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Posted: 14 years ago
Beautiful chapters Shumi 👏👏👏 ... i wanna give u a hug for writing such beautiful scenes 🤗

Just so sweet the way Krish was able to understand and help Lucky ! And i loved the walkie talkie gift... just perfect. 😃
Seriously i'm in love with this Krish already... can't wait for Prats to start falling for him!😉

And i'm really loving this father/son bond thats slowly growing btw Sajan and Krish too...very touching!
Again your writing is just brilliant and i can't wait to read your next installments ! 😃



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Posted: 14 years ago
please updateeeeeeee soon waiting for your daily dose of 2 chapters
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Posted: 14 years ago
Assalam Shumi, sorry for missing your latest chapters, actually my khala jaan passed away on monday morning so i'll be a little busy during the next few days but as soon as i am free will definitely comment. By the way thanks for the compliment .. it was very sweet of you! Allahafiz!
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Originally posted by: shefads

Assalam Shumi, walikum salam shehnaz...😊sorry for missing your latest chapters, actually my khala jaan passed away on monday morning oh! ...Inna Lilahi wa Ina ilayhi rajioon...may her soul rest in peace 😃...may Allah give strength to you and her family members to withstand her lost.so i'll be a little busy during the next few days but as soon as i am free will definitely comment. no problem at all 😊take your time.personal life is very much important than all these things...By the way thanks for the compliment .. it was very sweet of you! it is my pleasure dear...😃 Allahafiz!Allahafiz!

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Originally posted by: surbhisachwani

please updateeeeeeee soon i will sweety today i will inshallah 😃waiting for your daily dose of 2 chapters sure...two parts today ok?😃

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Originally posted by: aleena1

Shummmmmmmmmmmmmmiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii di😆

aleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeen😆 😆 😆
Just absolutely lubbbeddddddddd these last 2 chapters thank dear 😃👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ lub u 😛
...... Krishna is so sweet.... adorable and caring😍 exactly...😛Just lubbed how he took care of lucky.....thanks for liking the character sketch😃... all he wanted was love, attention and care.... thats what he was craving for. yep...poor kid..I really liked it when he asked Krishna to be his dad.... aaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...sweet na...at the same time feel sorry for that kis...dieinf to have mom and dad
Update soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz....today inshallah 😃 Keep it up👍🏼 thanks😃

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Originally posted by: Cara86

Beautiful chapters Shumi 👏👏👏 ...thanks dear...btw may i know your good name please...😃 i wanna give u a hug for writing such beautiful scenes 🤗 aw so sweet of you....🤗🤗🤗

Just so sweet the way Krish was able to understand and help Lucky ! And i loved the walkie talkie gift... just perfect. 😃...thanks for liking it dear...😃
Seriously i'm in love with this Krish already...thanks for liking my character sketch 😃 can't wait for Prats to start falling for him!😉...soon soon very soon😉
And i'm really loving this father/son bond thats slowly growing btw Sajan and Krish too...very touching! yep...thanks 😃
Again your writing is just brilliant aw...i am impressed 😃...thanks for your compliment 😃and i can't wait to read your next installments ! 😃...will up date today inshallah 😃



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PART-15

after the fun filled dinner, krishna and lucky were holding their hands and climbing the steps to go to their room.pratigya was climbing behind them leaving gap of few steps in between them.instead of watching her feet she was looking at krishna and lucky while climbing.

pratigya:'...ouch....' unexpectedly her leg twisted and slipped, tumbled two to three steps down.she quickly hold the side wall of the stairs as a support and manage herself to stand.krishna and lucky turned back and looked at her.

krishna:'chalo...'with out caring her he went ahead with lucky.

lucky:'aunty girgaye...😕'

krishna:'wo sambhal layge.bachchi thodi na hai...?😊'he said reluctantly

pratigya:'😡 ...she tried to climb up.but could not.'AAAHHHH...'she yelled with pain.by that time krishna and lucky reached the top.
krishna:'go to your room ....' krishna left lucky's hand.lucky ran towards his room.after sending lucky krishna turned back and looked at pratigya.she was still struggling to claim the steps.he stood looking at her for a second and went down few steps towards her.he extended his hand for her to hold.but she did not.she turned her face away.

krishna:...he shook his shoulder and went back.

pratigya:'OOOUUUCHHH...'she tried ,but cannot step up a single step.

krishna:'kaka...'he called jugnu.

jugnu:'ji saab...😊' he came to his help.he was standing in the hall looking at krishna and pratigya.

krishna:'ma'am saab ki madath karo...'

jugnu:'ji saab...😃'he claimed up the stairs.

pratigya turned back and looked at
jugnu kaka.he was looking like a white lizard.from the distance itself she can smell onion and garlic from him, for a fraction of a moment a scene of jugnu carrying pratigya in his arms with a wide grin on his face...climbing the steps flashed in her mind...

pratigya:'eewww...aawweee...'she screamed with pain and disgust.krishna turn back,again neglected her and about to go,pratigya leaned forward and tried to hold him.as the distance between them was more she was able to hold his
kurta near his hip, she grabbed it tightly.krishna took a sharp turn and looked at her.pratigya was standing two steps below looking at him with a plead in her eyes.
krishna:😊...with a smile krishna step down and hold her upper arm and supported her to walk.

by holding his shoulder she tried her level best to raise her leg but failed.she did not expect this simple slip can cause such an acute pain in her angle.she raised her face and looked at him with pain.he understood her pain from her expression and slidded his arms from her back around her waist to give her more support to claim.instead of giving support he made her more weak.his warm arm around her waist created storm inside her stomach.krishna was wearing a thin soft white malmal kurta pajama while she was wearing a dark blue satin long night wear.
krishna was stunned to feel roller coaster emotion with him.' muchay kya ho rahai? issa kyun ho raha hai?what is wrong with me? 😕 ' he was confused with countless doubts.she could feel his emotions by his unsteady fingers on her stomach.for both of them it was their first feeling.her satin gown made her slip from his hold.both of them don't want to loose their hold,they gather their energy and reached the top step.that was her last step.she slipped from his unsteady hold and sat down on the floor.

krishna:'utto....'he said controlling his feelings and his physical responsiveness towards her,gave his hand to support her again.she tried again to get up holding his hand, before she could realize she was in his both the arms.he carried her towards her bed room.he hold her more close to him with more care.she want to refuse him but became speechless.

krishna:'thum khati bohuth ho😊....sow dosow kiloki tho hogi...
' he mocked her to reduced her embarrassment.

pratigya:'😡....without saying any thing she hold his malmal kurta near his neck tightly.

krishna:'i have very few... countable number of dress.i don't want you to tare my kurta...😊'he smiled looking at her tight hold in between his neck and chest.

pratigya:'😡...'immediately she left her hold and felt that she is going to fall from his arms. quickly she put her hand around his neck for support.

krishna:'this is better...😉 😛' he walked in to her bedroom and placed her on the bed.

krishna:'you can leave my neck...😊' he said with a sarcastic smile looking at pratigya still hanging around his neck as if unwilling to leave.

pratigya:' 😊...AAAHHH....'she took her hands from him ,sat in the middle of the bed and tried to stretch her leg.

krishna left her and went out to lucky's room, came back with sprain ointment and crepe bandage from kiran.he came to pratigya and sat beside her on the bed.he tried to hold her leg.she pulled back her leg with hesitation. he again he tried....she moved again.... he tried again....she moved back again....krishna got annoyed.

krishna:'mai thumai rape nahi karne wala...😡'he criticize
annoyingly .

pratigya:'kya!!!😲 😡..U.....'

before she could come out of her shock and realize the things krishna pushed her gown up above her ankle. it went up more than necessary.she shrunk her face and bit her lower lip . her both the hands hold the bed spread tightly.

krishna:'😊...he looked at her funny face with a smile.he raised his kurta's sleeve ,quickly and gently applied the ointment on her fair smooth leg,bandaged around her right ankle together with little portion of her foot.he tenderly pressed her foot to fix the bandage and gave the finishing touch up.

pratigya looked at him the way he was bandaging her.his few days stubble face was very close to her knee,as it was about to rub on her knee. she can feel his warm breath on her knee.he was looking down and keenly concentrating in bandaging her.while he was doing so he remember the day arushi trying to help him with hot water bag,a wide smile spread on his face. pratigya dazed at his fair dimple cheek with charming smile. for a nano second she was disillusioned.'am i admiring him?😲...impossible....😲'she was astonished.

krishna:'kissi ne madath ki tho thanks khana chahiye...😊' he brought back to her sense.she looked at the neatly tied bandage and krishna staring and sitting beside her with a smile.

pratigya:'tha...thankkksss...😊' she said mechanically.

krishna:'waise bhi thum ahkal ki tho ho hi kachi, par shakal se wothni buri nahi ho...mere leyeh chalega...😉'he winked at her intentionally.

pratigya:😡 😲

krishna:...thanks for marring me...😉' again he winked at her.

pratigya:'😲
...'she sat on the bed speechless.

after bandaging her he prepared him self to sleep,adjusted the pillows and lied on the bed.
pratigya:'😲..... are you going to sleep with me...?😕'she said looking at him.

krishna:'wow...that will be fantastic...😉'he tried to get up.

pratigya:'😡
...chee chee...are you crazy?😡....i don't mean that...😡'

krishna:'i don't mind that...😉' he giggled at her.

pratigya:'U...😡...i mean are you going to sleep on the bed...😡'

krishna:'obviously...Do'h!
...😛' he went back to sleep.

pratigya:'why don't you lie on the sofa?...'she said looking at the sofa on her left hand side.

krishna:'sofa! 😕...no...it is uncomfortable for me.my body aches if i sleep on it. more over i have the habit of sleeping on the bed..'he pulled up the quilt and covered himself as if he don't want to discuss further in that regard.

pratigya:'don't take my quilt...'she said hastily hiding her anger.

krishna:'omg!...i cannot sleep without covering...'

pratigya:'i too cannot sleep with out covering...'she did not want to give up.

krishna:'that is your problem...' he turned other side.

pratigya:'it is my quilt...'

krishna:'so?...' he turned towards her and raised his eyebrows.

pratigya:'i don't like to share with you...'she said bluntly.

he kept quit for a moment.looked at pratigya continuously for few seconds .

krishna:'fine...'he moved the quilt from him, pushed it towards her,without any anger or tention he turned to the other side showing his back to her and started sleeping.

when he gave the quilt back pratigya slowly pulled it towards her and gathered on her lap.he looked at krishna's back.suddenly a feeling of unhappiness stuck her.'why i am not feeling happy when he gave back the quilt?...😕,why i don't feel it as my victory?'she don't understand herself.

pratigya slowly stretched her leg and lied on the bed.she could not resist herself thinking about him '...to hurt him,to tease him,to degrade him,to disgrace him... was my intention.that is why i married him.but now why i don't get any satisfaction if i try to do so.what ever...it is all because he is acting smart. i am not going to get cheated.i married him to take revenge.i will not leave him...😡'she closed her eyes and tried to sleep.

on the other side krishna closed his eyes and tried to find answers for his doubts.'why i don't like to argue with her.why i am feeling bad when ever i argue with her?😕' he was utterly confused.
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PART-16

next day sunday,yet another lazy and fun day in pratigya nivas.pratigya woke up very late around 9am.as soon as she woke up involuntarily she checked the other side of the bed and found empty.she breathed a sigh of relief and sat relaxing for some time .after few minutes she tried to get down from the bed and felt the pain in her ankle.she bend down and looked at the crepe bandage around her ankle which reminded her the whole incidence of yesterday in one go.the feeling for him ran deeper in to her spin.she shook her head with disapproval to herself ,slowly went limping to wash room ,refreshed herself and came down for break fast.she was surprised to see dinning table was empty.

pratigya:'kaka kya sab log abhithak sorahay hai...?😕'

jugnu:'nahi tho?'

pratigya:'tho...😕'

jugnu:'sab log ne breakfast karli...'

pratigya:'kya!😲..breakfast karli...?😡'she was surprised,on sundays singh family sits together for breakfast.what was wrong today? they left her and had their break fast. it never happened before in pratigya nivas.she realized things were changing after krishna entered pratigya nivas.she smashed the soft corner popped up yesterday towards him,a acute pain shot up from her empty stomach and stuck in to her throat.while she was about to spit her anger jugnu interrupted...

jugnu:'krishna saab ne aap ko breakfast room par serve karne kay leyeh kaha tha.....😕'he tried to explain.

pratigya:'yahaan mera chaltha hai.😡 maalkin mai hun ya wo????😡...'she blast at him.her scream echoed and made sajjan and nanima rush to dinning hall.

sajjan:'pratigya...are you ok?😕 krishna told that you sprained your leg.'
pratigya:😡
sajjan:'we thought of sending the break fast to your room...'he tried to convince her.
pratigya:'ab tho mai aagaye hun na ...serve karo...😡'she said to jugnu.her voice was yet to cool down.

nanima:'khama khama kyun chilla rahi ho...😔'

pratigya:'kyun ki mai paagal hoga ye hun...bas...😡'she stuffed the food in her mouth.

krishna:'kya hua kaka?...😊'he came casually to the dinning table with lucky.

kaka:'wo...pratigyaji...ko akaylay mai breakfast...😕'he understood what pratigya wants.

krishna:'ithnise baath?...nanaima aap baiteyeh aur dad aap bhi...😊'he told them to sit for the breakfast again.

sajjan:'krishna thum bhi na...just now we had our breakfast...'

krishna:'dad...come on...aap ki beti ki mann rakne kay leyeh inthna bhi kar nahi sakthay...'he forced him to sit.

krishna:'lucky thum yahaa baito...'he made him to sit in his small chair.

lucky:'nahi...muchay nahi khani hai...'he shook his head side ways quickly.

krishna:'thumai cheese puffs pasand hai na...😊?'

lucky:'ummm...😛'

krishna:'kaka...give cheese puffs to lucky,milk shake to dad ,hot milk tea to me and nanima...'he said in one go and looked at pratigya.she locked eyes with him ,with bubbling desperation inside her.he coolly took his seat beside lucky with a triumphant smile creeping across his face.
'mera sooch aaj kal kyun ghalath horaha hai?.kyun har waqth mai ghalath saabith horahi hun? all because of him.i cannot take this any more...😡' heat pooled in her belly.

sajjan:'patha nahi aaj kal kyun ajeeb se behave kar rahi hai yeh?😕...'he worried.

pratigya was still keeping her face long and eating her breakfast.

krishna:'if you people don't mind, with your permission i would like to take out lucky with me...😊'he said while feeding cheese puffs to lucky.he want to distract them too.

sajjan:'kahan jarahay ho thum dono...?'

krishna:'maa kay paas😊.wahan rolli hogi.shaayad lucky ko achcha lagay ga...'

sajjan:'zaroor...i wish you to take pratigya too soon...😃'

sajjan:'dad...mera Byson isse waise log ko nahi bitha tha hai.akksar nakchadi ladkiyon ko...😉'he tried to make the situation easier

pratigya:😡

sajjan:'🤣......such mai pratigya kay leyeh thum perfect groom ho😃...she may be a millionaire,but you are one in million...😃'

pratigya:😡

krishna:'🤣...thanks...😃'he went out smiling with lucky.

he went to the parking and made lucky to sit in front of his yamaha.

krishna:'yeh handle ko kaskay pakad na ,either wother hillna ya thayk na maat...teek hai...'

lucky:'achcha...😃'first time he was riding on the bike.via Mathura road he took him to his apartment.lucky enjoyed the whole ride thoroughly.

lucky:'kyun rukaa thi?...'he asked when krishna parked the yamaha.

krishna:'chalo andher...'he took him to his house

naina and rolli invited them with a smile.

naina:'aray wa...kith na pyaara bachcha hai😛...koon hai?...'

krishna:'maa...i will tell you...rolli issko thumare toys thikhawo...😊'he tried to send lucky with her.

lucky:'nahi muchay nahi chahi yeh...'he hold his finger tightly and bluntly refused.

krishna:'lucky...yeh thumari dost hai...'he went and sat in the sofa and made lucky to sit beside him.

naina:'just a minute,i will bring some refreshments...😊'in spite of krishna's refusal she went in and brought some snacks for them.rolli went and brought ice candy from the freezer.

krishna:'wow...ice candy...😛,my lucky loves that...lucky...lelo...😛'lucky cannot resist him and took it from her.

lucky:'yeh koon hai...?😕'he aked krishna while licking the candy.

krishna:'ye meri maa hai...😃'

lucky:'thumai maa hai????😕' his question shook krishna and tears brimmed in his eyes.

naina:'why he is asking so?...😕' she could not understand.

with out lucky's notice krishna told naina in sign that he don't have mother and he explained about lucky's father and mother partially in action rest in low voice.

naina:'yeah bhagwaan!😲 ' while krishna and naina were speaking lucky threw the left out candy on rolli.

rolli:'😲...😭...bhiya thay kho na yeh...😭'she complained.
krishna:'lucky ...issa nahi kar thay sorry bolo...😊'

lucky:'nahi...muchay ghar se jaana hai...'

krishna:'maa kya komal honey moon se waapas aagaye?...😊' he did not give important to lucky and asked naina.

naina:'haan...kal hi aaye...'

krishna:'aur arushi...kaisi hai..?'

naina:'don't ask about her.thum dono ki shaadi kay baad wo yahaan nahi aaye...poor thing...😔'

krishna:'maa...taktheer ko kya karay?....'he said with a painful sigh.

naina:'aur....pratigya?....'

krishna:'i can handle her.don't worry about us.thum log apna khayaal rakna...'

lucky:'muchay jaana hai...😭...'he continued crying.

krishna:'teek hai...teek hai chalo...'

naina:'yeh bachchay kay baal thoda zeyaada nahi lagrahay hai?😊...' she moved lucky's front hair from his fore head.

krishna:'yep .while going back i will take him to barber shop.waise bhi i too have to trim my hair...'

pratigya nivas:

around 6pm sajjan and pratigya were having tea in the hall.krishna came in with lucky.

sajjan:'hundred years for you just now i was thinking about you. ...😃'he got up and went to krishna.pratigya turned and looked at him.krishna and lucky both of them are entirely in different look.lucky with short haircut and krishna with his trimmed hair and clean shave.he was looking unbelievably hot.his mouth curled up into a soft smile.she felt as if he winked at her.she shook her head.'what is wrong with me...?'she tried hard to be in her sense.she tilted her head down and avoid eye contact with him.

sajjan looked at lucky holding krishna's finger looking very different and cute with new short hair cut.

sajjan:'such mai,the things which we cannot do,failed to do for the past four years you did it in two days.you are great...😃'he tried to carry lucky.

lucky:'nahi...'he hold krishna's finger tightly and refuse to go.

krishna:'piyassia... give him a quick hot shower....😊'he send lucky with the governess.

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