*Completed* Th#2 ArHi SS: Make Me Love - Page 4

Congratulations congratulations

that was emotional... arnav's inhibition.. khushi's passion... so well written.

Now has all that really come as a shock to Arnav? Or is he shocked that Khushi would say something to him about it?

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I just loved the way u described how her respect and attraction for him had gradually changed to love and obsession along with the events associated with them . The life style she was provided was something which she hadnt ever dreamt of but at the same time she enjoyed his warmthness and affection without giving any hoots to the comforts and luxuries she had been bestowed with. She cherished every moment spent with him and treasure it as long standing memories.

Her observation of his moods and habits and her efforts in impressing him and at the same time unknowingly changing herself in this process was so relatable to a person who is in her adolescent/teenage.

His anger and her helplessness in making him understand her view point were written wonderfully. I just love the lines where u described that she was sure of only one thing now and that is him and his pain in seeing her cry for the first time and pleading her to stop and her reply was so touching.


Nani - Khushi's conversation was so endearing and her answers were so crisp and to the point thereby stressing her frame of mind to him and trying him to see sense. I just loved the last line and the line where she argues why she needs a better one if she has the best. Bang on 👍🏼
Sorry i am not able to quote those lines.

Emotional and a stirring the thoughts update and sorry for late unresing . Waiting for Wednesday😳

The banners are really good. Thank u Laavanyaji and Sarunfanatic Ji😊

Laavanyaji - U have really brought the essence of the story and the updates till now through this banner 👍🏼 and i just loved how u incorporated that bracelet in it. U have also put up some scenes there . Is this a hint to the forth coming updates Zehra ??😉😛


PS: I have some doubts. First how did Khushi land up in the brothel scene . Second , was she sexually abused there ?? Though i remember the doctor's and Lavanya's conversation at the hotel but still i am really unable to believe she wasn't abused at all as she was so beautiful enough . Sorry if i had misinterpreted. i am waiting for her past and the details about his love life to get unfolded.

Wow!!Here comes the update (doing chamkeeli dance)
Congo Shongo for the new thread!!...😃🥳
I loved the way you described about how Khushi's fellings for Arnav changed as she grow up...😳
She had gratitude for him for saving her from Shyam and giving her a new life...😊
Respect for considering her wishes and likes...👍🏼
Admiration for his charity works...Helping children and women...👏
Then attraction as she was not able to keep her eyes and mind off him..
Infatuation...and finally she had fallen in LOVE with Arnav...😃

Really Di,you are a genious...😎
Loved the part "the wind carried her message wherever it blew -I love you Arnav"
He had given her everything...Now it is the time to give her what she really wants...Arnav ji,please accept her😳...
Why is he not letting her to complete her confession?...😕
and he is happy for her and NK?
Nani will find out everything soon,won't she?😊
My most fav dialogue was when Khushi asked him "Why should I go for something better when I have the best?"...😃
Answer her Nannav...Answer her...
Thanks a lot for the awesome update n PM (even though I had read it before the PM😃)...

Poor Khushi

first of all congrats for new thread 🥳

wonderful update... loved it... i really dont know wat else to say ... might come bk n edit after rereading :)

Bookmaking in page seven
As you updated it does matters even.

Loved it. It wierd but wierdly nice to read about Khushi thinking about her happiness. Weres she is the one who think about others and Arnav who is "selfish" thinking about himself... But this time its the oppisatie