Ashlok SS:FORBIDDEN YEARNING ... Epilogue,pg-104 updated! - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank u everyone for such beautiful comments..Loved all of them!🤗And love u all for giving me the enthusiasm and courage to go ahead with this spur of the moment theme..Thank u all!🤗
Now I hope you like my 1st chapter too..😳nd plz dnt forget to correct me I make mistakes..😃

Love,
Tehsina.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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waiting for chapter 1... When are you updating
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Prologue,page-1:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/96259814



CHAPTER-1.

"Congratulations Mr. Agnihotri.."The man smiled handing him a large bouquette.

"Congratulations.."Shlok received another bouquette..

GOD!I'll suffocate today!I'll die today itself by the smell of so much flowers,if I do not drown in them first!Shlok thought,as he put on another polite smile to welcome some more guests.

"Yaar congratulations..You are so lucky..!Such a pretty wife you got.."This time a group of his college friends approached him..So called friends,who always liked to be around the famous Shlok Agnihotri,he thought sarcastically.

"Come on yaar!You turned out to be a chupa Rustam!You should also teach us how to woe such a beautiful girl like Astha bhabi!"A hard slap on his back accompanied the announcement.Shlok clenched his teeth,and tried to give a fake resemblance of a smile.It was getting hard,and his look was kind of constipated look instead.

"Yaar seriously you are truly lucky!"

Shlok nodded in agreement politely,and excused himself.

He had to eave and get some fresh air..It was stifling here..

The famous Shlok Agnihotri,the one who controlled so many people's fate was entrapped now in an unwanted marriage..

His eyes moved to where his bride of two ours was sitting surrounded by his family..His upper lip curled with distaste..He had not even bothered to see her face before marriage..What did it matter,after all?She was a typical Indian traditional girl,and would be an ideal daughter -in-law for this family.His father had chosen her,and his mother had given her the seal of acceptance.

"Oh!What a beauty she is!Kisi ki nazar na lage[Hope no one's evil eye falls on her..]!Anjali your daughter-in-law is so beautiful!"A woman was saying in a loud carrying voice,as Shlok strode past the crowd.

Shlok nearly threw back his head with sarcastic laughter..

"BEAUTIFUL!My foot!"He muttered to himself angrily,quickly walking away..

It was his unwanted wedding night with his unwanted wife..

Shlok walked in to the flower adorned room with scented candle lights lit all around..

"Damn!These flowers will be my death today!"He cursed loudly.

He had not finished saying this sentence when his brand new bride got up from the bed,and with all her wedding fineries and with her bangles and anklets tinkling,walked towards the large windows and opened them wide..

He was anticipating her next move,and waiting for her to face him,when a strong wind started blowing inside the room,blowing out the candles and drowning the room in darkness.

"I know you are not happy with this marriage..And it's okay..I'll not force myself on you..And nor do I expect anything from you..We both granted our parents' wishes..Now we'll learn to live with it.."She said in a soft sensual voice,her back still turned to him..

Shlok was astonished to say the least..She knew?!

She walked back towards the flower adorned bed,and placed a large pillow on the middle.

"I think we should adjust to live separately yet together like this..Or do you want me to use the couch..?"

"No..no..It's..It's alright..We can share the bed..Separately that is.."He quickly added in an embarrassed voice.and before he could say anything more she lay on the bed,her back turned towards him..

The first thought that crossed his mind was even more surprising..

I DID NOT SEE HER FACE!!!He thought with frustration and irritation..

The next morning he woke up on hearing a strange sound..

TINKLE TINKLE TINKLE..

TINKLE TINKLE..

As he slightly opened one eye he noticed a small figure in a red saree moving around his room..

Who the hell is..

TINKLE TINKLE..

A beautiful fragrance engulfed his senses as she passed close by him..He closed his eyes with pleasure loving the strange sound of her green bangles..Then out of the corner of his eye,he saw a pair of beautiful hands taking out a fresh set of kurta and pajama from his cupboard..She hesitated and put it back..

And quietly got out of the room..

Suddenly Shlok felt very forlorn and angry..Was she doing this intentionally..?

He still had not got a single glimpse of her face!He thought with outrage..And she had deliberately not takenout any cloth for him too!

Angrily Shlok he was about to get out of the bed,but something made him turn..

There was still a dent on the pillow where she had slept last night.Unmindfully Shlok caressed the dent..His hand got poked by something sharp..

Shlok found his tormentor,in the form of a single piece of earing..He caressed it with his fingers..

"You are a strange girl..Astha Kirloskar..Very strange.."He murmured thoughtfully..

Chapter-2,page-14:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/97062233

Edited by TehsinaJFJ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
awesome update
loved it
but its short..
wrote well of shlok's feelings..
he is in unwanted marriage,,,, unwanted wife...
But he wants to see her face😉
I think astha is doing all this wantedly to see how shlok reacts 😳
loved it
thanks for the pm
continue soon😊
Edited by niki795 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ya me first... That to before you sent PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wooow i like it!!! Beautifully written!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I love it, I like how Astha is not letting Shlok make her weak and giving him the satisfaction of marrying her for revenge, I'm glad she knew it before
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
OMG awesomee yaaar cant wait fooor next paaart
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
Wow really wonderful update
Loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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👍🏼Yay an update! whohoo keep teasing him Astha, even her doing something un purposefully is bothering him. He's gonna go crazy lol I can't wait to see more interaction between them. 😊

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