AyRa SS: Delusional Lies - Last Part updated p. 3! - Page 2

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If anybody would like a PM, could you please send me a request? I'm having some troubles with the PM thing.

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It is wonderful. These two aregreat together.
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Omg.. this was amazing please continue. i watch QH for these two now days the Tanu-Asad-Zoya love triangle is way to streched and jst plain annoying now. i love how Humeira is now days in the show tho :D
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do continue ...it was awesome ...pm me if u can i really really loved it
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This is freaking awesome.
I love Aayan and Humaira.
And the way you write is flawless.

I'd rather that this happens than the crappy stuff they show in the soap.
Update soon.

Richa.
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I guess its after Humaira went missing and Ayaan began to get worried for her safety and felt guilty for the way he behaved with her made me fall in love with this couple too.. I love them. And, then when she came back and his happiness, then the shock on knowing that she is not his Humaira anymore but some Rajni and the annoyed and jealous side of Ayaan whenever she talked about Vikram . The sindoor moment the way he was observing her moves with so much passion and he looked so intense and the tantrik moment when she all scared and worried fell into his arms, I loved them all.. They complement each other. And, this SS I love it , Its interesting.. Do continue soon. And, if you pm when you update then do add me to your pm list.

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Thank you Reeyana! If you could send me a request, that would be great!

Thank you!

Originally posted by: -Racha-

It is wonderful. These two aregreat together.

Thank you, Racha. They really are!

Originally posted by: lover1998

Omg.. this was amazing please continue. i watch QH for these two now days the Tanu-Asad-Zoya love triangle is way to streched and jst plain annoying now. i love how Humeira is now days in the show tho :D

Thank you, I've always loved these two from the beginning. It's nice to see them get more screen time now!

Originally posted by: malini1996

do continue ...it was awesome ...pm me if u can i really really loved it

Thank you! If you can, please send me a request!

Originally posted by: richa1792

This is freaking awesome.

I love Aayan and Humaira.

And the way you write is flawless.

I'd rather that this happens than the crappy stuff they show in the soap.

Update soon.

Richa.

Aw, thanks, Richa! I wish their love story takes off soon on the show as well now!

Thank you!

Originally posted by: hellomotto369

Love it please continue!!

Thank you, I will!

Thank you, Yaariyan. If I'm not mistaken, you're from the CSI forum, right? As you can see, I'm a big fan of all Ayaans!

Yupp, I will!

Originally posted by: Enchantress

I guess its after Humaira went missing and Ayaan began to get worried for her safety and felt guilty for the way he behaved with her made me fall in love with this couple too.. I love them. And, then when she came back and his happiness, then the shock on knowing that she is not his Humaira anymore but some Rajni and the annoyed and jealous side of Ayaan whenever she talked about Vikram . The sindoor moment the way he was observing her moves with so much passion and he looked so intense and the tantrik moment when she all scared and worried fell into his arms, I loved them all.. They complement each other. And, this SS I love it , Its interesting.. Do continue soon. And, if you pm when you update then do add me to your pm list.

Dee

Yes! I love the way Ayaan gets jealous. Vikrant is a really good actor. He shows a lot of emotions and brought more depth to his character. Thank you! If you could send me a request, that'd be great!

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2: The Escape

Humeira looked back as she fell out of her balcony with a thud. She winced at the pain in her foot. Nobody was there and none of the lights were on either. Good, she thought, nobody'll notice that I'm gone until morning. Humeira had figured out that Ayaan was in on her secret as well and there was no turning back now. If she stayed here, he would tell everyone and her mother would surely fix their nikkha in no time. She couldn't punish Ayaan like that. Not again. Not when she knew that he didn't love her. No, she had to leave, as far as possible from her home. She wrapped her silky black sari around her snugly to merge with the darkness around her. Goodbye, Ayaan...

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Ayaan walked up to Humeira's room stealthily and knocked a few times. He scrunched his eyebrows when he heard nobody move inside. He tried opening the door but it was locked from the inside. Where was Humeira?!

Ayaan rushed to the kitchen quietly. Humeira would always sneak ice cream and chocolates at night so nobody could see her as a kid. She had to be there, he told himself. As he walked down the stairs, he saw a silhouette pass the house outside. Curious, he tip toed to the garden, hiding behind a tall plant. He saw a petite framed girl scurrying around with a black sari fluttering by. Shit. Humeira was running away.

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Humeira breathed heavily as she as she saw Ayaan's name pop up on her screen again. For the fifteenth time that evening, she ignored it. How did he know she was gone?! She looked around nervously, somehow feeling as if Ayaan would pop up at the train station as well. No, he couldn't. There was no way she would let him stop her now. It could ruin both of their lives. She looked at the large clock on the platform. It read 9:45. Her train would be here soon.

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"HUMEIRA!" Humeira froze as she heard his voice. She looked back reluctantly.

Humeira slowly walked backwards, aware that Ayaan was fully covered in sweat now. He hated running and by the looks of it, he'd been running for a fairly long time to get to her. His face was red with fury.

Humeira clutched her bag tightly, biting her bottom lip, hoping the train would come right then and there so she could leave.

"HUMEIRA!" She shut her eyes, trying to forget Ayaan's voice. A single tear escaped her eyes. She had to face him, but how? This was the one guy she'd fallen in love with, the only one in her entire life, and he'd been pretty clear that he didn't love her. Multiple times, in fact. Her eyes were still shut but she could hear footsteps coming towards her.

"Are you crazy, woman?!" She opened her eyes wide. He was just a few meters away from her now. Where is the train?! She frantically looked around, trying to plan an escape route but her brain never functioned when Ayaan was around her.

Humeira dropped her bag and inched away from Ayaan, finally falling backwards towards a bench. But before her rear end hit it, she felt Ayaan's hands pull her towards him. She breathed in sharply, not daring to breathe out or even look at him. She knew the tears would start pouring if she even stole a glance at him.

"I'm sorry." A tiny voice came out. Ayaan loosened his firm hold on her and placed her on the bench. "Please, aap gussa mat ho humse, Ayaanji."

"Humeira, stop it. I know you're just pretending now." Ayaan sounded frustrated but Humeira still didn't look up at him.

"I ' I'm Rajni. Rajni Shukla." She tried to sound exasperated but she knew there was no going back now. Ayaan was her oldest friend. He could tell in a second if she was lying. She sighed, giving up. "I'm sorry, Ayaan, please don't be angry."

Ayaan sat down beside her, looking up at the starry night in the open platform. How did he hurt his little Humeira begum so much that she wanted to leave the state all alone without informing anyone? Without telling him?! He sighed too. "I'm not angry! I'm just mad."

"They're synonyms, Ayaan." She whispered.

Ayaan looked sideways at her. He knew she was avoiding his gaze. "Humeira'" He said softly this time. "I promise, I'm not angry at you."

Finally, Humeira looked at him and immediately she felt her vision get blurry. Crap, she thought. Why was she such a big cry baby?!

Ayaan looked around, shocked. He'd never wanted to make her cry. "Humeira, I'm sorry! I didn't mean to - "

"Why are you saying sorry?" Humeira interrupted him. "It was my fault! All my fault!" Humeira tried to stop her tears but there was no way now. Ayaan looked at her helplessly. "Ayaan, do you remember when we became friends?" She said in a quiet voice.

"Became? We were always friends!" Ayaan took his jacket off and put it on Humeira. She shivered as his finger brushed her bare arm but tried to disguise the reaction as the chilly wind.

"No, the first day of school, Ayaan. I was 6 years old and you were 7." She paused. "I was such a slow child. Everyone made fun of me. I made my d and p's backwards. I couldn't even tell my secondary colours apart and the normal kids would read all their poems in front of the class! And I was the smallest, chubbiest kid in the whole grade!" Ayaan smiled. Humeira had always been the chubby girl straight up until high school.

Ayaan didn't know what she was trying to tell him. Hell, he didn't remember what he had for breakfast this morning, let alone what he did when he was 7 but she wasn't crying anymore so he let her continue.

"You weren't even in my grade, Ayaan. But every time we had lunch outside and nobody would let me on the swings, you would fight everyone for me! You'd save your juice and give it to me. You'd share your toys. You protected me like nobody else did. Abu was never home for me and ammi was always busy with something or the other. Nobody had any time for me. But you did, Ayaan. Always." Humeira looked at the railway tracks in front of her sadly. She twirled the sari's pallu in her hands, uncomfortably.

"Ayaan...what I'm trying to say is that - Even at that age, I'd lost it for you. Hum aapse tabse pyaar karte the, jabse shayaad humeh pyaar ka matlab bhi nahin pata tha." She said quietly. Ayaan didn't say a word. Shit. He felt like someone had punched him right through his stomach and left a big hole there. Why didn't I ever notice this? Humeira had always been there for him, no matter what. Why had it taken so long for him to realize that his overprotective nature was actually love? He felt his pocket for the new ring he'd bought that evening. He had wanted to do this at the right time and not when she was crying and trying to run away from him. It's now or never, dude.

"Humeira, I never knew you were - " Ayaan started but Humeira started crying again. Her big eyes always perfectly lined with kohl were all dark and smudged. He felt a few gazes on him. Great, now people are going to think I'm trying to molest her something.

"Okay, shh, calm down. Hold on. I'll get some water." Ayaan dug his wallet out to buy some water.

"I want a chocolate bar." Humeira sobbed.

Ayaan scrunched his eyebrows. "What?!" He said a little too loud.

"Chocolate. I like the white chocolate ones." Humeira blew her nose loudly with her sari's pallu.

"I know what you like." Ayaan rolled his eyes. "The things I do for you, Humeira begum." Ayaan muttered to himself. But Humeira heard it. Her heart fluttered whenever he called her that. She had to get out of here, she thought. She had just poured her heart out to Ayaan. And what good was that going to do now? Ayaan never loved her and he never would. Humeria turned around to see Ayaan walking away from her. She heard the loud horn of the train. She took a large gulp of air and quickly grabbed her bags and ran towards it.

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"Ek chocolate bar aur ek paani ki bottle de na." Ayaan said to the man standing at the small shop. "White chocolate bar." Ayaan smiled as he corrected himself.

"Jee saab." The man turned around to get the products. "Saabji?"

"Hmm?" Ayaan grabbed his wallet to get his money out.

"Aapki girlfriend hai woh?" The man asked curiously.

Ayaan looked up, raising his eyebrows at the man. "Uh - nahin. Meri - meri mangetar hai." Ayaan smiled sheepishly to himself again. He had never used that term before.

"Toh phir woh aap ko chod he kyun jaa rahi hai?" The man passed him his chocolate and water.

"Kya - ?" Ayaan turned his neck abruptly. Sure enough, his little Humeira begum was trying to run away from him again. "Yeh ladki..." Ayaan gave the man his money and ran taking his belongings.

"HUMEIRA! WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU?!!" Ayaan screamed at her. She was already on the train now. She didn't dare turn around to face her but Ayaan knew she had heard him. He saw her flinch just a little before stepping on the train.

Ayaan ran as fast as his legs would let him. He could practically feel every cell in his body vibrating as his heart pumped harder and harder. He really should have listened to Humeira and joined the gym classes. Finally he was running right beside the train, facing Humeira.

"Humeira, I'm going to die!" He gasped, trying hard to keep up with the moving train.

"You're over-reacting! And I told you to go to the gym! It's your fault." Humeira folded her arms in front of her, almost in anger.

"Mujhe P T Usha nahin banna" Ayaan tried to grab the pole but his sweaty palms couldn't get any grip. "And I meant, I'll die without you!"

Humeira's look softened. "Ayaan, shut up. You made it very clear that you don't have any feelings for me. Please let me go, Ayaan." She looked like she was in misery. Her eyes were red and puffy, her liner was smudged and she looked like she was going to cry again. Ayaan felt his heart weaken but he doubted that it was from the running. He stopped abruptly.

"I LOVE YOU, HUMEIRA!" He screamed at her.

"WHAT?!" Humeira, screamed at him. "This is no time to JOKE!"

Humeira looked back at Ayaan. He was covered in sweat, head to toe. He had been looking for her all night. Her heart ached to just hug him once. She was sure everything would be alright if she did. Oh, screw it, she thought. She threw her bag out and jumped out of the train, slipping slightly but getting up quickly. She gave Ayaan a big smile and ran as fast as she could towards him, literally jumping on him and hugging him as hard as she could.

The both fell backwards, while Ayaan tried to protect her fall the best he could, almost tripping over. "Oww, Humeira..."

"I'm sorry!" Humeira squealed. She clung on to his neck as he lifted her off the floor. He was her pillar. No matter what happened, everything felt alright in his arms. Nothing else seemed to matter. She breathed in his familiar cologne deeply. Then she stopped herself abruptly.

"If this is a joke, this is a disgusting joke and I will kill you with my bare hands. I swear." Her tearful look was replaced with a furious one, as she showed him her index finger, threateningly.

Ayaan raised as hands up in surrender. "No, Humeira. I never realized how much you meant to me until I lost you. When you were really Rajni Shukla, I was horrified with the idea of losing you forever. Every time you said Vikram, I wanted to punch his face. I've never been so jealous of a guy!" Humeira looked straight into his eyes and gave him a weak smile. "Don't you dare cry now!"

She giggled, hugging him again as tightly as she could. "I love you, Ayaan." She beamed at him. Ayaan ran his hand from her waist to her shoulder and brushed his lips near her neck. He kissed the palm of her hands, entwining his hands with her's as Humeira rested her head on his chest.

"I love you too, Humeira begum." Ayaan kissed the tip of her nose. "Okay, I seriously think I damaged my lungs or something. Please let go. You're not as light as you look either." Ayaan groaned.

Humiera giggled, gently hitting him. She extended an arm to him. "Where's my chocolate bar?" Humeira asked.

"Kya?!" Ayaan said, incredulously.

Humeira giggled, then her face got more serious. She reached up on her tip toes and kissed his cheek. "Let's go home, my P T Usha." She winked as she blushed.

The End.

Edited by .Anamika. - 12 years ago
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So that's it! I hope you guys loved reading this short story as much as I loved writing it! I love Ayaan and Humeira and I hope we get to see more of them in the future! *fingers crossed*

Thank you guys for the comments!

If anybody's interested, I've written another short story on Ayaan and Humeira as well:


Please do read it! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww that was so adorable. I love humeira and Ayaan. I hope they at least unite them in the show if not asya. But anyways great story and wonderfully written.

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