AN ASYA OS : WRONG WAYS RIGHT ENDS....PART 4 II updated pg 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Prologue

The place was fully decorated with flowers and lights. Everyone was happy including the couple and their families.

I told U mujhe call karna band kijiye.. retorted a man while attending a call and hiding behind the pillar..

there is something wrong wid him and I need to find tat out.. she whispered in a suspicious tone while getting lost in her own thoughts

Suddenly she felt a hand on her shoulder and turned around..

come on lets gothey are here.

She nodded innocently and followed him

Was this a start to new story or continuation of the old 1

Shuld I continue

shishi😃


index

part 1 pg 2

PART 2 PG 3

NOTE PG 4

TEASER PG 5

PART 3 PG 6

PART 4-I PG 8

PART 4-II PG 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
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yaar i kno ki intro chota hai but i didi'nt want to open up the suspense and i hope sab samajh hi gye honge ki topic kya hai so pls agar cont karwana chahte ho to pls like thoko ya ament karo yaar
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey dn't be disappointed plz do continue soon...u should give some name to ur story in ur title ...they people here surely gonna read it...i actually luv each n every thing about asya...so plz contiue with ur idea/story..all the best👍🏼 i m gonna read it for sure
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 1

The place was fully decorated with flowers, lights and other things...

Everyone was equally happy...talking and chatting about the happenings all around them...

"asalam-walikum...aaye aaye..." welcomed dilshad with a sugar dipped tone...

"walikumasalam..." replied hassena bi..

"salam..."said asad and zoya to the other guest entering with the grooms family..

"wah dilshad...sagai ki tayariyan badi hi ache se karvayi hai aapne..." exclaimed bhaiseena bi in her all time famous greedy tone..

"shukriya..."

All the guest have arrived by this time. Even nikhat, aayan, nuzhat and humaira were also present...

Imraan and najma were sitting together at the center of the hall while zoya was standing beside najma...

Suddenly imraan's cell started ringing...

One ring two ring three ring and so on

"agar important hai to phone utha lijiye imraan.."

"nahi najma bas aise hi..."

"kya baat hai dulhe miya...sagai to hui nhi hai ki najma kea lava aur kisi ke liye aapke paas phursat hi nhi hai.." said zoya in a chirpy manner...

dilshad"are zoya jakar dekho to zara ki asad kahan hai, sagai ka samay ho gya hai, dulhan ka bhai hai au raise ghayab ho gya hai..."

zoya - jee phupi...mai abhi dekh kar aati hun..

and she went away in search of asad...

zoya " to yahan hai aap...

he turned around on listening her voice

asad " jee bas thodi se arrangements...

zoya " oho mr.khan aap bhi na...sab kuch thik hai bas ek cheez ko chor ke...

asad " kya!!???

Zoya " AAP!! Kya hua mr.khan kyun itna zyada tensed hai aap iss nikah ko lekar...

Asad " dekhiye ms.faruqi najma meri behen hai aur main nhi chahata hun ki vo apni zindagi me koi bhi dukh ya dard se guzre...

Zoya " come on mr. khan jitna pyaar aap nazma se karte hain utna mai bhi karti hun...dont worry...

She flashed her 100 million dollar dimple wali smile to which asad also reciprocated in the same way..

ZOYA " to phir chale..

ASAD " ji ...

They walked together towards the main hall...

DILSHAD " kahn the tum asad...

ASAD " ji ammi vo mai actually...

ZOYA " rehne de jiye aap iss se zyada bol bhi nhi payenge...wo kya hai na phuphi mr. khan pillar ke peche chupkar...she smiled wickedly..

Asad only stared at zoya all this time while everyone else was laughing on the joke which was just cracked suddenly...

HASEENA BI " dilshad hume lagta hai ki ab sagai ki rasme shuru kar dene chahiye...

IMRAAN " magar ammi bhaijaan to abhi taka aye hi nhi hai kyun na hum thodi der aur intezaar kar le taaki wo aa jaye aur vaise bi unki flight to land ho hi gyi hai to...

HASEENA BI " nhi nhi use aane me der ho sakti hai tum sagai ki rasame poori kar lo uska intro hum baad me karva denge..

And the rasams started...

Firstly imraan puts the ring on nazma's finger then when it ws nazma's turn to do so again the phone started ringing making imraan more and more worried..

NAZMA " imraan kya hua

IMRAAN- kuch nhi...and he switched his phone off

And the ceremonies proceeded...

EVERYONE TO EACH OTHER...MUBARAK HO MUBARAK HO...



note : Ok aaj ke liye bas itna hi next update is gonna be interesting as...ahem ahem sab abhi bata dungi to baad me kya padoge..

Jootha and chappals are most welcomed..

Acha laga ho to thoko like and post karo apne pyaare pyaare se cments...

Dedicated specially to

Sadie di : one of my inspirations

Ankie di : the cool di... inke bare me ab kya kahun...

Milli di : my support system my ventilator first one to read it and help me improve it

Pari di : reader of all of my stories and my supporter

Guni di : my new new di this is also 4 u...

else than this u all are my inspiration...


shishi 😛

Edited by kabhiasya4ever - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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haaiyee how nicely written it is :))
well yes i am surer Billi will try to threaten Imran first backmail him and and then come herself in the engagement 😆.

Great part deary :))

waiting for more
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its nice start...
keep it up baccha...and my name...lol..u spelled it wrong..anyways..still thanks for mentioning it there...
love you..
MILLI
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OH NAI YAAR..chill😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start continue soon plz 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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so sweet shishi...LOVED IT...imran ko kick padne wali hai lagta hai...kitna ph bajta hai eska...BILLI😡...
haye ..aab senti mat kr yr..😳😳😃a gale lag ja...
yes sadie..she is an inspiration...ankie..she is super cool...

milli...yes she is ventilator...🤣support system toh theek hai...ventilator...milli teri promotion hi gyii...🤣🤣🤣🤣
but yes she is really awesome...khin nazar na lag jaye... SO THU THU THU...KARAN STYLE...😉
gunii..haye she is jaan yr..she is a sweetheart...🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nyc part ..
continue soon ...n if possible plzzz pm

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