Sparsh (An SS)--- Part XIV (Pg 130) - Page 27

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Posted: 13 years ago
@Vanny: Aww...you don't need to apologize for being a step behind. I am just glad you liked what you read. That is my happiness...so thank you. 🤗

Yash and Aarti were always connected even when they were separated...they were apart only in distance but never in heart. Even when the physical sparsh was absent...their hearts stayed in touch.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Indu, got your PM when I logged on! This newest installment is laden with goodies. 😃

"Mishti…What's happening to me? I seem to sense you everywhere today...Help me love."

Can I tell you this line made me swoon a little? (And I don't swoon. Ever! Lol) 😳

Mishti sat down slowly…staring at the phone. He had moved on. He was married and was going to become a father. She smiled through the cascading tears…"He'll be a great father."

Gut-wrenching! But she handles it with so much grace because she loves him and surely wants him to be happy.

With that babuji walked away. Yash was thoroughly frustrated…How in the world can he make them understand? He did what he always did under such circumstances….closing his eyes, he whispered, "Mishti, help me…." Just then his phone rang.…

I really like the progression you've given both Misthi/Aarti and Yash as individual characters away from each other. So much heartbreak yet so much resilience. You also manage to keep them close together emotionally, mentally. It's like their hearts beat to the same rhythm. Really enjoy that!

He walked toward her…extending his hand…..

Part V is over too soon! You really know how to keep us hooked, my friend. 👏 Looking forward to seeing their reactions to each other.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Indu- damn I shouldn't have read this- now I want to know what will happen next!!! 😃Great job!👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
@Jac: <<It's like their hearts beat to the same rhythm>> You've said it...that's exactly how it is. They were distanced in body but their spirits, their hearts, their souls stayed in sparsh... He felt her over the the phone...she knew he had sensed her and that he'd call back to confirm.

Thank you so much...especially for being so deeply with me on this story...for understanding Yash and Aarti like I do...that they are strong now is because of the strength they derive from their love. That's the greatest compliment you could have given me. 🤗




@Dora: Thanks...you are sweet.🤗 OK...just to put you at ease...Me too no know what happens next!!!!😃

Edited by InduG64 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Indu loved the newest update! Fate has made them part and has brought them together again. I love how destiny plays into this story, especially when this week we came to see how Yash and Aarti have always had a soul mate connection.

So Yash finally meets Mrs. D, his Mishti, at the end of this part! I want to see how he comes to realize it's her because we know Mishti will try not to give anything away. He has already sensed something in this first encounter.
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Posted: 13 years ago
@freya: Thank you.😊



@Nina: Thank you...Seriously, what a coincidence that PV too brought out the six-year-old soul connection this week. Yes...there's going to be a tussle now between Mishti's conscience and Yash's subconscious...😛

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Posted: 13 years ago

@pg 33


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Posted: 13 years ago
@Smiley: Thanks...I am glad the story is clear to you now. No dear, it's not the same dress...but it is just divine coincidence that she was in yellow when finally Yash laid eyes on her...the very color she herself had chosen all those years ago. You are the only one who noticed this little info I sneaked in...and I am so glad you did. 🤗

I'll try to update soon. Let's see what Yash came back home to after he lost Mishti...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Just like Yash's.. a gamut of emotions ran through me as I read each and every chapter..

The last line leaves me with a sense of excitement... will she or wont she...take Yash's hand.. ?? its just one touch... all that is needed.. !!! 😊

Beautifully written...and I really appreciate u PMing me on this one...Thank u.. Indu..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
@Indu: ooo hehehe thnx I knw...but I was kinda confused too cuz I didn't knw who was saying wht😆
But goot so far and I have only read until part 2 😆
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