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Hi friends!Hope you like this new attempt..Please let me know if you want me to continue by your likes and comments..This was an attempt by me,at our friend Marybarton's post..And another friend latha_555 suggested I make it into an SS..So here I am..Please do let me know if I should continue or is it just a waste of time..😳
And if anyone wants PM please buddy me..
PROLOGUE:
"Astha!"Shlok called out again.But no one responded.
Where is she?!That dumb girl!She..His thoughts were broken by a faint squeak from the darkened corner of the room.
"ASTHA!IS THAT YOU?!ARE YOU ALRIGHT?!"He called out in worry.But like before no response came.
He cursed to himself loudly.
The damn powercut also had to happen now!He cursed in vain as he tried to squint into his darkened bedroom.
His bedroom where his reluctant wife of two days had vanished into for twenty minutes now..And at his father's insistence he had to come up to look for her.Everyone was waiting for her downstairs for the puja.So he had come reluctantly.He,Shlok Agnihotri,was not at all happy with this marriage to this traditional girl called..
"ASTHA!"There was another squeak,and this one louder.
His heart thudding like a maddened thing,he ran towards the source.He was squinting into the darkened corner,when a light flickered on.
Instead of being relieved,Shlok gritted his teeth,at the scene that greeted him.
A candle was now flickering at a sidetable,while his so called traditional wife,had ear plugs in her ears,as she danced to a song,she must be listening to,standing infront of the dressing table mirror,and at the same time was trying to tie..
He frowned trying to understand what she was trying to do..
His eyes bulged out..
She was trying to tie the thin back clasp of her nearly backless blouse..!!!
Shlok gulped down a knot of tension,as in the flickering candlelight,he noticed her creamy skin glowing..And with all those endless soft vanilla scented skin exposed,his heart beat was accelerating at a fast pace..
She had not noticed his approach yet,he could tell..And as she kept struggling,she came near him,drowning him in her beautiful vanilla scent.
"Uff!This clasp!"She muttered as she went on in her unsuccessful attempt.
Shlok saw her exposed back,her creamy waist,and that neckline,and something happened to him.
Before he knew what was about,he pulled her up against him,so that her back was against his chest..
Astha gasped out,but seeing Shlok through the mirror on the dressing table,relaxed a bit.
So my handsome husband is here!Let me see if he is truly so uncaring about me..She thought with a naughty twinkle in her eyes,which was completely unseen by Shlok in the semi-darkness.
"Uh,Shlokji..?Can you please tie this clasp for me?I can't really reach it.."She said in a soft cajoling voice.
She did not have to try harder,as she felt Shlok fingers doing just that.
He had tied it at the third attempt,she could tell,but strangely had not moved away..
Astha smiled,so he was not as unaware of her as he showed..Bu then she felt,his rough fingers caressing her soft skin,and her mind went blank..
Shlok could not keep himself from touching that wide expense of creamy milky white skin..His heart raced,and liquid desire shot through his veins,as he touched her.
His fingers moved along her spine,and deeped down..He could feel her shiver,and as his eyes met hers through the mirror in front,he could see them burning with hot desire just like his were at that moment.
Holding her gaze through the mirror,he gently removed her long open tresses from one shoulder,exposing the shoulder to his view..
And then as of its own accord,his one hand gently clasped round her exposed waist,brushing softly against the creamy skin,while his head lowered towards her exposed neckline..
With his other hand,he managed to pull her up closer and tighter against him,and he literally rejoiced at her shivering body.
Gently he pulled the ear plugs out of her ears,and then brushed his lips against her neck,moving towards her shoulder..
"You should be more careful..when..you..are..alone..in a dark room..Listening to music..does not help..you know.."He murmured huskily,as his lips brushed against her sensitive neck,and then nuzzled her delicate ear lobe.
His both hands now encircled her waist gently massaging the soft skin there with his thumb,when he heard Astha's soft moan..
His need escalated in leaps and bounds..He had to have her closer..
He whirled her around,and the see through Aanchal of her saree,was enough to make him lose his control,if he had any left..
"Astha..What have you done..?!"He groaned as,his lips brushed the soft skin of her throat..She moaned again,making bolts of thunder pass through his entire system..
"I ..can't ..stop.."He said in a husky voice,as his lips kissed her jawline,working his ways to those soft nirvana of her lips..
He was almost there..Just about to capture them..
"ASTHA!!!SHLOK BHAUJI!"
The light came back,along with an interruption in the form of Sojal.
Shlok let go of Astha,like he had just received an electric shock. And before Astha could understand what was happening,he had turned,and without even a look backwards,he strode out from the room..
"OMG!Whatever just happened?!"She muttered trying to get back her grip on herself,and her out of control emotions...
And if anyone wants PM please buddy me..
PROLOGUE:
"Astha!"Shlok called out again.But no one responded.
Where is she?!That dumb girl!She..His thoughts were broken by a faint squeak from the darkened corner of the room.
"ASTHA!IS THAT YOU?!ARE YOU ALRIGHT?!"He called out in worry.But like before no response came.
He cursed to himself loudly.
The damn powercut also had to happen now!He cursed in vain as he tried to squint into his darkened bedroom.
His bedroom where his reluctant wife of two days had vanished into for twenty minutes now..And at his father's insistence he had to come up to look for her.Everyone was waiting for her downstairs for the puja.So he had come reluctantly.He,Shlok Agnihotri,was not at all happy with this marriage to this traditional girl called..
"ASTHA!"There was another squeak,and this one louder.
His heart thudding like a maddened thing,he ran towards the source.He was squinting into the darkened corner,when a light flickered on.
Instead of being relieved,Shlok gritted his teeth,at the scene that greeted him.
A candle was now flickering at a sidetable,while his so called traditional wife,had ear plugs in her ears,as she danced to a song,she must be listening to,standing infront of the dressing table mirror,and at the same time was trying to tie..
He frowned trying to understand what she was trying to do..
His eyes bulged out..
She was trying to tie the thin back clasp of her nearly backless blouse..!!!
Shlok gulped down a knot of tension,as in the flickering candlelight,he noticed her creamy skin glowing..And with all those endless soft vanilla scented skin exposed,his heart beat was accelerating at a fast pace..
She had not noticed his approach yet,he could tell..And as she kept struggling,she came near him,drowning him in her beautiful vanilla scent.
"Uff!This clasp!"She muttered as she went on in her unsuccessful attempt.
Shlok saw her exposed back,her creamy waist,and that neckline,and something happened to him.
Before he knew what was about,he pulled her up against him,so that her back was against his chest..
Astha gasped out,but seeing Shlok through the mirror on the dressing table,relaxed a bit.
So my handsome husband is here!Let me see if he is truly so uncaring about me..She thought with a naughty twinkle in her eyes,which was completely unseen by Shlok in the semi-darkness.
"Uh,Shlokji..?Can you please tie this clasp for me?I can't really reach it.."She said in a soft cajoling voice.
She did not have to try harder,as she felt Shlok fingers doing just that.
He had tied it at the third attempt,she could tell,but strangely had not moved away..
Astha smiled,so he was not as unaware of her as he showed..Bu then she felt,his rough fingers caressing her soft skin,and her mind went blank..
Shlok could not keep himself from touching that wide expense of creamy milky white skin..His heart raced,and liquid desire shot through his veins,as he touched her.
His fingers moved along her spine,and deeped down..He could feel her shiver,and as his eyes met hers through the mirror in front,he could see them burning with hot desire just like his were at that moment.
Holding her gaze through the mirror,he gently removed her long open tresses from one shoulder,exposing the shoulder to his view..
And then as of its own accord,his one hand gently clasped round her exposed waist,brushing softly against the creamy skin,while his head lowered towards her exposed neckline..
With his other hand,he managed to pull her up closer and tighter against him,and he literally rejoiced at her shivering body.
Gently he pulled the ear plugs out of her ears,and then brushed his lips against her neck,moving towards her shoulder..
"You should be more careful..when..you..are..alone..in a dark room..Listening to music..does not help..you know.."He murmured huskily,as his lips brushed against her sensitive neck,and then nuzzled her delicate ear lobe.
His both hands now encircled her waist gently massaging the soft skin there with his thumb,when he heard Astha's soft moan..
His need escalated in leaps and bounds..He had to have her closer..
He whirled her around,and the see through Aanchal of her saree,was enough to make him lose his control,if he had any left..
"Astha..What have you done..?!"He groaned as,his lips brushed the soft skin of her throat..She moaned again,making bolts of thunder pass through his entire system..
"I ..can't ..stop.."He said in a husky voice,as his lips kissed her jawline,working his ways to those soft nirvana of her lips..
He was almost there..Just about to capture them..
"ASTHA!!!SHLOK BHAUJI!"
The light came back,along with an interruption in the form of Sojal.
Shlok let go of Astha,like he had just received an electric shock. And before Astha could understand what was happening,he had turned,and without even a look backwards,he strode out from the room..
"OMG!Whatever just happened?!"She muttered trying to get back her grip on herself,and her out of control emotions...
Link to my Ashlok writings😈:
TehsinaJFJ's Ashlok Writng Index:Come Live The Love...: /forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon-ek-baar-phir/3977122/tehsinajfjs-ashlok-writing-index-come-live-the-love
INDEX:
Chapter-1,page-4:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/96370205
Chapter-2,page-14:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/97062233
Chapter-3,page-19:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/97790211
Chapter-4,page-23:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/97998622Chapter-5,page-28:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98197944
Chapter-6,page-32:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98438175
Chapter-7,page-36:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98883597
Chapter-8,page-44:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/99085856
Chapter-9,page-49:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/99146968
Chapter-10,page-54:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/99306569
Chapter-11,page-58:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/99756599
Chapter-12,page-61:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/99824854
Chapter-13,page-67:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/100292551
Chapter-14,page-71:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/100419284
Chapter-15,page-76:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/100712084
Chapter-16,page-81:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/101320415
Chapter-17,page-85:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/101725839
Chapter-18,page-88:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/102323462
Chapter-19,page-92:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/102354852
Chapter-20,page-98:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/102494810
Epilogue,page-104:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/102797403
Chapter-1,page-4:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/96370205
Chapter-2,page-14:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/97062233
Chapter-3,page-19:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/97790211
Chapter-4,page-23:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/97998622Chapter-5,page-28:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98197944
Chapter-6,page-32:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98438175
Chapter-7,page-36:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98883597
Chapter-8,page-44:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/99085856
Chapter-9,page-49:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/99146968
Chapter-10,page-54:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/99306569
Chapter-11,page-58:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/99756599
Chapter-12,page-61:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/99824854
Chapter-13,page-67:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/100292551
Chapter-14,page-71:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/100419284
Chapter-15,page-76:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/100712084
Chapter-16,page-81:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/101320415
Chapter-17,page-85:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/101725839
Chapter-18,page-88:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/102323462
Chapter-19,page-92:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/102354852
Chapter-20,page-98:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/102494810
Epilogue,page-104:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/102797403
Pushpa Impossible
