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palaayan

@palaayan

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Posted: 12 years ago

A huge thank you to Geeta (Crazy4Sobti) for this amazing banner for my story // Pictures Credit: Google

- Ek Prem Kahani -

Hello, and welcome to my short story: Ek Prem Kahani. This is my second writing venture, which has once again been encouraged and supported by Delilah. It's a story which is very close to my heart and I sincerely do hope that you will like it...

Thank you

Manreet :)

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Pehli Mulaqaat

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Weaving Dreams

Will You Grant Me A Wish?

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Ek Prem Kahani

Edited by manreet_gill - 10 years ago

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palaayan

@palaayan

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Posted: 12 years ago

Apologies, this story has now moved to an open blog, the link to which can be found here

Thank you :)

Edited by manreet_gill - 10 years ago

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bewakoofLadki

@bewakoofLadki

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Posted: 12 years ago

amazing update...hope khushi is nt having any disease condition...it vl break arnavs heart n mine too...
pls cont sooon...

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome n beautifully
Reading all the details of hospital, I felt like I was there.
I think khushi lied to Arnav, it's more than anemia.
There first meeting hold them in an unknown spell, in which Arnav asked khushi to accompany at break fast n khushi agreeing to it without any haste.
It wasn't a distraction at all.
Eagerly waiting for the next update.

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

Strange how 2 strangers found calmness and comfort in each other.

There is a connection between them for sure.

Glad they gave in to their feelings and lived in the moment.

Sometimes these sudden decisions make a life long impact.

Eager to see how they take it forward from here.

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ranogill

@ranogill

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Posted: 12 years ago

I can visualize their connection...hope it is simple case of anemia for khushi

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 12 years ago

Manreet, I hope its not a tragedy!

Khushi definitely is suffering from something more than anaemia.

Arnav seems like one of those over worked but good hearted doctors.

And a caring person.

Loved the way they formed a connection immediately.

Waiting now for the next part.

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jg12

@jg12

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Posted: 12 years ago

Seems interesting. Please don't let Khushi have any serious illness - Loved Arnav as a doctor. Thanks for the scrap.

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

Manreet, many and many congratulations on your second venture as a writer! I have been waiting for you to write something more for us, so this was quite a pleasant surprise! It is also a refreshing change from the usual stuff we read here.

I personally loved "Until we meet again" and I am certain I am going to enjoy reading this story just as much! I can already see that it is very different from UWMA, showing us your versatility as a writer! :-)

The story of Khushi and Dr. Raizada has definitely intrigued me immensely and I cannot wait to embark on this Prem Kahani with them! Khushi is so far a mystery to me, there is this anxiety that I feel for her. Was she telling the truth when she told Arnav that it is only anemia and nothing serious. I was willing to believe that until I read the quote in the end and now my mind keeps contemplating on Khushi's possible issue. I am hoping she is not suffering from a deadly disease that will only result in her demise because that is just going to shatter me! :( (Fragile heart and all!) Keeping my tragic thoughts aside, I loved the way you created this sense of ease between Arshi, Arnav is a goner that is for sure and by the looks of things Khushi is not affected any less and it is only their first meeting.

I can hardly wait to read more M, bring on more! :-)

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Japonica

@Japonica

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Heyy, what a lovely surprise see another story from you!! And so glad you decided to write one, I'm sure this one too will be a treat.

I love the beautiful oasis that you created in the midst of the hospital- a space where two souls meet, literally and metaphorically and nothing else but they and the connect they sense between themselves exist in that space.
I loved the warmth of that space which you made us feel and see the connect, the need to reach out for each other that they both felt- all through your very evocative writing.

I guess it is this connect that is going to hold them through whatever has befallen Khushi- can't believe it is as simple as a case of anaemia.

Please don't make this Prem kahani one where
Ek tha raja, ek thi rani
Rani mar gayi khatam kahani!😭

We want a happy Prem Kahani!