Baatein kuch ankahi si pt 9 on page 17 - Page 4

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

Sorry for late comment😳.Wonderful part👏.Totally emotional and romantic also.continue soon dear😳.

Originally posted by: maria_awan

sorry guys 4 keep u waiting but i am just too busy with my job here is the part 1 4 u all

Introduction:

chauhan mansion:

someshwar chauhan: father of prithvi and head of the family

kamlavti chauhan: mother of prithvi and wife of someshwar chauhan

sanjam chauhan: big bro of prithvi (very carin and loving)

Pooja sanjam chauhan:wife of sanjam(very nice and caring )

Sapna sanjam chauhan:daughter of sanjam (too cute very attach to prithvi)

sagar sanjam chauhan:son od sanjam chauhan(very naughty and very attch to prithvi)

Prithvi raj chauhan: cutest of family (very handsomeand loving dream man of every girl )

Pritha chauhan: smallest member of family(little naughty and thoar gussa wali)

Rathod mansion:

Jaichand rathod:head of family(business man cared about only profit)

Naintara rathod: wife of jaichand (little worried about her daughter future)

Khusi rathod: elder daughter of family (little proud to be marries to a rich but arrogant man)

Vijay singh:husband of khushi (very careless and manner less)

Sanyogita rathod: she is middle child of family (very diif from others ,she is very caring about love and relation ship not about money like her family and too beautifull like a princess from sky , in short dream women of any man😳)

suraj rathod: small brother of sanyo (living in hostel for his studies)

Part 1

a girl is standing out side a room waiting 4 some one to come as she was very worried 4 something but she was not alon at that she was with her mother stanf=ding with her in corridor of a hospital ,a doctor came out side and says i am very sorry but ab unkay pass time bohat kam hia ab log un se mil lain "

"nayi ap aisa nahi keh saktya kuch to karain na ap doctor "says a girl

"hum ko who ,,,,,,,,,,the women could not complete her sentence and fell down on floor the girl came to her says "maa hosla rakain warna pita ji ko kiasay samabalin gay chalain andar chalain pita ji kay paas is waqt unko hmari zaruurat hai " the girl helped the aldy to stand back and take her in the room

they enter the room and saw a man lying on the bed inconcious who had a very bad heart attck due to strees of his work and is about to die after few min thsi man is jaichand rathod ,the women crying is his wife naintara rathod and the girl who is taking care of everyone at this time is sanyogita rathod ,

both of them goes near the bed and take jaichand hand in her hands and says"dakiya hum gay hain ab ankain kholain na "

and slowly the man opne his eyes and see a his wife and daughter standing near him he calls sanyogita near him by moving his hand toward her and wuickly came and sut beside her and says "pita ji ap chinta maat karin karain mein hoon sab samal loon gi ap bsa tik ho jayin jaldi se "

the man had a beutifull and peaceful smile on his face which he lost many years ago when he starting running 4 money .he says"hum tum se bohat pyar kartay hain beta humko maaf kar daina par hum kabhi tum ko aur aonay ghar ko samay nahi day pay jo humko daina cahiay tha ,aj bhi tum is buray waqt mein hmaary sath ho jab kay yahan to kisi uar ko hona chaiyay tha indicating about hie elder daughter khushi"

"aisa baat maat kahin ap"says nainata

"kyun nah kahin sach ho to keh rahay hian aut janay se pehlay hum apnay dil ki har baat anpni is guriya se kehna chaty hain jo sab kuch manti hai hamein apna"says adn looking toward his daughter who has got tears n her eyes

he wipes those tears and says"baat anasun bayo beta hum hamesha tumaray sath rahain gay hamary jansy se pehlay tumko ik akri zimadari daina chaty hain tumary bhai ki jo abhi par raha hai "

"hum ap ki har zimadari nabayin gay par ap maat jao na pita ji "says and started crying like a kid who doesnot want to losse a toy that he loves more than himself

"hum ap se bohat pyar kartay hain aur sab ka diyan rakna "says jaichand and suddenly he start braething very fast sanyogita runns out side and calls the doctor ,the doctor came in and examine the patient and after few min jaichand rathid dies 😭😭sanyogita and naintara watching it and become like a staute

doctor tell teh truth and tehy came into their senses and started crying very badly after few hours the paid teh hospital bills and take the body home 4 akriya karam sanyogita calls her sis but the servant says she is busy with her friends in kitty party .sanyogita got angry at this and says just tell her hum aj anat ho gay hian and cuts the phones and crying thinking aj kay din bhi ap kay pass time nahi didi apnay ghar kay liya😡

in eveing they do the kariya karam

this is all 4 now hope u enjoy all

i will be waiting4 ur comments😉

Originally posted by: maria_awan

this part is specially 4 shona(as u ask me with so much love i cannot say no to my friends and sorry din meinnhai kar payi job par thi ab 12 in night karahi hoon sirf tumary liyay dear😉) and rakhi dear 😉enjoy

Part 2

in ajmer chauhan mansion is located they are the rich people of ajmer now but they are all so kind that people give their examples od their humbleness and affection they are the king of ajmer .in chauhan mansion a women is sitting in sitting room near phone as she was very tense and waiting 4 someone call.two voices came from the upper story , in that room two kids are arguing with there mother that they donot want to drink milk and the other lady is forcing them like very mother as she was saying if u drink the milk u r going to be strong like ur chachu . the kids says sachi ,a man enter the room and says "yes bilkul tumaary chachu ki traha " this man is sanjam chauhan , the lady is pooja sanjam chauhan and the kids are there one boy name as sagar sanjam chauhan and the girl name as sapna sanjam chauhan .

"arre tum dono abhi tak tayar nahi huay sachool nahi jana"says sanjam to his kids

"pita ji bas who yeh lar rahi thi mujse"says sagar (he is the big bro of sapna and alway wants her to the thing he wants)

"kiya hum nahi pita ji yeh bhaya bhi na "says sapna with innocene

"bas bas ab larna maart shuro kar do tum dono jaldi se tayr ho jayo ap kamray mein"says pooja looking toward the clock and the kids leaves from there to get ready 4 school as it was 7 in morning they have to do the breakfast and jhave to leave 4 school ,pooja went near the drawer to put the key of cupboard in drawer and saw her husband looking toward her with naughty looks in her eyes ,she smiles and tries to go from there when he grabs her hands and then grabs her in his arms and says "jaanu kahan bag rahi ho itni subha maraton jeetni hai kiya "

"pas gayi "says pooja smiling

"kiya kaha ap ne dharam patni ji"says sanjam

"janay dain na bach intazar kaary hoon gay aur koi gaya to "says pooja witha request

"anay se pehlay usay darvaza bhi kholna ho ga jaanu jo meinay band kar diya tha bachon kay jatay hi"says sanjam as he was in full mood of romance inmorning

"aj nahi chorun ga chalo jaldi se mujay"says sanjam

"kiya "with comlpete innocene as she was also is same mood now

"hay is ada par to hum jaan daity ahian pa ki "says sanjam

"ha ha chaliay bohat mazak ho gay janyo do "says pooja witha order now

"pehlay kiss do mujay "says sanjam with smile now

"nahi "says and suddenly she felt a hld od some lips on her lips after fwe min sanajm leave s her and says aj to mein jkeet gaya yeh maraton

"ab bbhi na bas "and hids her face in his husband arms and he hugs her and they fell a knock on the door and pooja opens the door and saw a beautifull girl wearing a green shalwar kurta standing there with a tense look, she is looking too beautifull she is pritha chauahn she like her bhabi alot they share a great realtion ship with each other . pooja says "kiay hua guriya "

"jaldi chalin who maa "says pritha with tears in his eyes

"kiay hau maa ko "says pooja hearing this sanjam and two of them runs down and saw hee mom is like a statue , sanjam goes nears her mom and says "kiya hua maa ap aisay kyun baiti hian"but there is no response from her , he again shkes her and says "maa hosh mein ayo maa hua kya hai" but again no response when he felt a hand on his back and looks back and saw his father standing there

"kiya hua maa ko pita ji "says sanjam woth tears in hos eyes

"who abhi abhi phone aya tah tumari phuphu ki beti ka tumaray phupa ji matlab tumaray maa kay bhai ab nahi rahy aur is wajah se tumari maa ko gehra sadma laga hai"says someshwar chauhan

Flashback:

jaichand dies in hospital ad sanyogits is crying and doctors come and says u can take the body home now 4 kariya karam , she pays teh bills and before leaving the hospital she calls her sis but she didnotcomes to the phone ansd sanyogita told the news to her servant in anger and cuts the phone , then she thinks of caling her bhuha ,here in ajmer a lady is sitting around phone 4 some news of his brother the lady is kamalavati chauhan wife of somehwar chauhan and sis of jaichand rathod,sanyogita didnot meet het bhuha bery much but only 4 or 5 in her life but she love the chauhan family as they were very caring as she heard from father soemtimes.she gather some courage and pick teh [hone to call and starts dailing the number after few min phone is picked up by a lady (kamlavati),she says inhurrines kaun hai sanyogita is not able to say anything but few min later she says"phupo mein sanyogita is kay bad who kuch nahi bol pati and started crying

"sanyogita beta kiya hau bhaya kaisay hain "says kamlavati

"pita phupo who pita ab nahi rahay who abhi abhi chal basay"says ans started crying again

kamalavti becoem like a statue she doesot response to anyithing suddenly phone is takeby her husband someshwar he ans rest if chauhan member are very king to rathid after their ignorance m"kiya hua beti sab tik tohai "says somehwar chauhan had a carness for her and her family

"phupa ji who pita nahi rahay ab "and crying agin

"he looks at her wife and turn to phone again and says "sabar se kam lo beta yeh to kabhi nahi kabhi hona hi hai har kisi kay sath ab kiya karo gay tum sab"

"abhi kuch dair mein hum ghar jayin gay aur kariya karam kaarin gay aur artiyan hindustan lay kar ayin gay pita ji ki akri icha thi yahin bahany ki

"tikhai bet aana aurt sab ka diyan rakna aur har pal ki khabar hum rakaty rahian gay"says somehswar to sanyogita and hung up the phoen and move s toward his wife

back to present

sanjam is crying now and shakes her mom"kuch bolomaa aisa maat karo khud kay sath ap bohat pyar karti thi na mamu sehumbhi kartya hain"says

kamalavti looks toward her son and hugs and start crying

sanjam removes her mom from teh hugs and turn to his father kiya karna hai ba kab ayin gay who india "

"kal ya parson tak"says someshwar ,now here envirment is also tense now

that is all 4 now shona dear next part meintime laagy ga jaani so wait everyone😉and do leaves ur comments😉

Originally posted by: maria_awan

this part is specially 4 shona(as u ask me with so much love i cannot say no to my friends and sorry din meinnhai kar payi job par thi ab 12 in night karahi hoon sirf tumary liyay dear😉) and rakhi dear 😉enjoy

Part 2

in ajmer chauhan mansion is located they are the rich people of ajmer now but they are all so kind that people give their examples od their humbleness and affection they are the king of ajmer .in chauhan mansion a women is sitting in sitting room near phone as she was very tense and waiting 4 someone call.two voices came from the upper story , in that room two kids are arguing with there mother that they donot want to drink milk and the other lady is forcing them like very mother as she was saying if u drink the milk u r going to be strong like ur chachu . the kids says sachi ,a man enter the room and says "yes bilkul tumaary chachu ki traha " this man is sanjam chauhan , the lady is pooja sanjam chauhan and the kids are there one boy name as sagar sanjam chauhan and the girl name as sapna sanjam chauhan .

"arre tum dono abhi tak tayar nahi huay sachool nahi jana"says sanjam to his kids

"pita ji bas who yeh lar rahi thi mujse"says sagar (he is the big bro of sapna and alway wants her to the thing he wants)

"kiya hum nahi pita ji yeh bhaya bhi na "says sapna with innocene

"bas bas ab larna maart shuro kar do tum dono jaldi se tayr ho jayo ap kamray mein"says pooja looking toward the clock and the kids leaves from there to get ready 4 school as it was 7 in morning they have to do the breakfast and jhave to leave 4 school ,pooja went near the drawer to put the key of cupboard in drawer and saw her husband looking toward her with naughty looks in her eyes ,she smiles and tries to go from there when he grabs her hands and then grabs her in his arms and says "jaanu kahan bag rahi ho itni subha maraton jeetni hai kiya "

"pas gayi "says pooja smiling

"kiya kaha ap ne dharam patni ji"says sanjam

"janay dain na bach intazar kaary hoon gay aur koi gaya to "says pooja witha request

"anay se pehlay usay darvaza bhi kholna ho ga jaanu jo meinay band kar diya tha bachon kay jatay hi"says sanjam as he was in full mood of romance inmorning

"aj nahi chorun ga chalo jaldi se mujay"says sanjam

"kiya "with comlpete innocene as she was also is same mood now

"hay is ada par to hum jaan daity ahian pa ki "says sanjam

"ha ha chaliay bohat mazak ho gay janyo do "says pooja witha order now

"pehlay kiss do mujay "says sanjam with smile now

"nahi "says and suddenly she felt a hld od some lips on her lips after fwe min sanajm leave s her and says aj to mein jkeet gaya yeh maraton

"ab bbhi na bas "and hids her face in his husband arms and he hugs her and they fell a knock on the door and pooja opens the door and saw a beautifull girl wearing a green shalwar kurta standing there with a tense look, she is looking too beautifull she is pritha chauahn she like her bhabi alot they share a great realtion ship with each other . pooja says "kiay hua guriya "

"jaldi chalin who maa "says pritha with tears in his eyes

"kiay hau maa ko "says pooja hearing this sanjam and two of them runs down and saw hee mom is like a statue , sanjam goes nears her mom and says "kiya hua maa ap aisay kyun baiti hian"but there is no response from her , he again shkes her and says "maa hosh mein ayo maa hua kya hai" but again no response when he felt a hand on his back and looks back and saw his father standing there

"kiya hua maa ko pita ji "says sanjam woth tears in hos eyes

"who abhi abhi phone aya tah tumari phuphu ki beti ka tumaray phupa ji matlab tumaray maa kay bhai ab nahi rahy aur is wajah se tumari maa ko gehra sadma laga hai"says someshwar chauhan

Flashback:

jaichand dies in hospital ad sanyogits is crying and doctors come and says u can take the body home now 4 kariya karam , she pays teh bills and before leaving the hospital she calls her sis but she didnotcomes to the phone ansd sanyogita told the news to her servant in anger and cuts the phone , then she thinks of caling her bhuha ,here in ajmer a lady is sitting around phone 4 some news of his brother the lady is kamalavati chauhan wife of somehwar chauhan and sis of jaichand rathod,sanyogita didnot meet het bhuha bery much but only 4 or 5 in her life but she love the chauhan family as they were very caring as she heard from father soemtimes.she gather some courage and pick teh [hone to call and starts dailing the number after few min phone is picked up by a lady (kamlavati),she says inhurrines kaun hai sanyogita is not able to say anything but few min later she says"phupo mein sanyogita is kay bad who kuch nahi bol pati and started crying

"sanyogita beta kiya hau bhaya kaisay hain "says kamlavati

"pita phupo who pita ab nahi rahay who abhi abhi chal basay"says ans started crying again

kamalavti becoem like a statue she doesot response to anyithing suddenly phone is takeby her husband someshwar he ans rest if chauhan member are very king to rathid after their ignorance m"kiya hua beti sab tik tohai "says somehwar chauhan had a carness for her and her family

"phupa ji who pita nahi rahay ab "and crying agin

"he looks at her wife and turn to phone again and says "sabar se kam lo beta yeh to kabhi nahi kabhi hona hi hai har kisi kay sath ab kiya karo gay tum sab"

"abhi kuch dair mein hum ghar jayin gay aur kariya karam kaarin gay aur artiyan hindustan lay kar ayin gay pita ji ki akri icha thi yahin bahany ki

"tikhai bet aana aurt sab ka diyan rakna aur har pal ki khabar hum rakaty rahian gay"says somehswar to sanyogita and hung up the phoen and move s toward his wife

back to present

sanjam is crying now and shakes her mom"kuch bolomaa aisa maat karo khud kay sath ap bohat pyar karti thi na mamu sehumbhi kartya hain"says

kamalavti looks toward her son and hugs and start crying

sanjam removes her mom from teh hugs and turn to his father kiya karna hai ba kab ayin gay who india "

"kal ya parson tak"says someshwar ,now here envirment is also tense now

that is all 4 now shona dear next part meintime laagy ga jaani so wait everyone😉and do leaves ur comments😉

Originally posted by: meghaparti

Thanks for the lovely update dear!😳😃😉👏⭐️

Originally posted by: meghaparti

Thanks a ton for the update will have to add all ur new fanfics maria dear!😳😃⭐️

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

awesome dear! lovedi t!

Originally posted by: anasrashid_fan

wow superb part maria di...........loved the romance betn sanjam n pooja😳............waiitng for PRC's entry😉😉

full2 mast ud maria.................................ahh..jaldi se prithvi k entry karo...

Originally posted by: niyaati

full2 mast ud maria.................................ahh..jaldi se prithvi k entry karo...