Sparsh (An SS)--- Part XIV (Pg 130)

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smileymj10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1061

Oopss, already @pg 142?! 😲
Wow Indu!! U're almost there... 😳
Seems like Kadeen and Borna are scaring you about the link... 😆

Nwei, sorry for the late comment, my PC just came from an operation..
It's just now that i got time to concentrate on so many PM..

Okay, about the chapter, or should I say the update..
Again, it was a very very amazing part, wherein both beginning and end involved two children longing for a papa and mumma..
First it was Ansh who's not letting go of Yashji.
And now it was Palak who's proposing Mishti..
Wonder what will be her reaction to this proposal, thinking about what G3 and Maya have told her..

Loved how you connect Yash and Mishti through those side characters like Neema and Anusha.

Will Yashji win Mishti's mind this time??

Looking forward to the whole birthday fiasco..

Let me greet you an Advance Congratulations for the coming thread..

*HUGS

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Indu Ghosh

@InduG64

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1062

Originally posted by: gcluv
At last got the chance to read such a beautiful update
Loving the kids
They are the one who are going to unite them
Neema helping yash ... was surprising
loved yash's gesture of giving her a surprise birthday gift

indu ,
superb update
loving it very much

Thanks Aditi...Yash contacted Neema before leaving the VM office after he had that phone convo with Madhu to make Mishti jealous...Remember I wrote that he had another halt to make before he left the office? That's when he met Neema and let her in on the whole story. He had seen and judged Neema's genuine love and dedication for Mishti, so knew she would make an ideal ally.😊

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Indu Ghosh

@InduG64

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1063

Smiley...hey there Barbie Doll...thank you so much.🤗 I had no idea a new thread was an achievement of sorts.😳 I guess I am very fortunate that I have you all write such lovely comments after almost each part. Kadeen and Borna were being a huge tease and I enjoyed their bantering over the issue.

The kids are indeed a vital part of this love story...I love to write their parts. Stay with me for the final leg of this journey. 😊