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Mamu768

@Mamu768

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#221

Truly a mind boggling story! Immensely beautiful and yet so simple. A love story that makes your heart filled with love, and your eyes filled with a tear or two. As you so in such a exquisite way portrait in your story, life is short and we should live it to the fullest everyday and try to grasp every chance to love and spread happiness around us. Unfortunately it's not until we loose something that we learn to cherish it most of the time. If we only could learn to cherish so the loss would leave us memories to cherish for a lifetime.

Love the way you have given quotes of famous people and philosopher!

It added so much depth to your writing.

Hats off! Looking forward to reading more of your writing,

Mamta

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anera

@anera

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#222

this ss of ur was just great ---it was the BEST PERFECT ss ever
i really really am crying now
it was so wonderful that i dont know what to say
so they died together
khushi had brain tumor but still arnav married her
omg he was so in love with her
now i am happy and sad
happy that they are toether
and sad that they could not have happiness of this matiral world
so beautiful

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anera

@anera

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#223

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Iqra

@Iqraimran

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#224

Its not easy read for me I expected more dreadful , already in tears when I start reading mid of last chapter but end honey u brought heartdly smile on my lips...can't describe their love for eternity ...its overwhelming for me.

Will read your other stories

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laksh65

@laksh65

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#225

very touching story with an inspirational message that yesterday is a history, tomorrow is a mystery and only today is present, which is a gift, thats why it is a "present" khushi lived her today with love of her life

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UV_Arshi

@UV_Arshi

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#226

Hey there...recently came across this story on Shipper's recommendations and gave it a read.

It's such a touching story. You have written out the emotions really well. The proposal at Taj was just...beautiful. It broke my heart a little that both of them died. But I wiped my tears thinking, they're going to be together in someplace. It was a really beautiful tale. Thanks for sharing 😊

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just4this

@just4this

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#227

It was nice . Choked with emotion dear . I hate sad ending ,but ur note justified ur ending .Pls Do not end ur stories on sad note dear it's my humble request pls.