FF - tu pyar hai..Last Part 68 Pg 123 - Page 30

Originally posted by: mirchy

Didi..............................Wht is the meaning of the underlined sentence?😉R u gonna make any 1 KMH (Kebab Main Huddi?).😉 haila kabab mein haddi.. when im around??? jaan it just means..wat it says.. true love doesn't have an happy ending cuz true love doesn't have an ending..i just felt like putting d quote.. it doesn't mean anything.. haila.. 😆

The part was absoluately romantic!!!!!I loved it!!!!😳.At last she got "Mangalsutra"!!!!I'm happy actually!!!!Ab tho thaakath milgayina-Shiv ko hit karne keliye!!!!😆😆😆. Bechara Shiv!!!!!!😆 glad u liked it.. i tried my hand at romance.. yep she got her proper mangalsutra...

Both *Cough* Cough* Scenes & Ahem* *Ahem*Scenes wer cute!!!But they must b very careful na? 😉.I think i can read ur mind!!!!!😆😉 glad u liked d cough cough and moon scene😉 lol.. telepathy.. its a weird thing.. it creeps me out.. when in most comments.. d readers guess d story.. i jsut there like huh.. how'd they know😆😆

Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz send the another part without any delay!!!!U can do it di!!!U r talented!!!!👏 hey 2 parts were enough.. will try and update tomorrow.. gotta finish up my paper right now

Overall it was a nice & cute epi(Part!)!!!!!😛.We r lookin 4-ward 4 the Farmhouse part!!! Hpe u'll send it very very soon!!!😳thank you so much jaan.. yep d farm house part's next.. tomorrow hun tomorrow

Originally posted by: shivgauri

i just read everythin together... awesome!!!great work!!!just one doubt, when gauri never comes home at night no1 asks her where she was the previous night??the first time she was with shiv in the island and on valentines day also? i really loved readin ur fanfic!!!pls continue soon!!!

Originally posted by: jiya imdad

that was really a treat Navz, such a romantic part me blushing a tons 😳 glad u liked it hun.. mad blush-a-thons..well that was d point😉 so glad it worked

so atlast she got her proper mangalsutra 😳 , but how sad 😭 she can't wear it until everyone comes to know about their secret wedding............ yep yep she got her mangalsutra... its k.. she can wear d first one😉 and who said.. everyone's gonna find out about their secret wedding???

after coming back home from office shiv arranged a surprise 4 his gauri 😛 , he evn helped her in washing dishes 😆 now that's called a perfect husband 😳 😳 😳 .......... i so agree wit u.. a man should know his way around d kitchen 😆😆😆 shivy knows how to impress his gauri😉

the *cough cough* scenes were soo romantic n the *moon moon* scene was damn sizzling,Oops!! i m getting
goosebumps all over my body 😳 ............. ur so cute.. haila.. glad u liked it.. took me ages to write 😆😆😆.. well that was d cough cough and moon scene as promised😉

thanks for making my weekend special, love u for that 🤗 hmm well im glad to know my update made ur weekend special.. ur comments make my updating worth its fine... all comments do😳 so thanx jaan 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

"True love doesn't have a happy ending: True love doesn't have an ending."
what do u mean by this Navz? Don't tell me ur planning something 😈 , let them be happy together 😳 afterall they r newly weds 😳 😳 😳 haila im so not😈😈.. y would i be planning something hmm.. of course they'll be happy together.. no harm.. no more.. d story'll be a fairy tale.. till it ends😉

looking forward to the next part continue soon 😃 will update tomorrow😳

Originally posted by: Rock_Star

*cough cough*it was so romantic part😳 .....shiv gave gauri her proper mangalsutra😳.... awweez shiv helping gauri with dishes is so cute😳

Originally posted by: Mehandikhan

great plz cont soon. 👏

Originally posted by: desi chic

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

**FAINTS**
Will comment upon recovery... 😳

Cheers,
dc

Originally posted by: nyzbabigyal

haila.. tu bhi na.. get up already 😆

Ok fine...

But after what you wrote, I'm not sure of consciousness!!!! Omg... so many MKL moments😳😳 Thank goodness the family finally left them alone!!!

Omg... Shiv is so chalak, so adorable, so sexy all at the same time!! I am simply and madly in love with him!!! Haila... Navs you are a genius I'm telling you girl... You need to write a book or something. I'm number one for the first copy with autograph!!! The black sari, the wet hair... the dimmed lighting... the dinner... the mangalsutra... hai hai!!👏

Perfecto songs, and imagery😳😳 Omg, how cute, Shiv's like don't wash dishes, I'll deal with them. Yaar, I want a carbon copy of this man. Sighhhhhhhhhh.... Margayi main...😳😳 And when they danced, I was like all goo-goo-ga-ga, my brain is fried, and I don't care!😆😳 So goood!!!

And then she turns to get him a shirt, but then her heart starts to beat really fast, and so does mine... Her breaths become shortened, and so do mine... and as he comes closer, she feels shivers, and so do I... and omg... omg... omg!!!😳

And he picks her up!!! Omg, I would've just died and landed straight in heaven... *looks up with glittery eyes*...😳 And he sets her on the bed and she's so nervous... Well I don't blame her. He's such a goner... Lost in her completely... and then... and then... magic happens... the moon shines bright as ever (besharam kahin ka!😆).. and the stars... and the two... finally become... ONE... forever...

***FAINTS***

Dammit, you are tooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good yaar!!! Nothing left to be desired... nothing... well I won't mention anything *coughs*😆

Continue soon!!👏👏👏

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: desi chic

Ok fine...

But after what you wrote, I'm not sure of consciousness!!!! Omg... so many MKL moments😳😳 Thank goodness the family finally left them alone!!! lmao yep yep.. kya yaar.. first time they got a chance to be alone.. mkl moments toh honi zaroori thi na😉

Omg... Shiv is so chalak, so adorable, so sexy all at the same time!! I am simply and madly in love with him!!! Haila...breathe hun.. BREATHE.. wooosahhhhhhhh😆😆😆 Navs you are a genius I'm telling you girl... thank you thank you.. i shall take a bow.. im on cloud 9.. thanx to u.. even though i can't write wellYou need to write a book or something. funny.. can u imagine me writing a book.. nah.. that's just pure comedy😆I'm number one for the first copy with autograph!!!lmao.. autograph.. kya baat hai.. thnx though jaan. ur too sweet wit ur praising.. The black sari, the wet hair... the dimmed lighting... the dinner... the mangalsutra... hai hai!!👏its bollywood ishtyle😉 so it was needed.. d black sari.. d wet hair.. dim lights.. and so on.. i was gonna post a pic of d sari.. but haila no time

Perfecto songs, and imagery😳😳 glad u liked it.. first i was gonna use one song.. but then i changed my mind.. so it was 2 songs😆Omg, how cute, Shiv's like don't wash dishes, I'll deal with them. Yaar, I want a carbon copy of this man. Sighhhhhhhhhh.... Margayi main...😳😳 let's go find ourselves a carbon copy seriously.. such men r hard to find.. he's just 😍😍And when they danced, I was like all goo-goo-ga-ga, my brain is fried, and I don't care!😆😳 So goood!!! lmao.. ur too cute.. im literally 🤣🤣🤣

And then she turns to get him a shirt, but then her heart starts to beat really fast, and so does mine... Her breaths become shortened, and so do mine... and as he comes closer, she feels shivers, and so do I... and omg... omg... omg!!!😳mad blush-a-thons huh.. hota hai😉

And he picks her up!!! Omg, I would've just died and landed straight in heaven... *looks up with glittery eyes*...😳 And he sets her on the bed and she's so nervous... Well I don't blame her. He's such a goner... Lost in her completely... and then... and then... magic happens... the moon shines bright as ever (besharam kahin ka!😆) hey don't blame chanda mama.. he's just bringing light in d room😉.. and the stars... and the two... finally become... ONE... forever... oh ye they do.. 2 soulmates.. 2 lovers become 1😉

***FAINTS***

Dammit, you are tooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good yaar!!! Nothing left to be desired... nothing... well I won't mention anything *coughs*😆lmao.. haila.. cough i don't wanna know either 😆.. kya yaar.. ur seriously too sweet.. i just made it extra special - well i tried😳.. cuz it was their june 19th😉😉

Continue soon!!👏👏👏

Cheers,

dc thank you so much jaanu 🤗