kriyaansh OS: happy b'day mysterious devil

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Posted: 12 years ago
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<font size="5">Hi evryone, am akanksha aka
ayeshaKR...a die hard fan of kriyaansh. I m writing sumthng 4 d very 1st
tym in IF dat 2 for my lovely sis sweetdevilKR as its her b'day 2day happy b'day
swthrt nd also for reshma aka KR572 as she is my 1st friend in the
forum...</font>


<font size="5">Dis cncept came in my mind after
reading a post on fb, I wanted it
to be on kriyaansh... ...m sory if esa kuch kisi ne likha hai to...I'll make sure
to remove it...here it goes...</font>


<font color="#9900cc">That
red big ball was making the whole sky shimmer. Birds were returning back to
deir shelters, it was d tym for evry1 to takeoff from their watever work. But
dis part of the country never leaves its chirpy surroundings. Goa is popular
for its beaches. People come here to relax themselves from their hectic
schedule, or to jst enjoy the life, some with friends nd some with their
special ones. All seem happy. Among these happy go lucky souls, a guy was
standing far away from d crowd gazing directly into d sea as if searching
smthing or to be more precise, someone. His face showed no emotions. No means
no. it was lyk he is blank nd dead though he was not. Seeing other couples
walking hand in hand, cuddling each other, something pricked him inside nd a
faint smile appeared on his face as he went into past...</font>


<font color="#9900cc"></font>


<font color="#9900cc">A
guy and a girl were running around the beach chasing each other. They seemed so
happy and carefree as if the world doesn't exist when dey r around each other.
The girl was teasing him nd running which made him groan, he jumped nd held her
by waist above the ground making her squel in pleasure.</font>


<font color="#9900cc">They
were newly married nd had come 4 their honeymoon. They were together since last
5 years. Goa was special as it was d place where they met for the 1st
time nd confessed also. It was vry precious for both of them.</font>


<font color="#9900cc">It
was the second last day of their trip, they were roaming hand in hand with
kria's head on rey's shoulder nd he was engulfing her securely in his arms.
Perfect sight to watch ut was short lived.</font>


<font color="#9900cc">A
little later, wen they were standing on the shore making their knees wet, high
tides started rising, of which they were unaware as both were busy luking into
others' eyes, suddenly out of nowhere a tide came making them stumble a bit
while kria stumbled towards the water. Rey's breath struck into his throat nd he pulled her to him. Both
were scared to death nd rnded up hugging each other as tight as they cud. While
moving back another wave came nd this time engulfed her in the thick sheet
of water making her shout. Rey tried a
lot 2 hold her hand but eventually
failed as water went back. He was about to jump but other people held
him back. Lifeguards dived into the water but came empty handed which shattered
rey to hell. Hr looked at his hands which gripped some of the bangles of her
chuda(whatever u call it), nd placed them near his heart nd fell unconscious.</font>


FLASHBACK ENDS


<font color="#cc33cc">It
happened 3 years back, evry year he comes here on the same date with a hope dat
the waves will tuk him also along with dem to his kria so dat they can meet
there.</font>


<font color="#cc33cc">Water
was continuously touching his feet and rey with teary eyes and a choking voice
said...</font>


<font color="#cc33cc">"chahe
jitna bhi pair (feet) pakad lo, par kabhi maaf nai karunga, kabhi nai"</font>


THE END


<font size="5">I myself cant believe it wud come
out this much crap. Still m xpecting some likes nd reviews. Please do comment
nd u r free for criticizing.</font>


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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanx
4 such beautiful os
which u tried 1st time 4 me
luv u infinity
muah
huggy
i m not gonna send anh testy
as 2day is my birthday
ramya.reddy thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow awesome update
mujhe tho rona aagye pad ke
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ramya.reddy

wow awesome update

mujhe tho rona aagye pad ke
loved it

na yar rulane ke liye nai likha bt m glad u liked it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: SweetDevil_KR

thanx
4 such beautiful os
which u tried 1st time 4 me
luv u infinity
muah
huggy
i m not gonna send anh testy
as 2day is my birthday

u need nt too send any testy...m glad tume pasand aaya
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ayeshaKR

u need nt too send any testy...m glad tume pasand aaya


&
i was not going 2 send u too lol...
luv u
universe ji kare ki
mera har rozzz birthday ho lol...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: SweetDevil_KR


&
i was not going 2 send u too lol...
luv u
universe ji kare ki
mera har rozzz birthday ho lol...


har roz mana lo b'day bt har roz os post karega kon?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I cant believe its our
First try...
Very well Writtend...

Awesum OS...👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: princessSonia

I cant believe its our
First try...
Very well Writtend...

Awesum OS...👏


thank u so much...yes its my 1st attempt
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanx it means a lot

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