*Completed* Th#2 ArHi SS: Make Me Love - Page 5

Z, that's the thought that came to me with the previous chapter ending, I understood you meant to say this and it came as that.

Awesome
Loved it
Could totally feel khushis pain

Congrats dear ... :)

NO!!! it cannot happen like that!
arnav outright rejected her! well, kind of guessed it. but S-T-I-L-L !! 😭
how can a man who has seen a 13 yr old girl literally grow up infront of him have romantic feelings for her. or does he??
her love story is on the silver lining of love and obsession...and i think arnav can feel it too!
khushi's pov aka love story was so beautifully written... loved it :)

i hope next you'll come with arnav's pov? :)

nani could not make arnav marry, so wishes to see khushi being married? nk's proposal...err so there is nk's role in the story. our madcap nk or the gentleman nk?

and arnav was surprised because khushi obediently listened to him and made herself presentable or because she knew where the tissue box was on his dressing table?? :O

ok, i know you squeeze out time to update both the lovely stories. and ofcourse it takes time to update, specially when you are regular. but this time im highly nuclearly impatient to read the next chapter. so pls update sooner than what you do? :P :P
no pressure. :D

loved the update. period.

This story is so touching.read it in a go.

poor thing kushi

Khushi's realization was perfectly written.. good one.. waiting to what they do now..

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Just an awesome update really khushi has guts to stand before him. He is playing cool and she is like cucumber. Ho my god it was like a thriller I am really very nerves to know Wht happens. Wht Will nani do and Arnav . If the groom comes to c her Wht Will she do. Biting my nails. Super excited for the next update. Thks for the mail in advance dear.

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Loved da way u described her stages of falling in love wid Arnav how first it was gratitude at showing the care, giving da freedom and most importantly RESPECT which she was craved in broothal. She was not interested in her past All she wanted to know abt him. She felt gratitude towards him for giving her freedom of choice n for everything he did n was doing for her. Then da stage stage of gratitude turned into RESPECT because he showed respect by his words. Respect for which she was yearning for a whole year feeling suffocated in atmosphere where there was only hunger n lust. And then her respect turned into admiration for his charitable activities. And came the stage of awareness crashing down on her tht she notice each n everything of him from the huskiness of his voice to the feeling of his presence even without seeing him. This freaked het out wht was this thing and she distanced herself but the time waz up. First she thought it was attraction which is natural but soon she figured out tht the hell it was! At last her attraction turned to infatuation which turned into love and when he asked her to carry on her studies abroad. Of cource she never wanted to do dat. how can she go away frm him. She could never do dat but instead of saying no she asked for a years break. And now she had confessed I was expecting Arnav to react like dis. but he can't see tears in her eyes yet he was helpless in giving her wht she desired. Nani came there n again as I expected she started the topic of marriage. Khushi poor she on one hand her confession didnt meet the expected reaction n then her proposal. Ah kya timinh hain boss