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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks rakhi shona and niyaati this part is all 4 my if friendsšŸ˜‰update aj to nahi karna tha par ab sab kay liyay 😃kuch bhi 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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sorry guys 4 keep u waiting but i am just too busy with my job here is the part 1 4 u all
Introduction:
chauhan mansion:
someshwar chauhan: father of prithvi and head of the family
kamlavti chauhan: mother of prithvi and wife of someshwar chauhan
sanjam chauhan: big bro of prithvi (very carin and loving)
Pooja sanjam chauhan:wife of sanjam(very nice and caring )
Sapna sanjam chauhan:daughter of sanjam (too cute very attach to prithvi)
sagar sanjam chauhan:son od sanjam chauhan(very naughty and very attch to prithvi)
Prithvi raj chauhan: cutest of family (very handsomeand loving dream man of every girl )
Pritha chauhan: smallest member of family(little naughty and thoar gussa wali)
Rathod mansion:
Jaichand rathod:head of family(business man cared about only profit)
Naintara rathod: wife of jaichand (little worried about her daughter future)
Khusi rathod: elder daughter of family (little proud to be marries to a rich but arrogant man)
Vijay singh:husband of khushi (very careless and manner less)
Sanyogita rathod: she is middle child of family (very diif from others ,she is very caring about love and relation ship not about money like her family and too beautifull like a princess from sky , in short dream women of any man😳)
suraj rathod: small brother of sanyo (living in hostel for his studies)
Part 1
a girl is standing out side a room waiting 4 some one to come as she was very worried 4 something but she was not alon at that she was with her mother stanf=ding with her in corridor of a hospital ,a doctor came out side and says i am very sorry but ab unkay pass time bohat kam hia ab log un se mil lain "
"nayi ap aisa nahi keh saktya kuch to karain na ap doctor "says a girl
"hum ko who ,,,,,,,,,,the women could not complete her sentence and fell down on floor the girl came to her says "maa hosla rakain warna pita ji ko kiasay samabalin gay chalain andar chalain pita ji kay paas is waqt unko hmari zaruurat hai " the girl helped the aldy to stand back and take her in the room
they enter the room and saw a man lying on the bed inconcious who had a very bad heart attck due to strees of his work and is about to die after few min thsi man is jaichand rathod ,the women crying is his wife naintara rathod and the girl who is taking care of everyone at this time is sanyogita rathod ,
both of them goes near the bed and take jaichand hand in her hands and says"dakiya hum gay hain ab ankain kholain na "
and slowly the man opne his eyes and see a his wife and daughter standing near him he calls sanyogita near him by moving his hand toward her and wuickly came and sut beside her and says "pita ji ap chinta maat karin karain mein hoon sab samal loon gi ap bsa tik ho jayin jaldi se "
the man had a beutifull and peaceful smile on his face which he lost many years ago when he starting running 4 money .he says"hum tum se bohat pyar kartay hain beta humko maaf kar daina par hum kabhi tum ko aur aonay ghar ko samay nahi day pay jo humko daina cahiay tha ,aj bhi tum is buray waqt mein hmaary sath ho jab kay yahan to kisi uar ko hona chaiyay tha indicating about hie elder daughter khushi"
"aisa baat maat kahin ap"says nainata
"kyun nah kahin sach ho to keh rahay hian aut janay se pehlay hum apnay dil ki har baat anpni is guriya se kehna chaty hain jo sab kuch manti hai hamein apna"says adn looking toward his daughter who has got tears n her eyes
he wipes those tears and says"baat anasun bayo beta hum hamesha tumaray sath rahain gay hamary jansy se pehlay tumko ik akri zimadari daina chaty hain tumary bhai ki jo abhi par raha hai "
"hum ap ki har zimadari nabayin gay par ap maat jao na pita ji "says and started crying like a kid who doesnot want to losse a toy that he loves more than himself
"hum ap se bohat pyar kartay hain aur sab ka diyan rakna "says jaichand and suddenly he start braething very fast sanyogita runns out side and calls the doctor ,the doctor came in and examine the patient and after few min jaichand rathid dies 😭😭sanyogita and naintara watching it and become like a staute
doctor tell teh truth and tehy came into their senses and started crying very badly after few hours the paid teh hospital bills and take the body home 4 akriya karam sanyogita calls her sis but the servant says she is busy with her friends in kitty party .sanyogita got angry at this and says just tell her hum aj anat ho gay hian and cuts the phones and crying thinking aj kay din bhi ap kay pass time nahi didi apnay ghar kay liya😔
in eveing they do the kariya karam
this is all 4 now hope u enjoy all
i will be waiting4 ur commentsšŸ˜‰
Edited by maria_awan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: maria_awan

sorry guys 4 keep u waiting but i am just too busy with my job here is the part 1 4 u all

Introduction:
chauhan mansion:
someshwar chauhan: father of prithvi and head of the family
kamlavti chauhan: mother of prithvi and wife of someshwar chauhan
sanjam chauhan: big bro of prithvi (very carin and loving)
Prithvi raj chauhan: cutest of family (very handsomeand loving dream man of every girl )
Pritha chauhan: smallest member of family(little naughty and thoar gussa wali)
Rathod mansion:
Jaichand rathod:head of family(business man cared about only profit)
Naintara rathod: wife of jaichand (little worried about her daughter future)
Khusi rathod: elder daughter of family (little proud to be marries to a rich but arrogant man)
Vijay singh:husband of khushi (very careless and manner less)
Sanyogita rathod: she is middle child of family (very diif from others ,she is very caring about love and relation ship not about money like her family and too beautifull like a princess from sky , in short dream women of any man😳)
suraj rathod: small brother of sanyo (living in hostel for his studies)
Part 1
a girl is standing out side a room waiting 4 some one to come as she was very worried 4 something but she was not alon at that she was with her mother stanf=ding with her in corridor of a hospital ,a doctor came out side and says i am very sorry but ab unkay pass time bohat kam hia ab log un se mil lain "
"nayi ap aisa nahi keh saktya kuch to karain na ap doctor "says a girl
"hum ko who ,,,,,,,,,,the women could not complete her sentence and fell down on floor the girl came to her says "maa hosla rakain warna pita ji ko kiasay samabalin gay chalain andar chalain pita ji kay paas is waqt unko hmari zaruurat hai " the girl helped the aldy to stand back and take her in the room
they enter the room and saw a man lying on the bed inconcious who had a very bad heart attck due to strees of his work and is about to die after few min thsi man is jaichand rathod ,the women crying is his wife naintara rathod and the girl who is taking care of everyone at this time is sanyogita rathod ,
both of them goes near the bed and take jaichand hand in her hands and says"dakiya hum gay hain ab ankain kholain na "
and slowly the man opne his eyes and see a his wife and daughter standing near him he calls sanyogita near him by moving his hand toward her and wuickly came and sut beside her and says "pita ji ap chinta maat karin karain mein hoon sab samal loon gi ap bsa tik ho jayin jaldi se "
the man had a beutifull and peaceful smile on his face which he lost many years ago when he starting running 4 money .he says"hum tum se bohat pyar kartay hain beta humko maaf kar daina par hum kabhi tum ko aur aonay ghar ko samay nahi day pay jo humko daina cahiay tha ,aj bhi tum is buray waqt mein hmaary sath ho jab kay yahan to kisi uar ko hona chaiyay tha indicating about hie elder daughter khushi"
"aisa baat maat kahin ap"says nainata
"kyun nah kahin sach ho to keh rahay hian aut janay se pehlay hum apnay dil ki har baat anpni is guriya se kehna chaty hain jo sab kuch manti hai hamein apna"says adn looking toward his daughter who has got tears n her eyes
he wipes those tears and says"baat anasun bayo beta hum hamesha tumaray sath rahain gay hamary jansy se pehlay tumko ik akri zimadari daina chaty hain tumary bhai ki jo abhi par raha hai "
"hum ap ki har zimadari nabayin gay par ap maat jao na pita ji "says and started crying like a kid who doesnot want to losse a toy that he loves more than himself
"hum ap se bohat pyar kartay hain aur sab ka diyan rakna "says jaichand and suddenly he start braething very fast sanyogita runns out side and calls the doctor ,the doctor came in and examine the patient and after few min jaichand rathid dies 😭😭sanyogita and naintara watching it and become like a staute
doctor tell teh truth and tehy came into their senses and started crying very badly after few hours the paid teh hospital bills and take the body home 4 akriya karam sanyogita calls her sis but the servant says she is busy with her friends in kitty party .sanyogita got angry at this and says just tell her hum aj anat ho gay hian and cuts the phones and crying thinking aj kay din bhi ap kay pass time nahi didi apnay ghar kay liya😔
in eveing they do the kariya karam
this is all 4 now hope u enjoy all
i will be waiting4 ur commentsšŸ˜‰

very nice part dišŸ‘šŸ‘..omg but it was so sad n emotional😭😭😭.........but i really hate khushi...kya ladki hain😔😔...........the love between sanyo n jc was so evident😳😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#14

i just loved it huni! toooooooooooooo good!

Edited by Ansh_Arti - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#15
wow maria...lovely introduction...and part 1 v. interesting.....plzz update the nxt part
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Posted: 15 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: maria_awan

thanks rakhi shona and niyaati this part is all 4 my if friendsšŸ˜‰update aj to nahi karna tha par ab sab kay liyay 😃kuch bhi 😃

Welcome maria😳.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: maria_awan

sorry guys 4 keep u waiting but i am just too busy with my job here is the part 1 4 u all

Introduction:
chauhan mansion:
someshwar chauhan: father of prithvi and head of the family
kamlavti chauhan: mother of prithvi and wife of someshwar chauhan
sanjam chauhan: big bro of prithvi (very carin and loving)
Prithvi raj chauhan: cutest of family (very handsomeand loving dream man of every girl )
Pritha chauhan: smallest member of family(little naughty and thoar gussa wali)
Rathod mansion:
Jaichand rathod:head of family(business man cared about only profit)
Naintara rathod: wife of jaichand (little worried about her daughter future)
Khusi rathod: elder daughter of family (little proud to be marries to a rich but arrogant man)
Vijay singh:husband of khushi (very careless and manner less)
Sanyogita rathod: she is middle child of family (very diif from others ,she is very caring about love and relation ship not about money like her family and too beautifull like a princess from sky , in short dream women of any man😳)
suraj rathod: small brother of sanyo (living in hostel for his studies)
Part 1
a girl is standing out side a room waiting 4 some one to come as she was very worried 4 something but she was not alon at that she was with her mother stanf=ding with her in corridor of a hospital ,a doctor came out side and says i am very sorry but ab unkay pass time bohat kam hia ab log un se mil lain "
"nayi ap aisa nahi keh saktya kuch to karain na ap doctor "says a girl
"hum ko who ,,,,,,,,,,the women could not complete her sentence and fell down on floor the girl came to her says "maa hosla rakain warna pita ji ko kiasay samabalin gay chalain andar chalain pita ji kay paas is waqt unko hmari zaruurat hai " the girl helped the aldy to stand back and take her in the room
they enter the room and saw a man lying on the bed inconcious who had a very bad heart attck due to strees of his work and is about to die after few min thsi man is jaichand rathod ,the women crying is his wife naintara rathod and the girl who is taking care of everyone at this time is sanyogita rathod ,
both of them goes near the bed and take jaichand hand in her hands and says"dakiya hum gay hain ab ankain kholain na "
and slowly the man opne his eyes and see a his wife and daughter standing near him he calls sanyogita near him by moving his hand toward her and wuickly came and sut beside her and says "pita ji ap chinta maat karin karain mein hoon sab samal loon gi ap bsa tik ho jayin jaldi se "
the man had a beutifull and peaceful smile on his face which he lost many years ago when he starting running 4 money .he says"hum tum se bohat pyar kartay hain beta humko maaf kar daina par hum kabhi tum ko aur aonay ghar ko samay nahi day pay jo humko daina cahiay tha ,aj bhi tum is buray waqt mein hmaary sath ho jab kay yahan to kisi uar ko hona chaiyay tha indicating about hie elder daughter khushi"
"aisa baat maat kahin ap"says nainata
"kyun nah kahin sach ho to keh rahay hian aut janay se pehlay hum apnay dil ki har baat anpni is guriya se kehna chaty hain jo sab kuch manti hai hamein apna"says adn looking toward his daughter who has got tears n her eyes
he wipes those tears and says"baat anasun bayo beta hum hamesha tumaray sath rahain gay hamary jansy se pehlay tumko ik akri zimadari daina chaty hain tumary bhai ki jo abhi par raha hai "
"hum ap ki har zimadari nabayin gay par ap maat jao na pita ji "says and started crying like a kid who doesnot want to losse a toy that he loves more than himself
"hum ap se bohat pyar kartay hain aur sab ka diyan rakna "says jaichand and suddenly he start braething very fast sanyogita runns out side and calls the doctor ,the doctor came in and examine the patient and after few min jaichand rathid dies 😭😭sanyogita and naintara watching it and become like a staute
doctor tell teh truth and tehy came into their senses and started crying very badly after few hours the paid teh hospital bills and take the body home 4 akriya karam sanyogita calls her sis but the servant says she is busy with her friends in kitty party .sanyogita got angry at this and says just tell her hum aj anat ho gay hian and cuts the phones and crying thinking aj kay din bhi ap kay pass time nahi didi apnay ghar kay liya😔
in eveing they do the kariya karam
this is all 4 now hope u enjoy all
i will be waiting4 ur commentsšŸ˜‰

What an update mariašŸ‘.I'm speechless.Very interesting update.Pls continue soon dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: rumela711926

it sounds awesomešŸ‘

thanks dear šŸ˜‰i am really really very happy aj kitnay din baad sab kay comments ayin hain thank you all from the bottom of my heart 😊i am really very happy
thankyou rumišŸ˜‰
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Posted: 15 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: anasrashid_fan

very nice part dišŸ‘šŸ‘..omg but it was so sad n emotional😭😭😭.........but i really hate khushi...kya ladki hain😔😔...........the love between sanyo n jc was so evident😳😳

thankyou dearšŸ˜‰its ad but going to good and happy after next 3 parts
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Posted: 15 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: letsrockshona

wow maria...lovely introduction...and part 1 v. interesting.....plzz update the nxt part

thankyou dear next part bohat jaldi ho gašŸ˜‰

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