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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

What an update maria👏.I'm speechless.Very interesting update.Pls continue soon dear.

thanks dear next part is on sunday here definatly
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Posted: 15 years ago
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this part is specially 4 shona(as u ask me with so much love i cannot say no to my friends and sorry din meinnhai kar payi job par thi ab 12 in night karahi hoon sirf tumary liyay dear😉) and rakhi dear 😉enjoy
Part 2
in ajmer chauhan mansion is located they are the rich people of ajmer now but they are all so kind that people give their examples od their humbleness and affection they are the king of ajmer .in chauhan mansion a women is sitting in sitting room near phone as she was very tense and waiting 4 someone call.two voices came from the upper story , in that room two kids are arguing with there mother that they donot want to drink milk and the other lady is forcing them like very mother as she was saying if u drink the milk u r going to be strong like ur chachu . the kids says sachi ,a man enter the room and says "yes bilkul tumaary chachu ki traha " this man is sanjam chauhan , the lady is pooja sanjam chauhan and the kids are there one boy name as sagar sanjam chauhan and the girl name as sapna sanjam chauhan .
"arre tum dono abhi tak tayar nahi huay sachool nahi jana"says sanjam to his kids
"pita ji bas who yeh lar rahi thi mujse"says sagar (he is the big bro of sapna and alway wants her to the thing he wants)
"kiya hum nahi pita ji yeh bhaya bhi na "says sapna with innocene
"bas bas ab larna maart shuro kar do tum dono jaldi se tayr ho jayo ap kamray mein"says pooja looking toward the clock and the kids leaves from there to get ready 4 school as it was 7 in morning they have to do the breakfast and jhave to leave 4 school ,pooja went near the drawer to put the key of cupboard in drawer and saw her husband looking toward her with naughty looks in her eyes ,she smiles and tries to go from there when he grabs her hands and then grabs her in his arms and says "jaanu kahan bag rahi ho itni subha maraton jeetni hai kiya "
"pas gayi "says pooja smiling
"kiya kaha ap ne dharam patni ji"says sanjam
"janay dain na bach intazar kaary hoon gay aur koi gaya to "says pooja witha request
"anay se pehlay usay darvaza bhi kholna ho ga jaanu jo meinay band kar diya tha bachon kay jatay hi"says sanjam as he was in full mood of romance inmorning
"aj nahi chorun ga chalo jaldi se mujay"says sanjam
"kiya "with comlpete innocene as she was also is same mood now
"hay is ada par to hum jaan daity ahian pa ki "says sanjam
"ha ha chaliay bohat mazak ho gay janyo do "says pooja witha order now
"pehlay kiss do mujay "says sanjam with smile now
"nahi "says and suddenly she felt a hld od some lips on her lips after fwe min sanajm leave s her and says aj to mein jkeet gaya yeh maraton
"ab bbhi na bas "and hids her face in his husband arms and he hugs her and they fell a knock on the door and pooja opens the door and saw a beautifull girl wearing a green shalwar kurta standing there with a tense look, she is looking too beautifull she is pritha chauahn she like her bhabi alot they share a great realtion ship with each other . pooja says "kiay hua guriya "
"jaldi chalin who maa "says pritha with tears in his eyes
"kiay hau maa ko "says pooja hearing this sanjam and two of them runs down and saw hee mom is like a statue , sanjam goes nears her mom and says "kiya hua maa ap aisay kyun baiti hian"but there is no response from her , he again shkes her and says "maa hosh mein ayo maa hua kya hai" but again no response when he felt a hand on his back and looks back and saw his father standing there
"kiya hua maa ko pita ji "says sanjam woth tears in hos eyes
"who abhi abhi phone aya tah tumari phuphu ki beti ka tumaray phupa ji matlab tumaray maa kay bhai ab nahi rahy aur is wajah se tumari maa ko gehra sadma laga hai"says someshwar chauhan
Flashback:
jaichand dies in hospital ad sanyogits is crying and doctors come and says u can take the body home now 4 kariya karam , she pays teh bills and before leaving the hospital she calls her sis but she didnotcomes to the phone ansd sanyogita told the news to her servant in anger and cuts the phone , then she thinks of caling her bhuha ,here in ajmer a lady is sitting around phone 4 some news of his brother the lady is kamalavati chauhan wife of somehwar chauhan and sis of jaichand rathod,sanyogita didnot meet het bhuha bery much but only 4 or 5 in her life but she love the chauhan family as they were very caring as she heard from father soemtimes.she gather some courage and pick teh [hone to call and starts dailing the number after few min phone is picked up by a lady (kamlavati),she says inhurrines kaun hai sanyogita is not able to say anything but few min later she says"phupo mein sanyogita is kay bad who kuch nahi bol pati and started crying
"sanyogita beta kiya hau bhaya kaisay hain "says kamlavati
"pita phupo who pita ab nahi rahay who abhi abhi chal basay"says ans started crying again
kamalavti becoem like a statue she doesot response to anyithing suddenly phone is takeby her husband someshwar he ans rest if chauhan member are very king to rathid after their ignorance m"kiya hua beti sab tik tohai "says somehwar chauhan had a carness for her and her family
"phupa ji who pita nahi rahay ab "and crying agin
"he looks at her wife and turn to phone again and says "sabar se kam lo beta yeh to kabhi nahi kabhi hona hi hai har kisi kay sath ab kiya karo gay tum sab"
"abhi kuch dair mein hum ghar jayin gay aur kariya karam kaarin gay aur artiyan hindustan lay kar ayin gay pita ji ki akri icha thi yahin bahany ki
"tikhai bet aana aurt sab ka diyan rakna aur har pal ki khabar hum rakaty rahian gay"says somehswar to sanyogita and hung up the phoen and move s toward his wife
back to present
sanjam is crying now and shakes her mom"kuch bolomaa aisa maat karo khud kay sath ap bohat pyar karti thi na mamu sehumbhi kartya hain"says
kamalavti looks toward her son and hugs and start crying
sanjam removes her mom from teh hugs and turn to his father kiya karna hai ba kab ayin gay who india "
"kal ya parson tak"says someshwar ,now here envirment is also tense now
that is all 4 now shona dear next part meintime laagy ga jaani so wait everyone😉and do leaves ur comments😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nnnnnnnnnnnnnnaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii maria please update the next part
kitna suspense tumne dala...please agla update karo....mujhe prc tumhare update mein bhi parna hai.....please do the next part....do it now...u can't refuse please please..this is ur punishment for writing such a beautiful part
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey maria please post the next part now...tumne itna suspense dala...please part 3 be update karo...i wanna see prc'c reaction aur mujhe uska character ke bare mein bhi parna hai....please maria post the next part aswell
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Posted: 15 years ago
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aur haan the update was wonderful....and great and awesome...and mindblowing
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Posted: 15 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: maria_awan

thanks dear next part is on sunday here definatly

Welcome maria😳.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: maria_awan

this part is specially 4 shona(as u ask me with so much love i cannot say no to my friends and sorry din meinnhai kar payi job par thi ab 12 in night karahi hoon sirf tumary liyay dear😉) and rakhi dear 😉enjoy
Part 2
in ajmer chauhan mansion is located they are the rich people of ajmer now but they are all so kind that people give their examples od their humbleness and affection they are the king of ajmer .in chauhan mansion a women is sitting in sitting room near phone as she was very tense and waiting 4 someone call.two voices came from the upper story , in that room two kids are arguing with there mother that they donot want to drink milk and the other lady is forcing them like very mother as she was saying if u drink the milk u r going to be strong like ur chachu . the kids says sachi ,a man enter the room and says "yes bilkul tumaary chachu ki traha " this man is sanjam chauhan , the lady is pooja sanjam chauhan and the kids are there one boy name as sagar sanjam chauhan and the girl name as sapna sanjam chauhan .
"arre tum dono abhi tak tayar nahi huay sachool nahi jana"says sanjam to his kids
"pita ji bas who yeh lar rahi thi mujse"says sagar (he is the big bro of sapna and alway wants her to the thing he wants)
"kiya hum nahi pita ji yeh bhaya bhi na "says sapna with innocene
"bas bas ab larna maart shuro kar do tum dono jaldi se tayr ho jayo ap kamray mein"says pooja looking toward the clock and the kids leaves from there to get ready 4 school as it was 7 in morning they have to do the breakfast and jhave to leave 4 school ,pooja went near the drawer to put the key of cupboard in drawer and saw her husband looking toward her with naughty looks in her eyes ,she smiles and tries to go from there when he grabs her hands and then grabs her in his arms and says "jaanu kahan bag rahi ho itni subha maraton jeetni hai kiya "
"pas gayi "says pooja smiling
"kiya kaha ap ne dharam patni ji"says sanjam
"janay dain na bach intazar kaary hoon gay aur koi gaya to "says pooja witha request
"anay se pehlay usay darvaza bhi kholna ho ga jaanu jo meinay band kar diya tha bachon kay jatay hi"says sanjam as he was in full mood of romance inmorning
"aj nahi chorun ga chalo jaldi se mujay"says sanjam
"kiya "with comlpete innocene as she was also is same mood now
"hay is ada par to hum jaan daity ahian pa ki "says sanjam
"ha ha chaliay bohat mazak ho gay janyo do "says pooja witha order now
"pehlay kiss do mujay "says sanjam with smile now
"nahi "says and suddenly she felt a hld od some lips on her lips after fwe min sanajm leave s her and says aj to mein jkeet gaya yeh maraton
"ab bbhi na bas "and hids her face in his husband arms and he hugs her and they fell a knock on the door and pooja opens the door and saw a beautifull girl wearing a green shalwar kurta standing there with a tense look, she is looking too beautifull she is pritha chauahn she like her bhabi alot they share a great realtion ship with each other . pooja says "kiay hua guriya "
"jaldi chalin who maa "says pritha with tears in his eyes
"kiay hau maa ko "says pooja hearing this sanjam and two of them runs down and saw hee mom is like a statue , sanjam goes nears her mom and says "kiya hua maa ap aisay kyun baiti hian"but there is no response from her , he again shkes her and says "maa hosh mein ayo maa hua kya hai" but again no response when he felt a hand on his back and looks back and saw his father standing there
"kiya hua maa ko pita ji "says sanjam woth tears in hos eyes
"who abhi abhi phone aya tah tumari phuphu ki beti ka tumaray phupa ji matlab tumaray maa kay bhai ab nahi rahy aur is wajah se tumari maa ko gehra sadma laga hai"says someshwar chauhan
Flashback:
jaichand dies in hospital ad sanyogits is crying and doctors come and says u can take the body home now 4 kariya karam , she pays teh bills and before leaving the hospital she calls her sis but she didnotcomes to the phone ansd sanyogita told the news to her servant in anger and cuts the phone , then she thinks of caling her bhuha ,here in ajmer a lady is sitting around phone 4 some news of his brother the lady is kamalavati chauhan wife of somehwar chauhan and sis of jaichand rathod,sanyogita didnot meet het bhuha bery much but only 4 or 5 in her life but she love the chauhan family as they were very caring as she heard from father soemtimes.she gather some courage and pick teh [hone to call and starts dailing the number after few min phone is picked up by a lady (kamlavati),she says inhurrines kaun hai sanyogita is not able to say anything but few min later she says"phupo mein sanyogita is kay bad who kuch nahi bol pati and started crying
"sanyogita beta kiya hau bhaya kaisay hain "says kamlavati
"pita phupo who pita ab nahi rahay who abhi abhi chal basay"says ans started crying again
kamalavti becoem like a statue she doesot response to anyithing suddenly phone is takeby her husband someshwar he ans rest if chauhan member are very king to rathid after their ignorance m"kiya hua beti sab tik tohai "says somehwar chauhan had a carness for her and her family
"phupa ji who pita nahi rahay ab "and crying agin
"he looks at her wife and turn to phone again and says "sabar se kam lo beta yeh to kabhi nahi kabhi hona hi hai har kisi kay sath ab kiya karo gay tum sab"
"abhi kuch dair mein hum ghar jayin gay aur kariya karam kaarin gay aur artiyan hindustan lay kar ayin gay pita ji ki akri icha thi yahin bahany ki
"tikhai bet aana aurt sab ka diyan rakna aur har pal ki khabar hum rakaty rahian gay"says somehswar to sanyogita and hung up the phoen and move s toward his wife
back to present
sanjam is crying now and shakes her mom"kuch bolomaa aisa maat karo khud kay sath ap bohat pyar karti thi na mamu sehumbhi kartya hain"says
kamalavti looks toward her son and hugs and start crying
sanjam removes her mom from teh hugs and turn to his father kiya karna hai ba kab ayin gay who india "
"kal ya parson tak"says someshwar ,now here envirment is also tense now
that is all 4 now shona dear next part meintime laagy ga jaani so wait everyone😉and do leaves ur comments😉

Sorry for late comment😳.Wonderful part👏.Totally emotional and romantic also.continue soon dear😳.
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: letsrockshona

nnnnnnnnnnnnnnaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii maria please update the next part

kitna suspense tumne dala...please agla update karo....mujhe prc tumhare update mein bhi parna hai.....please do the next part....do it now...u can't refuse please please..this is ur punishment for writing such a beautiful part

suspnese to hai abhi jani . i cannot refuse to any one of u i will try to update as soon as possible yar iam just very busy with job and ramazan 😳i like this punishment dear 😆😆😆i will try very soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: letsrockshona

hey maria please post the next part now...tumne itna suspense dala...please part 3 be update karo...i wanna see prc'c reaction aur mujhe uska character ke bare mein bhi parna hai....please maria post the next part aswell

i willpost it very very soon dear 😉prcki entry abhi nahi hui next part mein ho gi he is gonna be superb in reaction but simple😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: letsrockshona

aur haan the update was wonderful....and great and awesome...and mindblowing

thanks😉 so much huni i know u r waiting i promise i wonot keep u waiting long😳 thanks 4 ur beautiful comments😉

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