AyRa SS: Delusional Lies - Last Part updated p. 3! - Page 5

Originally posted by: Wafah

Sorry haven't commented on this before or your other story. You write their characters so well and I love the situations you create. :) I'm also a little afraid of how their story will progress, almost worried that it will end in heartbreak for both of them. At least now her love isn't one-sided. Hopefully it will all turn out good...*fingers crossed* I also wish that they show Ayaan and Humeira more in sync. Humeira has always been a little intuitive with Ayaan I think but I wish it goes both ways. Do keep writing!

P.S. I have to ask...Have you watched the show Rishta.com?

I just saw this now! I know! I stopped watching Qubool Hai for a bit when their story was literally going nowhere. And I wasnt sure of Vikrant Massey at first but man, hes been the best Ayaan ever. Exactly! These two have been friends since they were little kids and they live in the same house! How could you not be in sync with each other?! They should literally know everything about each other!

Yes! I loved Rishta.com. I so wish there was a season 2 but I dont think thats happening anytime soon at least. Kavis beautiful accent! Ahhh!

Originally posted by: hillykhan

Loved this SS to bits ! I've been love in AyRa .. and have read this twice. it's that AMAZINGG!
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Do write more. you're abs. faab and + AyRa, you manage to rock it even more. Truly loved the endingg :') sniff*
seriously, you've got to write more. Love your Humera and & Ayaan. <333 :D

Aww, thank you! You read it twice?! Wow! Thats very encouraging! Thank you!

Originally posted by: Rushitaa

I haven't finished this SS yet but just wanted to tell you that I love that you write like a professional. Thank you for paying attention to grammar (many writers on this forum dont even bother to read through their work before posting their work which is a bummer considering a few of them are great. but I never finish em cz its annoying to read stories with so many errors.) Also, as an *ahem* aspiringwriter each and every word is important to me lol so your choice of words is impressive.
Ppphhinallly, I'm enjoying Ayaan and Hum's track more than the main leads SO keep writing on these two! From what I've read so far, you're an amazing writer!

Oh wow! Thanks! Im not even an Arts/English student so its shocking that my writing seems professional to anyone! Lol I do love writing though. Thank you for the kind words! I will definitely try to write something else soon! (And if you ever write sometime, please do PM me! And even better, post it in the AyRa AT so more people can see it!)

Originally posted by: astonm

I love love love this! IT'S SO CUTE!

Great great job :)

Originally posted by: .Anamika.

I just saw this now! I know! I stopped watching Qubool Hai for a bit when their story was literally going nowhere. And I wasnt sure of Vikrant Massey at first but man, hes been the best Ayaan ever. Exactly! These two have been friends since they were little kids and they live in the same house! How could you not be in sync with each other?! They should literally know everything about each other!

Yes! I loved Rishta.com. I so wish there was a season 2 but I dont think thats happening anytime soon at least. Kavis beautiful accent! Ahhh!

Originally posted by: Wafah

Haha yes, Rishta.com was very well written. I asked because the line Humeira says to Ayaan was reminiscent of the last scene between Rohan and Isha.

Vikrant Massey does seem to really bring out Ayaan as a character. I hope as Ayaan and Humeira they get closer (despite the impeding doom and gloom) maybe they will become more attuned to each other.

I like the subtleties of their relationship because it's not OTT and hopefully it stays that way.

Do write more...when the thoughts invade you, ya? (my turn to *nudge nudge*)