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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
Will read it tomorrow & give u review..😊
Thanks for the update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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What a way of proposing ! Armaan has made a very kind proposal to Mallika ! ⭐️
I just loved his style..
Armaan: Kya tum officially mere credit card pe kabja karna chahogi?

Kya tum apna agla karwa chauth ka wrat mere haath se pani pikar kholna chahogi?

Kya tum meri alamaari share karna chahogi?

I cant think beyond that Alka di ! You have rightly put in the words in the scene,, i am also shocked with Armaan's gesture as Mallika got shocked.. n asked as if he is proposing her..
Alka di, I think maine kuch jaldbaazi kar di aapki bhabhi ko propose karne mein..😛😆 Main bhi kuch issi tarah se.. 😉 mazaa aa jataa.. 🤗
Mallika is all set to say YES, but not sure abt the family back home.. But Armaan is much sure abt it. cos he wants to give her a lovely life n get the same with her..
" Tumhare aanso ko muskurahat mein aur dukh ko khushiyon mein badalna chahta hoon " 👏 He can do anything to see joy on her face.. n has got it now ! ⭐️
At shopping, Nidhi is all impressed by Ashu n his answers n thoughts ! 😊 His choice , likes n dislikes have started mattering her n she opt for his choice of dress. It shows the love has begin to shoot in the hearts of two love birds.. Do dil mil rahe hain. magar chupke chupke.. ❤️
Loved Armaan's giggle for Ashu upon his ability to change a person..
Tum use nahi janati.Agar woh samazane lage toh woh baba raamdev ka yog chhudwa de.Brain wash karne me mahir hai woh.
😆 😆 😆
Nidhi looked changed to Armaan n he sparks the ignition .. The pain acutely shown in the eyes when the time to leave comes.. Alka di, you have touched a lovely feeling.. they hardly have met and they are sad on the time to leave.. What a fab write.. ! 😃 So, a programme is set to watch the Camp fire n garba.. !
Major and Engineer at the same time.. Ashu n Armaan are superb Mechanical engineers who have made the Lasor arrangements for the Conference hall. The two are so efficient in their job, n have got the medals from Prime Minister for the discovery of making underground bunkers ! Thats so wonderful Di.. ! They both have given a high round of applause .. ! I too salute this much of efficiency in our Army men ! 👏
Ashu n Nidhi have a lovely unknown feeling in their hearts.. Both are reading their own minds.. n getting the answers within, still not knowing fully whats making them so close.. whats making them so attractive to each other. !
In the camp fire.. Nidhi n Ashu looked at each other... She is looking gorgeous in blue n yellow saree. and he is looking handsome in maroon kurta.. has time come to see together ? Has time come to see their hearts melting for each other ? Has time come to see them becoming Ashni ? has time come...
Lovely n fab chapter Alka di.. i am so happy to see this development in the story ! 👏
Will be waiting for the next now ! To see the beautiful journey of their love.. !
Humko ho rahi hai khabar chupke chupke ❤️❤️





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Posted: 11 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: Diksha_1991

Will read it tomorrow & give u review..😊

Thanks for the update.

Thank you Diksha.I will wait for your review
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: bawaswift

What a way of proposing ! Armaan has made a very kind proposal to Mallika ! ⭐️
I just loved his style..
Armaan: Kya tum officially mere credit card pe kabja karna chahogi?

Kya tum apna agla karwa chauth ka wrat mere haath se pani pikar kholna chahogi?

Kya tum meri alamaari share karna chahogi?

I cant think beyond that Alka di ! You have rightly put in the words in the scene,, i am also shocked with Armaan's gesture as Mallika got shocked.. n asked as if he is proposing her..
Alka di, I think maine kuch jaldbaazi kar di aapki bhabhi ko propose karne mein..😛😆 Main bhi kuch issi tarah se.. 😉 mazaa aa jataa.. 🤗
Mallika is all set to say YES, but not sure abt the family back home.. But Armaan is much sure abt it. cos he wants to give her a lovely life n get the same with her..
" Tumhare aanso ko muskurahat mein aur dukh ko khushiyon mein badalna chahta hoon " 👏 He can do anything to see joy on her face.. n has got it now ! ⭐️
At shopping, Nidhi is all impressed by Ashu n his answers n thoughts ! 😊 His choice , likes n dislikes have started mattering her n she opt for his choice of dress. It shows the love has begin to shoot in the hearts of two love birds.. Do dil mil rahe hain. magar chupke chupke.. ❤️
Loved Armaan's giggle for Ashu upon his ability to change a person..
Tum use nahi janati.Agar woh samazane lage toh woh baba raamdev ka yog chhudwa de.Brain wash karne me mahir hai woh.
😆 😆 😆
Nidhi looked changed to Armaan n he sparks the ignition .. The pain acutely shown in the eyes when the time to leave comes.. Alka di, you have touched a lovely feeling.. they hardly have met and they are sad on the time to leave.. What a fab write.. ! 😃 So, a programme is set to watch the Camp fire n garba.. !
Major and Engineer at the same time.. Ashu n Armaan are superb Mechanical engineers who have made the Lasor arrangements for the Conference hall. The two are so efficient in their job, n have got the medals from Prime Minister for the discovery of making underground bunkers ! Thats so wonderful Di.. ! They both have given a high round of applause .. ! I too salute this much of efficiency in our Army men ! 👏
Ashu n Nidhi have a lovely unknown feeling in their hearts.. Both are reading their own minds.. n getting the answers within, still not knowing fully whats making them so close.. whats making them so attractive to each other. !
In the camp fire.. Nidhi n Ashu looked at each other... She is looking gorgeous in blue n yellow saree. and he is looking handsome in maroon kurta.. has time come to see together ? Has time come to see their hearts melting for each other ? Has time come to see them becoming Ashni ? has time come...
Lovely n fab chapter Alka di.. i am so happy to see this development in the story ! 👏
Will be waiting for the next now ! To see the beautiful journey of their love.. !
Humko ho rahi hai khabar chupke chupke ❤️❤️





Thank you Bawa for your lovely feedback.The two full fledge doctors must be match with two honhaar engineers.So Armaan and ashu kisi bhi tarah se talent me aur dimaag se kum nahi hai.
Mallika is still in dilema how will she face to CV and DB?but the plot will set with Armaan's father.Dekhte hai.There is a connection of armaan's father and CV.You will see it in next chap.

I am eagerly waiting for right time to write their love gestures.Unki tadap,unka dard.Unka telephonic talk all.But the beauty of their relation is Ashutosh's try to meet her.

Maine toh pura agla chapter hi likh diya.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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fabulous uodate❤️!!!
Armaan: Kya tum officially mere credit card pe kabja karna chahogi?
Kya tum apna agla karwa chauth ka wrat mere haath se pani pikar kholna chahogi?
Kya tum meri alamaari share karna chahogi?
Holy words of love. A proposal may take a few minutes, but so does the ending of a movie or a book. So why bother watching the whole movie or reading the whole book?Armaan has always been a very lively character n u continue with that characterisaton . He chose a very unique n beautiful way of proposing Mallika and keeping the proposal as a grand finale to a series of happy moments.

Ashu was smiling and he answered,"dekhiye woh humara professional matter hai.So no comments.Aur jab jaroorat padegi hum woh jankari sab ko denge.
Nidhi was quite impressed by his answer.
Ashu's maturity slowly unfolding n Nidhi not only influenced by his perception but the cahnge in her also visible.
Nidhi was purchasing Bandani dress material.She choose maroon and green dress.
Ashutosh dheere se: sorry Nidhi lekin aap pe na woh blue aur yellow ka combination bahoot achha lagega.
Nidhi ne woh blue aur yellow ka combination wala dress uthaya.
Jyotika : Nidhi perfect matching.
Nidhi: kya?
Jyotika: are is dress ka matching aur kiska?tum kya samzi?
Ashutosh aur Nidhi dono nervous ho gaye.
the entire episode was so cute Alka❤️ and very well written👏

These two engineers also made underground bunkers which cann't catch in Radaar signal.But from bunkars you can put your eyes to all the Radaars of outside.They got medal for this discovery from Prime Mindister.
You have b'fully brot out the contributions of the Indian Army...The Indian Army has proved that the regimental colours its Jawans carry are still a matter of honour. The many wars it faced, have ensured that those traditions would be carried on by many generations of fighting Jawans in the years to come. Most of all, the Jawans have learnt that after all was said and done, honour in battle meant standing one's ground and fighting - even to the last man or tank if necessary.

Nidhi ke dil me aaj kuchh hone laga tha.dil me hi woh soch rahi thi ki muze yeh kya ho raha hai?muze ab apni hi baten paheli kyon lagti hai?
Yahaa Aashu bhi soch raha tha ki mere dil me kuchh khalipan sa kyon aa gaya hai?kya meri koi talash thi jo puri hui
Both Ashu n Nidhi are captivated by each others personality, their unknowable, mysterious allure...their brain has a feel they cud be a part of each others future!"

A very heartwarming n beautiful chapter...very well written⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: deepaligupta197

fabulous uodate❤️!!!
Armaan: Kya tum officially mere credit card pe kabja karna chahogi?
Kya tum apna agla karwa chauth ka wrat mere haath se pani pikar kholna chahogi?
Kya tum meri alamaari share karna chahogi?
Holy words of love. A proposal may take a few minutes, but so does the ending of a movie or a book. So why bother watching the whole movie or reading the whole book?Armaan has always been a very lively character n u continue with that characterisaton . He chose a very unique n beautiful way of proposing Mallika and keeping the proposal as a grand finale to a series of happy moments.

Ashu was smiling and he answered,"dekhiye woh humara professional matter hai.So no comments.Aur jab jaroorat padegi hum woh jankari sab ko denge.
Nidhi was quite impressed by his answer.
Ashu's maturity slowly unfolding n Nidhi not only influenced by his perception but the cahnge in her also visible.
Nidhi was purchasing Bandani dress material.She choose maroon and green dress.
Ashutosh dheere se: sorry Nidhi lekin aap pe na woh blue aur yellow ka combination bahoot achha lagega.
Nidhi ne woh blue aur yellow ka combination wala dress uthaya.
Jyotika : Nidhi perfect matching.
Nidhi: kya?
Jyotika: are is dress ka matching aur kiska?tum kya samzi?
Ashutosh aur Nidhi dono nervous ho gaye.
the entire episode was so cute Alka❤️ and very well written👏

These two engineers also made underground bunkers which cann't catch in Radaar signal.But from bunkars you can put your eyes to all the Radaars of outside.They got medal for this discovery from Prime Mindister.
You have b'fully brot out the contributions of the Indian Army...The Indian Army has proved that the regimental colours its Jawans carry are still a matter of honour. The many wars it faced, have ensured that those traditions would be carried on by many generations of fighting Jawans in the years to come. Most of all, the Jawans have learnt that after all was said and done, honour in battle meant standing one's ground and fighting - even to the last man or tank if necessary.

Nidhi ke dil me aaj kuchh hone laga tha.dil me hi woh soch rahi thi ki muze yeh kya ho raha hai?muze ab apni hi baten paheli kyon lagti hai?
Yahaa Aashu bhi soch raha tha ki mere dil me kuchh khalipan sa kyon aa gaya hai?kya meri koi talash thi jo puri hui
Both Ashu n Nidhi are captivated by each others personality, their unknowable, mysterious allure...their brain has a feel they cud be a part of each others future!"

A very heartwarming n beautiful chapter...very well written⭐️

Thank you Deepali for your awsome reply.Yes,in real ktlk too Armaan's character is most live.And this os will clear that how much he can love mallika?Nidhi and ashu's journey of tranfermation is beginning.But yet inki manzil thodi dur hai.
They both don't know within a short periad how their opinion means for them.

Ashu jis din control ke bahar hoga.Yeh os ek khubsurat mod lega.

But sure you all enjoy ashu' and nidhi's beautiful relation
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great going Alka ji. Itani achhi Mallu . Kash KTLK me bhi Mallu ko Armu se pyar ho jata. 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajanigandha26

Great going Alka ji. Itani achhi Mallu . Kash KTLK me bhi Mallu ko Armu se pyar ho jata. 😆

Thank you Rajani.Woh kya hai na KP ji ke dimag pe mera jor nahi chalta.Warna yeh KTLK aur bhi pyara hota.😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: parmarA

Thank you Bawa for your lovely feedback.The two full fledge doctors must be match with two honhaar engineers.So Armaan and ashu kisi bhi tarah se talent me aur dimaag se kum nahi hai.

Mallika is still in dilema how will she face to CV and DB?but the plot will set with Armaan's father.Dekhte hai.There is a connection of armaan's father and CV.You will see it in next chap.

I am eagerly waiting for right time to write their love gestures.Unki tadap,unka dard.Unka telephonic talk all.But the beauty of their relation is Ashutosh's try to meet her.

Maine toh pura agla chapter hi likh diya.

Thanks for the precap for the next chapter Alka di.. ! 😃 I am eagerly waiting to read the Army men and the two docs progressing towards their love lives.. !
Kahaan poora chapter likha aapne di... ye toh sirf trailor tha.. right ? 😉
@ Red.. And i am eagerly waiting to get treated by that Pyaar ka dard aur mithaa ehsaas !!! ❤️
Edited by bawaswift - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
hi alka di...sorry for the late comment..i just read all the parts..all r so beautiful..i liked this FF..pls continue soon😊

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