AN ASYA OS : WRONG WAYS RIGHT ENDS....PART 4 II updated pg 9 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
gr8...jealous asad...continue soon...
thanks for pm...i've sent u a buddy request!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Is Farhan decent in this story? He seems like a good guy, but...
Will you show a jealous Nikhat or any SM residents reactions to ZoAn (just came up with that name... make a better one)?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 4 II

HE KEPT HIS MUG DOWN WITH A THUD SHOWING HIS ANNOYANCE...

DILSHAAD - asad!!

ASAD - kuch nhi ammi mai office jaa rha hun...

DILSHAAD - par naashta...

ASAD - pet bhaar gya ammi...{while grinning}

AND HE TURNED AROUND TO LEAVE WHEN SOMETHING AGAIN STOPPED HIM

NAJMA - ammi zoya ne bhi to naashta nhi kiya na

DILSHAAD - haan najma lekin vo keh reh thi ki vo farhaan ke saath hi naashta karege...

IN THE MALL...

ZOYA WAS HAVING A LOT OF FUN WHEN SUDDENLY

FARHAAN - kya hua princess

ZOYA - HAAN...mai bas vo...mujhe laga ki maine kisi ko dekha...

FARHAAN - kise???

ZOYA - ta...nhi koi nhi chodho chalo abhi to bohot kuch dekhna hai...

FARHAAN - princess mujhe lag rha hai ki shayad u r getting mad over ur mr.khan

ZOYA - shut up yaar...chalo

DILSHAAD CONSTRUCTIONS

ASAD WAS IN HIS CABIN WITH HIS PA(PRASAD)

ASAD - Prasad kyat um kabhi vo market place ke paas jo mall hai vahan gye ho?

PRASAD - jee sir

AFTER 5 MINS

ASAD - Prasad uss mall me kaisi gentry aati hai

PRASAD - ache sir totally safe hai

AGAIN AFTER 5 MINS

ASAD - Prasad mall yahan se kitni dur hai

PRASAD - around 15 mins sir

ASAD - aur mere ghar se

PRASAD - 20 mins

PRASAD - sir ek baat puchu

ASAD - bolo

PRASAD - sir aapko iss mall me itni dilchaspi kyu aa rhi hai

ASAD - wo...kuch nhi bas aise hi tum aisa karo ki vo humare jo nye project ki file haina vo le aayo

WHOLE DAY ASAD SPENT EITHER ENQUIRING ABOUT THE MALL OR THINKING ABOUT ZOYA

KHAN VILLA

HE REACHED HOME BY 5:00 PM

ASAD - asalamwalikum ammi

DILSHAAD - walekumasalam beta! Aaj tum itni jaldi kaise?

ASAD - Ammi miss faruqi kahan hai

NAJMA - bhaijaan vo to farhaan ke saath mall gyi hui hai na

ASAD - matlab vo abhi tak aayi nhi hai...

DILSHAAD - asad abho sirf 5:00 baje hai aur tum ho ki

ASAD - ammi uss se mujhe koi fark nhi padta mai iss waqt ghar aaya hun aur vo yahan nhi hai

DILSHAAD - tumhara kuch nhi ho sakta

NAJMA WAS JUST GIGGLING SEEING THE MOTHER SON DUO

THE NEXT 2 HOURS WENT LIKE THAT ONLY.ASAD SHARING HIS KNOWLEDGE ABOUT TAMEEZ AND TEHZEEB AND THE TWO POOR LADIES WANTING TO BANG THEIR HEADS ON THE NEAR BY WALL

7:00 PM

ASAD - bas ammi zoya apni limits cross kar rhi hai...mai unhe lene jaa rha hun

SUDDENLY THE DOOR OPENED. ZOYA ENTERED WITH FARHAN HOLDING HER HAND IN ONE HAND AND THE OTHER AROUND HER WAIST.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I despise cliffhangers! But atleast its not a season finale that I have to wait three months! So will SM reactions be shown? I want Zoya to yell that them once, especially when Hassena says something stupid! Jealous Asad is always funny, I wish they showed it in the show BUT no they had to do the most awkward thing ZoYaan.
Edited by sarbrathan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: sarbrathan

I despise cliffhangers! But atleast its not a season finale that I have to wait three months! So will SM reactions be shown? I want Zoya to yell that them once, especially when Hassena says something stupid! Jealous Asad is always funny, I wish they shouldn't in the show BUT no they had to do the most awkward thing ZoYaan.

FARHAAN IS A POSITIVE CHARACTER...
SM WILL BE SHOWN I GUESS😆
OKAY SINCE U ASKED ME TO CREATE IT ITS ZOHAAN...
thank u sooo much 4 reading my story
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
gud one...zoya is torturing asad...seriously 😆 want to know wat happens next...update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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tameez aur tehzeeb kii lectures kii liye hum tayyar hai🤣and i love it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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getting the feeling zoya's sick !😲😲
continue soon, it's great😃

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pm me please
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Please update soon really good story
Plz continue soon

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