FF:Kar Le Mohabbath!NEW- pt-66,67,68,69 pg-94 - Page 18

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Cara86

Brilliant Shumi 👏 👏👏 thanks Cara 😃I just love how Krish and Prats r beginning to have feelings for one another but are unable to understand them ..thanks for liking it.you are right they started feeling for each other but unable to express........ can't wait to see their how their story unfolds !!! 😳... wait for two more up dates...i will unfold it in 19th and 20th update.😉why do i get the feeling we're in for a rollercoaster ride with these two 😆...you are 100% right...rollercoaster ride is ahead😉


And i wholeheartedly agree with SS when he says to Krish..."..she may be a millionaire,but you are one in million...😃'...tru na?

Can't wait for your next update 🤗will try to up date today inshallah 😃
And my name is Cara😉 oh! so sweet😛...i like it.😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
bohut ho gaya lucky ki kahani ab kriya romance chahiye.....chalbo😆
great writing...............continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
PART-17

next day monday,a very busy day:

pratigya woke up around 7am, soon looked beside and found the place empty , looked around and felt as if the whole bed room was empty and haunted with pin drop silent, no sign of krishna.she sat on the bed for a while with random and confused thoughts,and then got down from her bed.'...ouch...'still she had pain in her ankle.'with this pain i don't think i can go to office' she decided to stay at home.

around 8am her cell phone rang.it was his advocate Haricharndar(😆....)

pratigya:'haan boliyeh...mai pratigya...'

Harichandar:'ma'am aaj dus bhajay sunaaye hai...'

pratigya:'yah...i remember that, but i cannot come,please postponed it to some other day...'

Harichandar:'teek hai...i will do that...'

pratigya:'one more thing i don't want to drag this case for years ,transfer this case to fast track ...'

Harichandar:'ji...i will...'he obliged.


pratigya:'yeh advocates bhi na...' while disconnecting the phone with irritation she saw some one hiding and standing beside her bedroom door.

pratigya:'who is that?...koon hai...?😕' she went limping to the door and saw lucky standing beside the door hugging walkie talkie with one hand, putting his head down trying not to show his face and not look at her.his posture instantly made pratigya feel sorry for him.

pratigya:'oh!...thum?😊...'

lucky:'LUCKY....'he whispered.

pratigya:'haan ...LUCKY...ander awo...😊'

lucky:😒....he shook his head side way as a sign of NO.she understood that he is scared of her.

pratigya:'kya chahiyeh...? chocolate?😃'she bend down and asked him.

lucky:'dost....' he pointed his finger inside her room.

pratigya:'...oh!..wo office gayeh hai...😃'


lucky:😕 😔...

pratigya:'mai thumari dost bansak thi hun...dosti karogay muchse? 😃' she bend down and gave a friendly smile at him

lucky:'nahi...😒...he slapped with his little soft palm on her face... right on her nose and ran away.this time she didnot get angry with him.for the past four years she was neglecting,abusing and yelling at him. she understood that it is not as easy as krishna for her to make friendship with him.

around 4pm.

krishna took Madhura road and reached his apartment.while naina opened the door rolli was sitting on the sofa watching TV and enjoying the magi noodles.

rolli:'bhaiya....😃'she tried to jump down from the sofa.

krishna:'don't leave your food,i am coming...😊'he went and sat beside her.

soon naina came with hot streaming tea.while drinking tea krishna remove bunch of 1000 rupees from a white fat envelope and gave it to naina.it is nothing but his salary.

naina:'salary!?.😕...krishna you are married now...yeh thumari patni ka haq hai'

krishna:'i know that.but iss ki wahaan zaroori nahi hai...'

naina:'that doesn't mean...Disapprove'he did not allow her to complete.

krishna:'yeh srif one third of my salary.koi maane na maane,samjay ya na samjay...yeh thumara haq hai....'

naina:'krishna...wo...Disapprove'she was still heisted to take it from him.he kept the bills in her hand by force.
he left his apartment around 8m after his dinner with naina and rolli and reached pratigya nivas around 9pm.sajjan was sitting with nanima and pratigya in the main hall.

sajjan:'we were waiting for you...😃'

krishna:'thanks😊...kya lucky sogaya?...' he went and sat beside nanima.

sajjan:'shaayad...badi mushkil se.bahuth thang kartha hai.issi leyeh koi governess ruk thi nahi hai...'
krishna:'dad aap bura na maane tho...i would like to suggest you..😕' pratigya looked at him irritatingly thinking in her mind 'ab kya naya nautangi karne wala hai?....'

sajjan:'maine thumai beta maana hai.fir bura kyun?...😊'

krishna:'i think we have to put him in a school.this is the age for him to go to school.he should mingle with his age group children...'

nanima:'thum ne such kaha.yeh sooch tho hamare dhimaag mai aaye nahi...'

sajjan:'soon i will look in to some special school for him...😊'
krishna:'special school kyun?...😕'he raised his eyebrow.

sajjan:'krishna you know about his mental illness...'

krishna:'dad issa kuch nahi hai.he is perfect.he just lack love,parental care and affection.thum logonki nefrath ne ussko depress kar thiya hai...you people are doing injustice to him...' his words brought tears in sajjan eyes.

sajjan:'thum such kaharahay ho...shakti's unbearable behavior and keser's unexpected death made us to behave so...😭'he wiped his brimming tears before it could fall on his cheek.

krishna:'lucky ko kyun thoshi maan rahay ho? issmai lucky ka kya kusoor hai dad?...' he consoled and convinced him.

even though pratigya was reluctant to look at him she was listening to him ,it made pratigya too to realize about lucky.

krishna:'nanima yeh raklo...😊' he took a white fat envelope from his pocket and gave it to her.

nanima:'kya hai...?😕' she asked looking at him surprisingly.

krishna:'nanima...this is part of my salary....😊'

nanima:😲 thanqha! '

krishna:'aap yeh ghar ki senior member hai...' he stopped looking tears at her eyes.

nanima:'aaj thak jo kisine nahi kiya wo thum ne kiya.yeh mere leyeh bahuth bada samman hai...😭'

krishna:'issa kuch nahi hai... you deserve this...😃'he hugged her by her shoulder.

sajjan:' krishna iss ki kya zaroori hai ?...😕'

krishna:'dad... it is the responsibility of a husband to feed his wife and full fill her desire...'mai nahi chahatha mai ya meri patni doosron kay paise par jiyeh.'
sajjan:'i am proud of you krishna...😃'

nanima:'thumari maa ne thumai bahuth achchi sanskaar di hai...😊'
krishna:😊

sajjan:'krishna thum bura na maano tho i have a suggestion...'

krishna:'not at all...

sajjan:thum hamari company join karlo...😊'

krishna:'nahi...😒'he refused immediately in a single word.
sajjan:😕

krishna:'i am sorry.i have worked hard to get this job from KG to IIT. in this workshop my father was working as a low grade technician.now i am an executive and gazetted officer there.this job is my father's dream.i can't leave this....'

sajjan:'😔....but you won't be paid what you deserve isn't it?...'

krishna:'srif paise hi sab kuch nahi hota dad.i am working for central government and i am proud to work for my country...i enjoy doing my work and very happy with my job...'

krishna:'rahi paisoon ki baat,in addition to my basic salary i get DA(dearness allowance),CCA(city compensatory allowance),HRA (house rent allowance) paid leave,pensionary benefit, free AC coach train pass all over india,free medical,free schooling and many more benefits...sufficient enough to keep my wife and children very happy...😃'he said looking at pratigya.

' no doubt he is very very smart.he is fooling around with his sugar coating words.😡...for sure he has some plans behind all his goody goody behavior.i am not a fool to fall for him....😡' pratigya revised about krishna in her head.
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Posted: 14 years ago
PART-18
while krishna sajjan and nanima were discussing about krishna joing their office pratigya left the hall annoyingly as if she don't want to hear nonsense.while walking she felt the slight pain in her ankle.she went to her bed room took crepe bandage roll from the first aid box,went and sat on the bed.while she was trying to wrap around her ankle krishna entered her room.without caring to look at her he went straight to wash room and came back in gray cotton khadi kurta and pyjama ,wiping his wet face with white turkey towel.while wiping he noticed pratigya was struggling with crepe bandage and her ankle.first she wrapped it very tightly, removed tried again,this time it was very loose,tried again failed again.tried again and again failed again and again.she looked at krishna.he did not care to look at her. slide on the bed lied side way showing his back to her,closed his eyes and started sleeping.helpless and annoyed pratigya threw the crepe bandage on the other side of the bed and went to sleep.

next day morning pratigya woke up when jugnu brought bed tea for her.she sat on the bed to drink tea and noticed the crepe bandage which she threw on the bed was very neatly wrapped around her ankle. immediate she looked beside her and found the place empty.she kept the tea cup beside her on the bed and gently touched the bandage with passion, automatically a wide smile spread on her face .'mai ithna kyun kush ho rahi hun?
😕.....why i am feeling so happy 😕'she was confused.she got down from the bed and felt no pain in her ankle.she was able to carry on her routine work with out pain.

it was Wednesday.
as usual when pratigya woke up from the bed she looked beside her, surprised to see krishna still sleeping.she could not believe her eyes .with both her hands she rubbed her eyes and looked again,she found him sleeping.

'am i dreaming?....😲'she looked at him surprisingly.he slightly got disturbed and turned towards her in his sleep.'no i am not dreaming...'she confirmed herself.

'thabiyath tho teek hai?' she moved close to him bend down and slowly slide her hand on his neck to check his temperature.

'AAAHHH!!!...
😲' with a scream he woke up and jumped on the bed.

pratigya:
😲... got freaked and moved backward.

krishna:'what are you doing????
😲....'he touched his own neck here and there and checked.

pratigya:'wo...mai...'

krishna:'mera muder karne chahathi ho????😡...'

pratigya:'mai....mai...
😕'

krishna:'mai mai kya?😡'

pratigya:'thumara....aapppkaa...temperature check kar rahi thi?'

krishna:'temperature kyun?😡'

pratigya:'maine soocha aap ka thabiyath kharaab hai...😕'

krishna:'...argh!...😡...thumara dhimaag kharaab hai😡...uuufff...😡'

pratigya:'sorry....
'.

krishna:'mere achchi khaasi dream kharaab karthi....katrina kaif nahaarahi thi 😍😳..'

pratigya:'ewww....'

krishna:'what ewww?!...😡? LUX ka ad tha...'

krishna:'waise...mera duty shift timing change hoga ya hai.3pm to 11pm...' he said to himself loudly and started sleeping again.krishna changed his duty timing from 3pm to 11pm for the sake of lucky.
when he again woke up it was around 10am.as soon as krishna got ready he went to lucky's room.while he was about to enter one part of walkie talkie was thrown out of the room,came rolling and fall near his leg.

krishna:'lucky...kyun faynkdi...😕?'he bend down and took it in his hand.

lucky:'muchay nahi chahe yeh?'he said playing with other toy .

krishna:'kyun?'he went and sat beside him.

lucky:'mai kithne baar bula raha tha iss walkie talkie pe...thum ek baar bhi jawaab nahi di...'

krishna:'oh! i am sorry
...mai gharpe nahi rahatha huna...iss leyeh...'

lucky:😔

krishna:'ab jalthi se thaiyaar ho jao.we will go out...😊'he told piyassia to make him ready and went down to talk to sajjan.as already krishna told him about's lucky's school admission sajjan was ready with lucky's date of birth certificate and immunization records.

sajjan and krishna took lucky to a near by primary school.

lucky:'yeh kya hai?...😕'he asked while getting down from the car.

krishna:'yeh school hai...'

lucky:'skool...!😕..kya skool?'

krishna:'yahaan thumare jaise bachchay khayl thay aur padaayi kar thay hai.thumai bhi karni hai...😃'

lucky: muchay bhi yahaan khayl ni hai!!...😛'

krishna:😊

they took him to the principal,explained about him and requested her to give him extra care, attention and affection.principal agreed to them because it is a fast growing, very small primary school with a class strength of maximum 15 to 20 students. they need students from rich family to develop their school.sajjan gave a cheque for a fat amount towards the establishment fund to the school.

they back home with new school bag,water bag,pencil case,pencil eraser, KG books,uniform with shoe,tie, school badge etc etc etc.lucky was excited with all those things.these are all very new things in lucky's life.

next day morning with the help of piyassia krishna made lucky to get ready to go to school.he was looking so cute with pure white shirt and gray shorts.krishna helped lucky to hang school bag on his back,water bottle around his neck.

krishna:'chalo ab...😊'he brought him down where sajjan,nanima were sitting.

krishna:'bye bolo nanaji ko...😊' he told lucky.

lucky:'bye...😃'he waved his hand. sajjan got up from his seat came close to lucky.

sajjan:'aaj mai bahuth kush hun...😃..hamara lucky school jaraha hai...😛'he bend down and kissed on his cheek and looked at krishna with gratitude.

krishna:'nanima ko bhi bye bolo...😊'

lucky:'bye...😃' he waved his hand. when they were about to go lucky saw pratigya coming down from the steps.

luck:'aunty ko bhi bye boloon?...😃'he raised his head looked at krishna for permission.

krishna:'ummmm...' he permitted.

lucky:'bye...😊 he waved his hand to her.


pratigya:'bye...😃'she waved back to him. when she saw lucky in school uniform she can not resist her self to marvel krishna. she secretly appreciated and admired krishna in her mind without showing it on her face.
after saying bye to every one including jugnu he went to school with krishna by yamaha.whole pratigya nivas stood still with tears looking at little lucky going to school in his uniform.
PS:girls my next up date will have krishna facing angad !😉 going to be most exciting part with kriya romance😳...don't miss it ...😆😉
Edited by shumi. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: serialmaniac

bohut ho gaya lucky ki kahani ab kriya romance chahiye.....chalbo😆

hahahaha....😆great writing......umm hum thanks😃.........continue soon up dated dear😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
Dear Shumi, I am deeply touched by your kind words.... thank you so much 😃 It's good to be back , believe me i missed you a lot..... and i just couldn't resist the temptation to read your latest chapters....it was brillant Shumi !!!! I almost forgot my pain for a moment .....loved all the parts with krishna and lucky infact i was crying so much while reading that i had to read it twice to understand it better....indeed krish is a precious jewel to the Singh family a true kohinoor !!!! whenever you introduced a child character in your ff it's always a hit and now i am waiting eagerly angad in the next part.... Lub you for this tremendous story⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
Krishna facing angad.............sounds intrestiong..........jaldi mere sabar kaa band toot jayega.....mujhe angad chahiye.....mera angu😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
shumi dii i want more of kriya romance .please reduce this lucky part and update sooon😊
Edited by surbhisachwani - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
krishna's dream........katrina naha ri ti........LUX ad..........🤣🤣🤣
this kriya is becoming more n more cute after every update.........😃
lucky is finally going to school...........kudos to krish for doing that.....👏
pratz is falling for krish n she will have to accept it soon........😆 SS n nanima r really sweet.......😛 n next update kriya romance n angad faco-off....wow😃 have i ever missed ur update...😉
shumi ur superb, marvellous, mind-blowing, awesome, world-class n the BEST writer........⭐️ lub u dear........🤗

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