asya: true love never shatters

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi frnds
this is my first story...
my story starts from current track going on . zoya in ayans house as his so called wife... but dont worry its all about asya...šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰...as i love asya...

CHAPTER 1
AYAN :zoya please khana khalo tumne subah se kuch nahi khaya hai .
ZOYA :ayan mujhe bhuk nahi hai . please leave me alone.
ayan leaves...
at the evening
ayan was talking to asad in his phone and was telling him that zoya is not taking care of her and while talking he came to his room...
and saw zoya was lying on the floor...
he screamed zoya and cut the call...
he called the doctor...
DOCTOR : patient ki halat bahut kharab hai . she is really weak. aur inhe bahut bada sadma laga hai . apko inhe khush rakhna hoga aur inki har baat manni hogi. otherwise i am afraid that anything can happen .aur inki body mai hemoglobin ki bhi kami hai make her eat fruits and all her favourite things. but she has to eat !!!
AYAN : thank u doctor . i will take care of her .
asad called ayan..
ASAD : WHAT HAPPENED TO ZOYA ?????
he asked angrily...
ayan told asad all that what doctor told him...
ASAD : ye sab meri wajah se hua hai.. ab mai miss farooqi ko kabhi apne aapse alag nahi karunga. mai aab aur koi risk nahi le sakta .
AYAN : par bahijan nikhat ki sagai ka kya. we have to wait for the wedding.
ASAD : ayan i am not that selfish 😔
AYAN : bhaijan aap mujhe galat samaj rahe hai...
ASAD : i will do something jisse nikhat ka nikah bhi hoga aur zoya bhi mere pas rahegi...
AYAN : how ??
ASAD : first give the phone to zoya . i want to talk to her .
ayan went to his and asked her how was she felling but she didnt reply..he told zoya that asad is on line and wants to talk to her
ZOYA : kehdo apne bhaise ki mujhe unse koi baat nahi karni . jo insan apne hi pyaar ko bechde usse kya baat karu . and i wonder agar tumne unse meri jaan mangi hoti toh shayad unhone mujhe abhi tak mar diya hota.
AYAN : stop it ! tumhe pata hai tum kya bol rahi ho...
and he suddenly realised that asad was on line and he heard each and everything... asad cut his call suddenly and started crying..😭
ASAD : nahi... i have to be strong. i have to make her happy. and he started thinking...
in ayans house...
here ayan started thinking.
AYAN TO HIMSELF : mujhe kuch karna hoga . zoya ki halat bhaut kharab hai .
ayan made juice for zoya and he entered the room...
AYAN : mona darling tumhe pata hai aaj mujhe samaj mai aya ki kitchen kitni daravni place hai... mujhe 2 ghante lage ye juice banane k liye šŸ˜‰
but zoya didnt reply...
AYAN : please forgive your rabert .
zoya took a sip of that juice . and suddenly started coughing.. and little smile came on her face...
ZOYA : ayan juice mai salt ki jagah sugar dalti hai.
AYAN :sorryyy... voh difference samaj nahi aya... and started smiling...
asad in his office he called hassena bi...
hassena bi : what happened ?
ASAD : yeh bunglow dekh rahe hai aap yeh abhi tak ka bhopal ka sabse mehnga bunglow hai. many foriegn people wants to take it. par maine socha ki mai usse dunga joh meri nikhat se nikah karega as a gift. but meri ek shart hai .
hassena bi was on cloud nine.
hassena bi : aap joh bolenge voh mai karungi
ASAD : good i like it . firstly nikhat ka nikah jald se jald ho jana chahiye aur ab aap zoya ko bilkul bhi taunt nahi karengi aur joh bhi mai karunga usme aap dakhal nahi dengi...
HASSENA BI : dakhal matlab mai samji nahi ?
ASAD : baad mai aap sab samaj jayengi. aur haan kuch bhi galat kiya toh mujhe sab lena bhi ata hai !!!!
HASSENA BI : dont worry... ab sab theek hoga..
and she went..
ASAD TO HIMSELF : ZOYA GET READY YOUR AKDU BUT SWEET ASAD AHMED KHAN IS BACK WITH A BANG šŸ˜‰


PRECAP: NEXT MORNING
one employee enter ayan's house
(get ready for asya šŸ˜†
office romance )šŸ˜‰
(bad days are gone)



so hows it guys... please tell me whether i should continue or not...
and give your suggestions... and sorry for any grammatical mistakes...
& no bashing please..😊

INDEX :
CHAPTER 1 : PAGE 1
CHAPTER 2 : PAGE 5
CHAPTER 3 : PAGE 10
CHAPTER 4 : PAGE 18
CHAPTER 5 : PAGE 25
CHAPTER 6 : PAGE 34
CHAPTER 7 : PAGE 46
CHAPTER 8 : PAGE 57
CHAPTER 9 : PAGE 69
CHAPTER 10 : PAGE 78
CHAPTER 11 : PAGE 93
CHAPTER 12 : PAGE 113
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CutiepieHarshad thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
wow awesome part
loved it
plz cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: awesome

wow awesome part

loved it
plz cont soon

thanx
i will for sure... šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago
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guys is the story that bad...
only one comment...😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rockstar_16

guys is the story that bad...

only one comment...😭

hey dear don't be sad wait for sometimešŸ˜›
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
amazing startšŸ‘
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#7
wow interesting story
waiting for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: nonstop

superb

plz update soon

thanx
i will update soon for sure...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: cooljenny

amazing startšŸ‘

cont soon

thanks for your appreciation...
it keeps me motivating..
i will update soon...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice story...how i wish this happen in the serial as well

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