Sparsh (An SS)--- Part XIV (Pg 130) - Page 29

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Zetter

@Indu: ha that true Mishti would rather run for the hills but knowing her she will stand tall in front of him but the moment she is alone she is going to crumble 😭


I wouldn't be surprise if her dad not able to see his daughter suffer anymore approaches SP and fix Mishti and Yash's marriage 😛 😃




@Zet:
If life is again putting Mishti through a test, this is going to be the most difficult one. Normally if a person doesn't want to be discovered, he/she removes themselves from the line of sight. How do you hide from a man who sees you not through his eyes but by every other sense?😭

As for babuji, he has seen a young girl come into his family and be one with them so much so that she sacrificed her young life in taking care of him and his grandson as her own. She truly became his daughter and Ansh's mother. You have a point when you say as a father how long is he willing to stay back and see her suffer in silence?😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: InduG64




@Bhuvana: Thank you so much...I am so glad you liked the story. Do stay with me till the end. Actually this was the longest update of all the five parts...😃



yes... but i felt it even less...actually i take care that i dont get carried away...in the story...so that i can handle its end...but i couldn't do that with your story...👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
@Bhuvana: Thank you so much...that was such a sweet compliment...very humbling. Beeeg hug for that 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update as usual, Indu!
What a cruel game fate played on those two...anyway, the same fate is trying to get them closer and probably inseparable in the future!
Am very sure you're not going to allow Mishti to shake hands with Yash...she's just going to clasp her palms and greet like a proper Indian girl do...hain na?😉
I guess she's in the same yellow churidaar which she wore on that fateful day...the one she wants him to see her in...
"Patiently" 😳 waiting for your next update & thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 12 years ago
@Sarah: There you are...I wondered where you were. I guess the weekend kept you busy.
Thank you so much, dear friend...😊

Aha...what will Mishti do now? Wil she ...won't she? Big question.🤔 😉

As for the dress...no it's not the same dress...However, coincidentally it is the same color Mishti so painstakingly chose for Yashji to see her in, that day six years back...Like I told Smiley earlier...Coincidence or providence? Your choice...😃



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Posted: 12 years ago
I loved this part too, Indu.

We sometimes feel everything is fine since we did meticulous planning. Like Aarthi's plans for Mishti. Only when things go the other way, we realise there is something called fate that helps us to stay grounded, respect what we have in our hands and in the process, allow us to learn to live with enjoyment & satisfaction.

Not sure why, I still want to hold on to my opinion that Yash was not married to Arpita. I loved how Aarthi was happy with the thought 'He'll be a great father' even after thinking he's married to someone else. Thats the essence of our Aarthi. And not to forget Prashant is still alive in the story.

I know Aarthi will not show mercy to Yash unless our Indu wants to. 😉 So I'll wait to see how things proceed for AarYa. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: InduG64

@Sarah: There you are...I wondered where you were. I guess the weekend kept you busy.
Thank you so much, dear friend...😊

Aha...what will Mishti do now? Wil she ...won't she? Big question.🤔 😉

As for the dress...no it's not the same dress...However, coincidentally it is the same color Mishti so painstakingly chose for Yashji to see her in, that day six years back...Like I told Smiley earlier...Coincidence or providence? Your choice...😃

Yeah, weekends are always the busiest day of the week for me...usually my weekends are spent with parentless kids but last week I had a day trip with some "freaks" to shoot some photographs of wild animals in their den!! Can you imagine...holding a camera with trembling hands!
Anyway, that kept me away from PV forum for the entire weekend...so the first thing I did when I logged in to the forum was to search for your PM...and I must tell you that your story has such a subtle and soothing effect that it can make anyone's heart go "awww"...lovely Indu!
Well, I shall wait patiently for Mishti's reaction, for you know best...as usual I know you'll end up "wow-ing" me...so, I'll wait
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Posted: 12 years ago
@Morris: Thank you, pal...🤗

<<<Only when things go the other way, we realise there is something called fate that helps us to stay grounded, respect what we have in our hands and in the process, allow us to learn to live with enjoyment & satisfaction.>>

Aha..what beautiful thoughts. Such perfect words. I am sure I am writing this story just to have you and my other friends here articulate such profound thoughts. They make me go all inspirational. Aarti/Mishti loves her man...period. And that kind of love only wants to see the other happy. Even now she wants to stay dead just so he lives in peace with his "family."😊

Oh Yash definitely has his work cut out...Let's see how intelligent he proves to be...I really don't want to prolong this unnecessarily...



@Sarah: Oh my...clicking wild animals in their den.😲 Are you a photographer by profession?

Well, where Yash is concerned Mishti was always unpredictable...When he wanted her to go away (during his rescue), she didn't...and when he wanted her to come to him, she went missing...🤔 😃
I am sure she'll pull a fast one on him. There's no way she'll want to expose herself, knowing his awareness of her...not when his family life is at stake...so Catch 22 every which way for her.

Thank you...thank you...I hope I meet your expectations.🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank You , Induji ,for sharing such an important and Intimate part of your life with me.I feel honored!😊😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful Indu!! Stole a few moments from work to read this - and totally worth it. Now you got me all curious about Arpita and Yash - what's the story there??? Do me a favour - address that before you give more details about Misti and Yash - ok? I'll stress more about that otherwise 😆.

Lovely story Indu - thank you.

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