*Completed* Th#2 ArHi SS: Make Me Love

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Kay!!!!

Edit

I feel for Khushi, it is not easy being in her shoes...not because Arnav does not understand her love, it is because she feels so deeply and it is a difficult burden to bear.
She needs to get everyone to understand and accept her feelings, Arnav most importantly.
Edited by Kalyaani - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res

UnRes

Khushi's feelings from gratitude->respect->admiration->
awareness->attraction->infatuation->something more which is
Love is described perfectly. Love for a person doesn't see the
differences like rich or poor, ugly or beautiful and in this
case the age. Her love for him is pure just like her.

Arnav is shocked by her revelation because I think he
respects her and admires her but doesn't feel
anything else.

Nani didnot reveal Arnav love life too which will be
a key part in this story in my opinion.

Awesome update Zehra 😊
Edited by Skiran - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Twigs!!!!
~Edit~

The adoption thing came to my head to but I put it away immediately.. to think of Arnav-Khushi in that light is too 😲 for me.
Coming to the update, Arnav reacted just as I had thought.. he will think of her feelings as some kind of a schoolgirl crush, perhaps that she is misinterpreting her feelings since she has hero-worshipped him for so long. And that he is too old for her. This was bound to happen, now I want to see where it goes from this point. This reminds me of movies like Lamhe, even Black... though Lamhe is one of the finest movies I have ever seen.

I loved how you walked us through the slow progression of Khushi's feelings for him, right from her teens uptil now. Lovely! You described her near-obsession with him without making it look creepy. That was wonderful. 👏

Now will I come to know what is going on in Arnav's head? How will these two come together? Has Arnav ever seen Khushi in that light? Will wait for you to tell me all that and more 😊

PS - I was we make this like Unconditional and MD. Only 3 updates per thread 😃 Heres calling fellow spammers!

Edited by vgedin - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res
unres...
wonderful update...very well written
Edited by siamesecat - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
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Why is he rejecting her?
Doesn't he love her?-ofcourse he does right?
He wasn't seeing anyone?😕 kuch toh hai :P break the suspense na :D
whats doing in his mind?😉

I loved Khush's Lovestory😳
You described her feelings very well👏

Nani would have guessed that both have feelings for each other-i hope😛
Why didn't she insist Arnav to get married😕

Update soonish 😊
Edited by KeerthuKiarshi - 11 years ago
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res
awesomeee update.. U made my going_terrible_day awesome with it.🤗
Um down with fever so this tym u'll b spared from my essay long comment but not tht short..😳
but absolutely loveeed the update...I felt like i cud picture the full process of khushi falling in love arnav. I am rooting for LI's arnav so u guess i'll spare this arnav for others.. (till when i don't knw😳)
Ahan so nk is to come again haan.. green arnav on his way? 😉
why shud i go for soemthing better when i can have the best?? letme typ again khushi is just way to awesome here
arnav babua ka past kahan hai zehra bitia?? And when will we get an insight in arnav's mind?? batao batao tells tells...😉

Edited by simi58 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG
but that was expected huh

i would love to know Arnav's POV on this whole matter
you have beautifully described khushi's journey of falling in love and its realization ... i would like to know what Arnav think about Khushi


Wonderful update
Loved it

Keep writing

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