AN ASYA OS : WRONG WAYS RIGHT ENDS....PART 4 II updated pg 9 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
Very good! I like it very much, especially the fact that Zoya and Farhan are friends.
Can't wait to see how the story will unfold! Please continue soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
shishi...dekha maine puri story padhi..now m ressing it...lolz
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Posted: 11 years ago
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mobert chuck do...farya rocks...farhan plus zoya du uh..lolz

m interested to have khan villa track
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: MILII_BAKSHI

shishi...dekha maine puri story padhi..now m ressing it...lolz

hayeee
shukra hai allah ka ki aapne res to kar diya kam se kam kyunki maine to uski bhi ummeeden choddh di thi milli di...😆
aapke ehsaan ko mai kaise chukaun...😉😡

thik hai i m happy
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: MILII_BAKSHI

mobert chuck do...farya rocks...farhan plus zoya du uh..lolz

m interested to have khan villa track

di it will not be farya but ZOHAAN
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
awesome...read it all...want to read more!!! i know asad's heart will burn with jealousy!!!!
continue soon n pm me too!! plzzz...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 4

KHAN VILLA

DILSHAAD - Sab kitne ache se ho gya na...sab kitne khush the aur khaaskar zoya...

NAJMA - nhi ammi zoya nhi Z' kahiye ya phir toofaan express

AND DILSHAAD AND NAJMA STARTED LAUGHING WHILE ZOYA STARTED MAKING A PUPPY FACE

DILSHAAD - are asad tum kyun itne khaamosh ho kuch toh bolo

ASAD - jee ammi...wo actually mai bohot thak gya hun to mai araam karne jaa rha hun

AND HE TURNED AWAY WITHOUT GIVING A GLANCE TOWARDS ZOYA

DILSHAAD - are asad zara ruko suno to sahi mai kya keh keh rhi thi kikal zoya ko shopping ke liye jaana tha to kyat um use le jaaoge

ASAD - nhi ammi kal to meri ek important meeting hai to mai...

BEFORE HE CUD COMPLETE

ZOYA - koi baat nhi phuphi mai farhaan ke saath chali jaungi vaise bhi maine uss se vaada kiya tha ki vo jab bhi Bhopal aayega to mai uss se yaha ka apna favorite mall dekhaungi...

DILSHAAD - thik hai zoya

THIS MADE HIM MORE IRRITATED...EVERYONE RETIRED TO THERE RESPECTIVE ROOMS.

ASAD'S ROOM

IT WAS NOT A NORMAL NIGHT FOR HIM. TODAY HE HAD TOO MUCH MORE THAN HE CAN HANDLE...HE GOT UP AND STARTED PACING HERE AND THERE

ASAD - mai iske baare mei itna kyun soch rha hun vo sirf zoya ka dost hai

HE CLOSED HIS EYES SO AS TO LET THIS THOUGHT FLY AWAY BUT INSTEAD ALL THE ZOHAAN MOMENTS REAPPEARED IN FRONT OF HIS EYES THEIR HUG, THEIR HIGH FIVE, THEIR LAUGHS, HIM CALLING HER AFFECTIONATELY AND THETEARS IN ZOYA'S EYES AFTER SEEING HIM THERE. HE QUICKLY OPENED HIS EYES.

ASAD - nahi no never ye kya ho rha hai mujhe...ya allah am I jealous...ya allah cmon mr. asad ahmed khan vo sirf unka dost hai aur vaise bhi vo unse itne dino baad mili thi to ye sabnormal hi tha...shayad mai hi over react kar rha hun...

NEXT MORNING AT KHAN VILLA

ZOYA - good morning everyone

DILSHAD AND NAJMA - good morning zoya

ZOYA - mr. khan aapke kaan to thik hai na maine aapko wish kiya and u didn't reply back...how rude

ASAD - morning ms.fa...

FARHAAN - good morning princess...

ZOYA RAN TOWARDS HIM WITH A MEGA WATT SMILE ON HER FACE

ZOYA - good morning pagal

FARHAAN - kya zoya subah subah acha chalo...

NAJMA - arre bhaijaan aap itni subah yahan kuch kaam tha kya?

DILSHAD - haan beta

FARHAAN - nhi khala ...vo kya hai aaj zoya ko mall jana tha to isliye...

NAJMA - wah bhai aapko toh pehle hi pata chal gya ki zoya ko aapko zaroorat hai

FARHAAN - arre nahi mujhe isne hi bataya tha...

NAJMA - aissa kaise ho sakta hai...abhi kal hi to humaari baat hui thi...

FARHAAN - aise hi thori mai isse toofan express bulaata hun...{while winking}

AS FARHAAN TURNED HE SAW ZOYA WITH A WHAT THE' FACE AND BEING A GOOD FRND HE UNDERSTOOD

ZOYA - ok phuphi! Allah hafiz

DILSHAAD - khuda hafiz...

BOTH OF THEM EXITED THE DOOR...

ASAD'S EYES WERE GLUED ON THE DOOR UNTIL AND UNLESS BOTH OF THEM DIDN'T EXITED.

HE KEPT HIS MUG DOWN WITH A THUD SHOWING HIS ANNOYANCE...


NOTE - I KNOW KI EVERYONE WHO WUD READ THIS PART WILL DEFINATELY GONNA KILL ME CUZ FIRST THING I M UPDATING AFTER SUCH A LONG TIME AND TAT TOO SUCH A SMALL ONE BUT TRUST ME GUYS I WAS STUCK IN MY WORK... MY EXAMS GOT OVER AND THE SCUL STARTED AGAIN AND THEN LOADS OF WORK BUT STILL I THOUGHT OF WRITING THE STORY BUT I GOT SERIOUSLY ILL...I M SOOO SORRY BUT I PROMISE TAt PART4-2 WILL BE UPDATED BY TONIGHT ONLY...


PRECAP - ZOYA ENTERED THE HOUSE WID FARHAAN... AHEM AHEM GUYS ABHI SAB BATA DU TO BAAD ME KYA PADHOGE

SHISHI⭐️

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh my god someone has dedicated a work to me saying im their inspiration and i get to know about this like right now?

Oh my god my baby thank you so much I'm so touched mela baccha! usually people dedicate anything to me cuz im their bestu here or because i spam a lot but for the first time someone mentioned me as their inspiration! wow it means so much to me! thank you 🤗

your fiction is wonderful keep up the good work :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: --starstruck--

Oh my god someone has dedicated a work to me saying im their inspiration and i get to know about this like right now?


Oh my god my baby thank you so much I'm so touched mela baccha! usually people dedicate anything to me cuz im their bestu here or because i spam a lot but for the first time someone mentioned me as their inspiration! wow it means so much to me! thank you 🤗

your fiction is wonderful keep up the good work :D

finally i got ur cment...omg...thank u sooo much di...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kabhiasya4ever

finally i got ur cment...omg...thank u sooo much di...
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aww im sorry i didnt see this thread before then i got ur pm today! sorry for not checking earlier but i get like more than 100 unread pm everyday so i simply delete all 😳

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