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_disha_

@_disha_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Should I be scared , nervous , anxious ?

Which ever direction you take this story forward i am certainly feeling all these emotions for Khushi.

A simple case of anemia it most certainly is not !

Pehli mulaqaat was really quite something.

The way you wrote of their individual needs to have each others presence in their lives was quite stunning especially considering the length of the update and their dialogues written which were quite precise yet it felt so right.

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rulama

@rulama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Lovely beginning dear. Very interesting.

What exactly is in Khushi's lab report other than being anaemic that had made Dr. Khurrana be grim-faced?

Do send me the PM as I am already in your list.

Waiting for the next update.

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Crazy4Sobti

@Crazy4Sobti

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Need reader alert 😃

Hey Manreet, congrats on your second story.

First the title caught my attention, simple yet promising.

That was very interesting "Pehli mulaqaat" and a start to many more mulaqaats. Despite Khushi's distraught state of mind, Arnav's tiredness, the hospital setting and not to forget the crowded place, they found an anchor in each other. There is probably more beyond the anemia but I am not going to contemplate and will just wait for these two to start their "Kahani".

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Shilpa

@HerFiction

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Thanks for the scrap. Its really a nice os.

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: manreet_gill

Thank you Mini for the praise!

Many already have, and I suspect many more readers will ask me about Khushi, and I don't want to give away spoilers by revealing Khushi's health, all I can say is please stick with me, hopefully I won't disappoint you!!

Thank you!!

:)

Thank you for indulging this reader Manreet!🤗

Rest assured all these questions regarding Khushi are to let you know what is going on in our minds as readers, as we read the story! And also to show you just how intrigued we all are! We are not expecting you to reveal the plot or give us spoilers at all! :=)

Oh & even if I am a sucker for happy endings rest assured I will be staying with this story regardless of the genre because I have faith in your ability as a writer to make it a great reading experience and I am already certain that I won't be disappointed in the least bit! :-)

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Shruti Gupta

@Shruti21

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

interesting... waiting for things to unveil..

thanx fr the scrap..

P.S- i loved the quote..

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Japonica

@Japonica

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

What can I say, M?

That is such a uplifting update, despite the sadness that you have so subtly laced it with. The first paragraph was so skilfully done- it took me second to work out whose thoughts I was reading- were they yours or were they Khushi's! And they were so profound in the simple message they contained!

Like Arnav, I can't stop wanting to know all about Khushi, wanting to be with Khushi.

Dil maange so much more of Khushi and her story through your writing.

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Interesting update.

I wonder what Arnav specializes in???

Nice to know both have happy memories of their childhood though one was brought up in an orphanage!

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ranogill

@ranogill

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

awesome...i bet one day they will meet in a hospital room

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Thank you for the speedy update M, we really appreciate it!

On to the update then, it is quite a contrast to the first chapter. The whole chapter had this positive and hopeful vibe about it. Loved the way you started the chapter with Khushi's thoughts! One can't help but pause and think about what you just shared with us. It is all about being grateful for the present and appreciating the things we would usually take for granted.

We now know a little more about Khushi and Dr. Raizada, Khushi's upbringing and positive nature has definitely got alot to do with her present thoughts. Dr. Arnav seems like an easy going fellow and probably exactly what Khushi needs right now. This first date has made them both plan for the next one already and I can hardly wait to unravel more!

PS. Appreciate the PM, good to see you sending PM's now!😃

Edited by Arshix144 - 11 years ago