubs1

You are going to enjoy the catching up Kirthi - believe me.

Going back to read the update now Indu. I really have to go back to work but you and Deepti and Puvi just keep me here - no fair.

Indu this update brought tears to my eyes re..
Ansh's and Palak's innocent gestures of wanting Yash and Aarti respectively as their parents was so heart warming that it brought tears to my eyes.
Then that glimpse of happiness that Aarti felt was so light and brought the biggest smile on my face.
The turmoil Aarti was facing the whole time as the Schindia ladies literally tormented her was so heart wrenching. You channeled it so brilliantly that I felt her pain/despair.

Indu you wrote this so brilliantly that I could feel all the emotions Aarti, Yash and the kids were feeling. Sparsh is developing into this beautiful story that never fails to touch my heart each time you come up with a new update. It is so difficult to see the challenges/pain Aarti has to go through day by day as I feel whatever she is feeling. That's how good you've written Sparsh. I'm again spell bound and tongue tied at this brilliance. Here is the biggest hug and pyaar bhari jhappi for you Indu.. 🤗

Indu - i don't know how to respond. You left me speechless. I totally love Neema btw - wonderful friend to have.

Is there heartbreak ahead before the happy ending? Don't give me sleepless nights lady.

I know my short response really does not do justice to the update - but kya karoon, shabd nahi hain. Is update ne dil ko choo leeya.

My dear dear friends,

I wanted to post this by today...but then I had unexpected advent of house guests and got busy with them and could not get down to complete it...I came back late evening after a day out with them. The last bit was still left...so finished and posted it without even proofreading. I haven't had the time to pm anyone...Maybe tomorrow morning.

Sorry Kadeen...just posted this about an hour back. 😳

Friends, I'll respond to everyone tomorrow. Please don't mind.


Love
Indu

Ha- I was prowling IF and saw the update- like Kadeen- I was upset to have no PM- but you are excused since you were busy!😉

Originally posted by: InduG64

Thank you Ra ji...I'll be waiting right here...😃

wow. you did it again. another heart warming update. I can't stop appreciating your creative skills that keeps of attached to this brilliant update. I hope anxiety doesn't get the better side of me while waiting for the next update. please update soon. KUDOS