Sparsh (An SS)--- Part XIV (Pg 130)

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elanpremi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#301

mindblowing n I can't wait for the next update

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aditi sengupta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#302

ah ha !!!

yash is in suspicion
Aarti Y. Dubey.

MARVELOUS PART INDU

yash and arati are true soul mate
they are so connected with each other
in spite of many years of their separation
due to their circumstances
yash too rearing child of arpita's love child as his
just like his misti , rearing ansh .
they are so alike
they are so compassionate people
loving , giving and sacrificing

khub moza ashchey akhon golpoe
dekhe yash nijer misti key chintey parey ki na ?

a single brush of hair makes yash feel her as his MISTI is SPARSH -- the feeling

WAITING FOR NEXT PART ...

Edited by gcluv - 13 years ago

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Deepti1808

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Posted: 13 years ago

#303

I did not see this coming.

I had convinced myself that Yash had married Arpita which i found strange considering it was just 6 months since Mishti's supposed demise.

But stranger things have known to happen.

But that was an amazing twist.

So both Aarti and Yash are taking care of children not their own.

Hats off your leads are Mahaan in their own right !!!

What happens NEXT ???

Eagerly going to wait for the next chapter.

Bravo !!!👏

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Aisyah Abdul

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Posted: 13 years ago

#304

Good update! Feeling bad for Arpita.. She is a good friend of Yash.. M loving the last part.. 😃

Getting restless to know what's next! Update soon! PM me ya.. Thanks for the PM! 😉

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elanpremi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#305

mind blowing update n can't wait for the next one

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doratalk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#306

Induuu... I loved it! I loved her smart plan to not speak in front of him- but this cannot go on forever! I loved the Arpita back story- short and sweet. Very cool. And your poem is fantastic!

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#307

Dear friends...please give me some time, and I'll respond to all the wonderful comments. I am on a tight deadline at my workplace today, so shall be very slow with my responses here. Please bear with me...Your appreciation has blown me away... .Love you all...🤗

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lulujjjj

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Posted: 13 years ago

#308

Ah!!!!!!!!!!!! dear Indu that was amazing write -up read it twice to feel the essence of the story truly lost in the sea of words conflicting between mind and heart emotionally with each other views, i knew arpita is not yash wife mishti MU it... the reason behind it which was an unexpected one, arpita died after giving birth to palak , Mishti tries to hide herself from her yash, she decides not to speak in front of him and her silence is making him restless, she restricts herself from crossing the limits but the fragrance and air they have no restrictions they have joined their hands for a good cause, to bring them closer.

@Indu dear take your own time to respond. No probs

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