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maria

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Hi girls i am changing my story name dil ki baat to baatein kuch ankayi si i think this name suggest more to my story line ,i hope u all like it 😊 i am waiting 4 ur reply plz comment all of u 😉

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Niyaati Singh

@niyaati

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Posted: 16 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: maria_awan

yah dear aj shaam ko next part ajay ga so pls thora wait karo jani😉

oops..shaam tak..kk..shayad me 4-5 din baad hi padh paugi..tum plz pm kardena..kk..take care

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maria

@maria_awan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: niyaati
oops..shaam tak..kk..shayad me 4-5 din baad hi padh paugi..tum plz pm kardena..kk..take care

sorry dear mein to bhool hi gyai thi tumaray hostel kay baray mein i will do pm to u when i will updated it😉

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Megha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: maria_awan

ur welcome meghda di

Okkk jaaanuuuu any time sweetie!😳😃

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maria

@maria_awan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: rumela711926
wow v. niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee👏

thanks dear😉

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maria

@maria_awan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#46

Part 3

everyone is sad in ajmer mansion in ajmer and all of them are waiting 4 sanygita to arrive in ajmer . they are done all the preparation of kariya karam as they should not be delayed in the last ritual of person as it hurts the dead person more but one member of the family doesnot knew anything about it at all he is in delhi gone 4 some offical work as he was helping in his father business he came to delhi 4 a meeting .in meeting room a man is satnding giving presentation to clients , he is wearing balck suit looking too ht and handsome ,had a small smile on his face making him a prince of everygirl would want in her life ,the person is none othet than prithvi raj chauhan the clients are getting happy seeing the presentation done with so much effort and hard work and after the light are on the clients said yes to their project and are ready to do it with the chauhans , prithvi is too happy in his office jumping in the air after few min he thoughts of vcalling his family to tell the good news but stopped as he thought of giving them a surprise ,he went 4 some shopping buyied few toys 4 neice and neices .a beautifull sari 4 his mom , a shalwar kameez 4 his best friens and bhabi . a mobile 4 her sis and 2 suits 4 his big bro and dad ,prithvi says "sab kitna khush ho gain news sun kar aut gifts daik kar and ready to leave now

in uk in rathod mansion a few people came in and are asking 4 mrs rathod sanyogita came and say"who to so gay hain mein u nki beti hoon ap mujse baat kar saktay hain kahain kiya baat hai "

"tik hai hum pa se hi baat kar laiaty hain "one of them speaks

"daikay ap kay pita nay apne business mein ho rahay gatay ko rokanay kay liyay hum sekuch loan liya tha jo who nahi chuk pay aur aur ab to unka business bhi bohat gatay mein chal raha hai humkoo hamara paisay chiyay "said a loan distibuter

"ap logonb ko paisay kay alive kuch nahi dikta kiya kal hi unka dihant hua hai aur aj ap agay paisay magnay ,ap logon ko paisay hi kyun dikta hai har waqt kabhi kis kay jazbat ka aitram to kiya karin "says sanyogita as she is tensed after her dad death ad angry on them as they cannot wait 4 few days

"hum kiya karin madam humko jo order mila hai who humko pura karna ha warna hum apni job se hath do baitay gain "says one of them

"haan pa bhi kiyakar saktay hain kahin mujay kiy akarna hoga ab "says sanyogita giving consolnce to her self

"hum ko apkay businees aur ghar ki nilamai karni hogi aur jo paisay ayin gay unse hum pana hisab pura kar lain gay "says loan distributer

"kiya .............. nilmai...................is ghar ki ...................mera papa ka sapna................."says sanyogita couldnot comlpete her sentence and broke down from insode as this house was his dad dream house which he made from so exuctment which is now going to nilam "tik hai jo syi lagay ap who karin "says sanyogita the distributer leaves from ,she stood there 4 few min like a stautes doesnot belive what is hapeing in her life one inciedent after another .she gaves some courage and turns to go in her mom room wher she is sleepin but saw her mom standing there .tears roolling down from her eyes and says "khatma ho gaya ..............sab khatam ho gaya beta ..............humaary pass ab kuch nahi raha ................kuch nahi...............kuch nayi ............"and fell on her knees sanyogita runs to her and made her sits on near sofa and says"maa kuch nhai hua khatam mein apkay sath ho akri dum tak aur kabhi nahi jayun gi ..........haan par abhi hameinjana hoga yahan se laon chukanay hain pap ne jo lioyay thay par hum yeh sab kuch wapis hasil karin gay mein hoon na pa kay sath"

naintara hugs her and says "mujay maat chorna baita mein mar jayun gi " sanogita says "nayio maa mein ap kay stah hi rahun gi hamesha "

"maa kal milami ho gi aur kal sham ko mein india jayun gi pap ki artiyan virsajan karssijin karnay aur ap yahan ik flat mein raho gay bhai ko hostel mein parna do he is gonna do some part time job to maintn himslef now aur apkay liay kuych saving ki hain meinay pehlay hi ab unki zaruurat ap ko hogi aur ik aur baat maa ab hamara yahan koi nahi hai kyun na hum india shift ho jayin "says sanyogita

"tum sayi keh rahi ho beta ab humko india hi chalay jana chiyay par wahan kahan rahin gay humsab"says naintara

"ab mein jarahi hoon maa artiyan visarjain karnay badd kuch din to phupo kay pass ruk jayun gi uar baad mein ap ik chota sa flat dund lun gi who uncle sushant haina who meri help kar daina gay job dunnay mein infacet he has told me about one job wahan intervies dun gi aur umeed hai who job mil jay gi mujay aur phir mein ap ko aur bhai ko bhula lun gi wahan aur hum apna iknaya jahan banayin gay tik hai na maa"sasys sanyogita who is ready to take all responsibilities of her families

"jiti raho beta itna khayal tum rak rahi ho khash tumari behan bhi rakti yeh farz to uska bant tah aur who to apnay pita ka akri dafa chehra bhi nahi daiknay ayi and startes crying

"maa unko unkay haal par chor do na mein hona ap kay sath"says and makes her sleep in her room and went nears his dad pic and"pita ji mein apnay ghar ko nahi bikarnay dun gi mein sambalun gi apna ghar ko apkay sapnay ko mein hoon pita ji bas mera sath daina ap .jahan bho meray sath hoi rehna plz plz plz pita ji............."and cries 4 few min after min she started doing as she was about to leave 4 india kal ,she put her family pic of her dad.mom and bro and sis and put fe clothe and packed the bags and put them in corner and went to sleep 4 sometime

next time after the nilami is done she leaves 4 airport and before leaving he meetes his brothert and tell him to grow now bc they ahve the responsilbilty of their family and he assures he will also takecare of his family

this is it 4 now girl hope u all like it and plz comment i am waiting 4 ur replies