FF - tu pyar hai..Last Part 68 Pg 123

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Posted: 18 years ago

#271

Originally posted by: nyzbabigyal
guyz i'll update in about 20 minutes.. im trying to wrap up the ending and its 7 pages on word 😉 😉 even though i thought it'd be 2 😕

awesomeeeeee im bak fm shopping in ryte time....😉😆 i knew u could do itt....😛

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Posted: 18 years ago

#272

Originally posted by: racho8

awesomeeeeee im bak fm shopping in ryte time....😉😆 i knew u could do itt....😛

wat'd u get me?? u betta have got me somethin.. im sittin here tryin to update since .. since i started 😆😆😆 and ur out shopping..

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Posted: 18 years ago

#273

hope u enjoy this part.. second part as promised.. 😉 😉 haila 7 pages on ms.. im so tired

This part's dedicated to all my readers😳 - d silent readers and everyone who leave their commentos that leave a smile on my face 😃 😳 .. thank you so much.. without u guyz.. I wouldn't have made it as far as 40 parts 😳 😳 😳 .. so this means a lot to me.. a very special thanx to all of you from the bottom of my heart 🤗

*~*~*PART 40*~*~*

its Friday morning 😃 .. the whole family's up nice and early.. vivan who had made up this vacation plan didn't wanna get up 😆 .. so everyone had to literally drag him out of bed 😆 😆 .. shiv was up early cuz he had to go to the office .. he waited for the whole family to leave. As everyone packed up their bags.. they seated themselves in the car
Dadi: acha toh shiv.. kal u and gauri be there 😃
Shiv: ji dadi.. me and gauri'll be there 😳
Dadi: acha theek hai.. hum log chalte hain 😃
Shiv: have a safe trip just then gauri came outside wit kaya.. who went and seated herself in the car 😊
Dadi: acha gauri beta hum chalte hain
Gauri: ji dadi 😳
Dadi: kal ko tum dono.. wahaan time par mujhe chahiye
Gauri: ji dadi 😳
Mahen: chalein ma.. let's leave before we hit traffic
Dadi: haan chalo dadi said bye to shiv and gauri along wit everyone else… as they drove out.. leaving 😃

Shiv: finallyyy 😉 as he turned to look at gauri.. who was walking towards the outhouse
Shiv: aye hello where do u think ur going as he ran after her.. he grabbed her hand
Gauri: shivv
Shiv: yes jaan 😳
Gauri: im late for work 😕
Shiv: oh god.. u .. u romantic mood spoiler.. so unromantic
Gauri: kya kaha mujhe 😡 😡
Shiv: yes u heard me.. 😳
Gauri: hmph now im not talking to u.. and im not.. uh..
Shiv: ur not wat?? Huh 😡
Gauri: im not goin to work wit u… I'll go by myself hmph 🤔

as gauri turned.. goin bac to the outhouse.. just then shiv's cell rang.. telling him to come to work.. cuz he was gonna be late for a meeting 😆 😆

Shiv: gauri tumhe toh mein shaam ko dekhloonga.. 😈 he went inside.. grabbing his keys.. he went to the outhouse
Shiv: let's go gauri.. im gonna be late
Gauri: lekin shiv.. I'm..
Shiv: let's go gauri ..
Gauri: uff let me get ready shiv as gauri grabbed her bag.. they both went to the car.. and headed for work… shiv dropped gauri off.. with out teasing 😕 .. well one he was getting late.. two.. he'll get his payback in the evening 😉 😉 .. he made his way towards work..

Gauri was busy the whole day.. working non stop .. she was loaded wit work.. and she didn't wanna go home.. till she was done wit it.. cuz tomorrow was farm house.. 😕 😕 so she wouldn't be able to finish it at home either.. so she finished up her work.. shiv finished his meeting and checked on last few things that needed to be checked.. and made his way home 😃 .. he had to get payback from gauri 😉 .. how could he forget.. before he could call gauri and tell her that he'll pick her up.. she called him and told him.. one of her friends is dropping her off 😕 .. cuz she has to go somewhere for some work.. shiv told her he'd be at home.. 😳

Shiv made his way home.. and started preparing a surprise for his wife.. 😉 it was already late in the evening… gauri made her way home.. she was tired.. and hungry.. she made her towards the outhouse.. to freshen up.. cuz after that.. she'd be heading to the house... Cuz if she didn't go there.. he'd come there 😆 😆 .. gauri made her way inside.. she freshened up… she changed wearing a black sari 😳 .. looking beautiful as ever.. she already had her mangalsutra on 😉 .. gauri went in front of the mirror.. combing her wet hair.. as she grabbed her purse.. she removed sindoor out of her purse 😳 .. as she smiled.. she took a bit of sindoor.. filling her maang.. she was glowing.. a newly wed bride… looking beautiful as ever.. 😉 😉

Gauri made some last checkups.. she made her way towards the house.. she opened the door slowly to find d lights off 😕
Gauri: shiv ne lights kyun off ki hai.. gauri made her way in the house.. no one was there.. obviously.. 😆
Gauri: shivvv she walked looking around for him.. she knew he was home.. but where..
Gauri: shivv kahan ho tum just then she felt someone grab her from behind 😳 .. for a moment she got scared.. and then she knew who it was.. she relaxed 😉 .. shiv leaned in closer.. whispering in her ear
Shiv: hi jaan 😳 as shiv kissed her earlobe.. 😳
Shiv: u look beautiful.. dressed for some special occasion??? gauri turned around.. looking at shiv.. he was wearing a black shirt and black dress pants.. 😉 😉
Gauri: haan kya hai na.. I thought I'd spend some time with my husband.. have some dinner 😳 😳 😳
Shiv: oh yea??
Gauri: uh huh.. do I look ok?? 😃
Shiv: hmm.. I don't know something's missing 😕
Gauri: wat.. wat's missing..
Shiv: u have ur sari.. bangles.. jewelry..sindoor.. but wat's missing jaan
Gauri: mujhe kya maloom..

as gauri looked up and down.. to see wat was missing..
Shiv: close ur eyes
Gauri: kyun 😕 ❓
Shiv: don't u trust me??
Gauri: more than myself 😳
Shiv: then close u eyes plz gauri closed her eyes .. shiv smiled.. as he took something out of his pocket.. gauri felt shiv's arms around her neck.. 😉

Shiv: u can open ur eyes now 😳 gauri opened her eyes..to see that the light was on now.. but it was dim.. there were candles and heart shaped balloons all over the room.. let's not forget the roses.. the rose pedals on the floor 😉 .. as shiv stood there
Shiv: now u look perfect.. gauri looked at shiv.. smiling..
Gauri: shiv yeh sab.. it looks.. omggg
Shiv: wat?? U only notice this.. not the most important thing .. 😡 gauri looked at shiv confused.. shiv pointed to her neck.. she looked down.. she saw a mangalsutra.. she stood there.. it was the same mangalsutra she had seen while window shopping 😉 😉

Gauri: shiv yeh.. tears welled up in her eyes..
Shiv: jaan.. ur my wife.. I had to get u a mangalsutra.. a proper one .. 😳 as shiv wiped off her tears..
Shiv: and im sorry u can't wear it for so many days
Gauri: why not?? 😕 😭
Shiv: well not in front of the family.. at least not yet.. 😕
Gauri: but i.. shiv hugged her.. as gauri leaned her head on his shoulder.. they both stood there. Suddenly gauri lifted her head up..

Gauri: shivvv 🤔
Shiv: yes jaan
Gauri: not to ruin a perfectly romantic moment .. but im starving shiv let out a laugh looking at gauri.. 😆 😆
Shiv: let's eat..
Gauri: lekin khana... I'll go
Shiv: everything's ready jaan.. we're the only ones missing.. 😉 shiv took gauri towards the small table.. that was set up in the middle.. wit candles on it

Gauri: shiv yeh sab
Shiv: wat?? Oh don't worry jaan.. I didn't cook.. I ordered.. thank god for restaurants 😆 gauri smiled.. as shiv pulled her chair for her... Gauri sat down.. shiv went and sat across from her..
Shiv: now let's eat.. im starving.. shiv and gauri started eating witout any further delays.. As they were both eating.. they talked.. enjoying.. just chatting away.. it had been a while since they both got to sit together.. and enjoy their dinner and wat not.. 😳 😳 😳

Gauri: the food was delicious
Shiv: I know right wasn't it.. now some dessert
Gauri: dessert? gauri looked around but couldn't find any dessert on the table..
Gauri: shiv dessert kahan hai 😕 shiv got up.. as he leaned over the table (it's a small table).. he kissed gauri on the cheek 😉 .. as she stared at him 😲
Shiv: hmm dessert was amazing..
Gauri: shivv.. 😳 as gauri's cheeks became deep red.. from blushing.. as shiv smiled.. 😆 😉

Shiv: hmm so now wat??
Gauri: now wat??? Now u sit.. I'll go wash d dishes
Shiv: wat??? 😕
Gauri: haan.. let me just go take care of this… then we'll sit and talk
Shiv: how exciting.. 😃
Gauri: of course its exciting.. u don't like talking???
Shiv: no jaan… I love to talk
Gauri: yes that I know 😕 as shiv stared at gauri. While she got up.. taking the dishes to the kitchen.. to clean up.. shiv went after her.. helping her with the dishes.. gauri was about to turn the tap on.. as shiv went by her. 😳 .
Shiv: plz jaan.. I'll take care of this.. u just sit 😉
Gauri: what??
Shiv: of course.. wat?? U don't think I can wash dishes.. 😕
Gauri: I didn't say anything 😕
Shiv: but u think I can't wash dishes.. watch.. I can wash dishes.. 😃
Gauri: go ahead.. im watching.. 😆 shiv roles up his sleeves as he starts washing the dishes and gauri stood there.. smiling ..

Gauri: shiv tum bilkul paagal ho
Shiv: paagal.. of course.. how does that song go??
Gauri: which song 😕 gauri walked around... Putting everythin in place as shivy washed d dishes
Shiv: tere ishq mein paagal ho gaya deewana tera re 😉 gauri looked at shiv.. as she burst out laughing 😆 😆 .. shiv continued to sing.. wateva lyrics he knew 😆 😆 .. gauri helped him wit d dishes.. as they finished..

Gauri: shiv move.. let me wash my hands
Shiv: then go ahead.. I need to get this soap off my hands too gauri moved nxt to shiv.. putting her hands under the tap water.. as shiv took her hands in his 😉
Gauri: shivvvv
Shiv: kya we can wash our hands together 😳
Gauri: shiv stop it.. warna 😡
Shiv: warna kya huh gauri 😡
Gauri: warna 😡 gauri smiled.. as she took some water.. throwing it at shiv 😆 .. shiv stood there.. as gauri laughed making a run for it.. cuz she knew she was dead now.. 😆
Shiv: u wait gauri.. u just.. 😡 shiv washed his hands.. drying them.. he ran after gauri.. who was out of the kitchen now..

Shiv: gauri.. kitna bhagogi 😈
Gauri: shiv stop running.. no running aloud in the house.. 😆
Shiv: im not the one who started jaan
Gauri: shiv bachpana chodho.. ok no running
Shiv: fine fine 😃
Gauri: ok good gauri walked in front of the couch (she was behind it hiding from shiv) to walk past shiv.. as shiv grabbed her.. spinning her towards him.. holding her tightly against him 😉
Gauri: shivvv 😳
Shiv: tum kya samajhti ho… mujhse panga le kar.. tum bach jao gi 😉
Gauri: panga.. maine aisa kya kiya 😕
Shiv: gauri my jaan.. Itni bholi mat bano
Gauri: bano.. kya matlab.. I am bholi 😡
Shiv: hana wohh toh dikh hi raha hai.. pehle subah aur ab
Gauri: subah maine kya kiya.. aur ab.. wohh to mazaak tha 😳
Shiv: haan my shirt's wet and mazaak tha.. 😡
Gauri: its not all wet.. just a tad bit from right here.. fine.. I'll get u another shirt 😃 as gauri moved out of his arms.. to go upstairs and get him another shirt..

She moved past shiv.. as she stopped in her footsteps.. suddenly breathing became the hardest task for gauri 😳 .. as shiv stood couple of feet behind her.. holding on to her pallu 😉 .. which is wat had stopped gauri from walking in the first place.. she dared not turn.. turn.. even breathe for that matter☺️☺️.. shiv stood there quietly.. she could feel him walking towards her.. she shivered as she felt his breathing on her neck.. shiv huskily whispered in gauri's ear

Shiv: dance wit me gauri 😳 gauri didn't know how to respond or react.. she wanted to turn.. but she couldn't gather up the courage to face him.. she was getting nervous and nervous.. d clock seemed to be ticking slowly.. the room was filled wit silence.. as a song started playing on the stereo.. a few feet away 😉

Saagar Kinare Dil Yeh Pukare
Tu Jo Nahin To Mera Koi Nahin Hai

Jaage Nazaare Jaagi Havaaein
Jab Pyar Jaaga Jaagi Fizaaein
Pal Bhar Ko Dil Ki Duniya Soyi Nahin Hai
Saagar Kinare Dil Yeh Pukare...

Lehron Pe Naache Kirnon Ki Pariyaan
Maein Khoi Jaise Saagar Mein Nadiya
Tu Hi Akeli To Khoi Nahin Hai
Saagar Kinare Dil Yeh Pukare

Gauri stood frozen on the spot.. as the lyrics of the classical song filled the whole room 😳 .. the song being pretty loud wasn't so loud for gauri.. she could hear it but she couldn't hear it .. cuz d only thing she was hearing was shiv's slow breathing on her neck 😳 .. shiv let go off her pallu as he moved his hand..tracing it down gauri's arms..sending shivers down her spine 😳 .. as he took her hand in his.. gauri closed her eyes.. as shiv moved her hair.. from her back.. to her side 😳 .. placing a kiss on her neck 😳 .. gauri held on to his hand tightly as shiv continued to place soft kisses down her back 😳 … shiv let go off gauri's hand.. as he lightly wrapped his arm around her.. holding her.. gauri leaned on shiv.. wit her head resting on his shoulder.. as he kissed her cheek 😳 .. whispering

Shiv: I love you gauri.. I love you so much as he nuzzled her neck slowly.. teasing her.. gauri felt weak in her knees.. as weak as one could feel.. she was thankful that shiv was behind her.. and she had some support otherwise.. she was sure. she'd be on the floor.. gauri lifted her head off of shiv's shoulder… as she moved forward to leave.. cuz a few more seconds here.. she'd be a goner.. shiv stopped her.. as he was holding her hand... 😳
Shiv: u still owe me a dance u know 😉 gauri turned slightly looking at shiv.. who was standing there calmly looking at her 😉 .. as he slowly pulled her towards him.. the cd changed tracks.. as the previous song had finished.. shiv took gauri in his arms.. as the song started 😳

Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan
Dhadkan bani zubaan
Shiv kissed gauri on the forehead 😳 .. as gauri wrapped her arms around shiv's neck.. standing close to him.. shiv moved his hand on gauri's waist.. as they continued to dance... getting lost in each other.. 😉 😉

Khulte band hote labhon ki ye ankahi
Khulte band hote labhon ki ye ankahi
Mujhse keh rahi hai ki badhne de bekhudi
Mil yoon ki daud jaayein nas nas mein bijliyaan
Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan
Dhadkan bani zubaan
Baahon ke darmiyaan

shiv kissed gauri's lips lightly 😳 .. as he slowly picked her up.. gauri looked at him.. not able to move her eyes off him 😉 .. shiv carried her upstairs.. to their room 😉 .. as he closed the door.. he put gauri on the bed.. as she sat there.. nervous as hell.. shiv came sittin by her.. he looked at her.. she was looking pure.. beautiful.. innocent like an angel.. as she sat there.. wit her eyes closed.. her lips trembling 😳 😉 .. as the wind blew in slowly thru the open window.. shiv moved his hand to her face as he moved gauri's hair behind her ear.. he couldn't believe his fate.. he neva thought he'd be this lucky.. he had his gauri.. a smile appeared on his face.. as he moved forward.. he kissed her cheek lightly.. 😳 😳 😳
Aasmaan ko bhi ye haseen raaz hai pasand
Aasmaan ko bhi ye haseen raaz hai pasand
Uljhi uljhi saanson ki aawaaz hai pasand
Moti luta rahi hai saawan ki badliyaan
Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan
Dhadkan bani zubaan
Baahon ke darmiyaan

he moved closer..
Shiv: gauri gauri dared not open her eyes.. as she sat there.. wit her eyes closed.. 😳
Shiv: hmm.. y r u so nervous that I don't know.. but I won't make u any more nervous.. waise.. welcome to our room 😉 😳 as shiv looked at her… gauri's eyes shot open as she looked at him.. she smiled.. as a sudden blush appeared on her face..☺️ she moved her gaze away from his.. looking downwards.. shiv smiled..
Shiv: gauri gauri looked up at shiv.. whose teasing voice all of a sudden sounded very serious.. gauri looked at him.. wit questioning eyes
Shiv: gauri tum khush toh ho na ❓ gauri looked at shiv.. as tears welled up in eyes… but she stopped them from flowing

Gauri: how could u even ask me that.. u really think im not happy.. hmmm
Shiv: nahin I mean I don't want.. gauri put her hand on his lips to stop him from talking 😳
Gauri: I love you shiv.. I can't believe I got so lucky that I got you in my life… I love you 😳 😳 😳 shiv smiled.. as he took gauri in a hug 😉

Shiv: I love you too gauri.. I love you as they both hugged each other tightly 😳 😳 😳
Gauri: aur waise bhi.. if I didn't love you.. I wouldn't be here 😕
Shiv: where?? In my room.. wat??? Gauri… aaj kal toh yeh sab chalta hai 😉 😉
Gauri: kya matlab 😕
Shiv: I mean u know.. witout marriage.. yeh sab 😉 he winked at gauri.. as gauri stared at him.. 😲😲😲 she hit him on his shoulder.. as shiv laughed..

Shiv: im just joking... So stop hitting me.. wat a violent wife.. after that remark.. gauri hit him one more time... 😆 😆
Gauri: shiv im cold
Shiv: pehle bolna tha gauri as he took her in a hug.. gauri smiled.. as she pushed him back..
Gauri: sorry still cold.. 😆 she got up.. getting off the bed.. before she could move further.. shiv pulled her back.. pulling her down.. now she was in shiv's lap 😉
Gauri: shiv.. tum..
Shiv: mein.. mein kya huh 😕
Gauri: tum na.. tum.. 😳
Shiv: mein kya gauri 😉 shiv started nuzzling her neck one more time.. feeling mischevious.. 😉
Gauri: shiv stop it..
Shiv: kyun apni biwi se pyar kar raha hoon.. tum ko kya problem hai
Gauri: shiv.. tum.. 😳 as always d best way to cut her off 😉 .. shiv leaned in.. kissing her lips.. making her speechless once again 😳 ... as shiv deepend d kiss.. gauri wrapped her arms around his neck responding back 😉 ... shiv moved gauri off his lap on to the bed.. not breaking off the kiss for a second 😳 😳 ... as he got next to her.. gradually d lights turned off.. 😉 as u see the moon shining bright in the sky 😳 .. among d stars.. bringing out the only light in the room 😉 ..as two lovers.. two soulmates become one.. 😳 😳 😳

True love doesn't have a happy ending: True love doesn't have an ending.

hope u guyz enjoyed 😳 😳

Edited by nyzbabigyal - 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago

#274

hope u guyz enjoyed.. i tried 😳 two parts as promised😉

Edited by nyzbabigyal - 18 years ago

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racho8

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Posted: 18 years ago

#275

Originally posted by: nyzbabigyal
wat'd u get me?? u betta have got me somethin.. im sittin here tryin to update since .. since i started 😆😆😆 and ur out shopping..

i got u pair of "monkey slipers"....and some cute tops..😳😳

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Posted: 18 years ago

#276

Originally posted by: racho8

i got u pair of "monkey slipers"....and some cute tops..😳😳

lol.. well i got u d update.. as promised😉 now im gonna go eat.. im starving

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Iqbaladdict

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Posted: 18 years ago

#277

wow that was so sweet, okay now u kno another one of ur silen readers, keep it up, lovely update, i'm all smiles, 😆

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mad

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Posted: 18 years ago

#278

y do they have to keep this a secret???
but its fun to keep these kind of secrets..... 😈
cos they comes out at very odd moments n then v get to c lot of drama 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago

#279

Originally posted by: Iqbaladdict
wow that was so sweet, okay now u kno another one of ur silen readers, keep it up, lovely update, i'm all smiles, 😆

glad u liked it hun.. i tried😳.. well thanx fo breakin ur silence.. and im really happy to know that d ff brought a smile to ur face.. cuz d comment brought a smile to mine.. thanx jaan 🤗

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Posted: 18 years ago

#280

Originally posted by: ash9
y do they have to keep this a secret??? yaar its not their fault.. who should they tell.. d family's in d farmhouse😆
but its fun to keep these kind of secrets..... 😈 exactly it is😉
cos they comes out at very odd moments n then v get to c lot of drama 😆 ye that's true too 😆

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