AyRa SS: Delusional Lies - Last Part updated p. 3! - Page 4

Originally posted by: elanpremi

It is truly wonderful and I can't get enough of it dear. Please write on AyRa soon and please PM me

LOVE LOVE LOVE! You have done such an amazing job! The pain and confusion that Humaira would likely feel when she regains her memory is simply spot on. You portrayed her emotions and their logical, chronological progression very beautifully. I have to say, I am all about dreamy romances and all that but I hate, absolutely HATE, illogical storylines. Whether they are on TV or written works. And let's be honest, most of our TV writers are all about illogical. They forget storylines and characters left and right; many times, a character's very personality does a complete 180 over the course of the show. I mean it's truly ridiculous at times and thus a major pet peeve.

However, you took the simple event of Humaira regaining her memory and turned it into this beautiful story. I truly cannot pick one part that I liked the best so I'll give you a few favorites:

1. Loved how you started it out. With it all just coming back to her in one go and immediately feeling that low self esteem.

2. Ayaan and Humaira are so in sync with each other that Ayaan immediately knew her memories had returned and she was lying. [Of course I also loved the flirting Ayaan was doing while Humaira was tending to his wound ;) lol]

3. The end. Particularly the way in which they confessed their love. It was so simply and so them. Full of childish fun and flair. I like that it was not something over the top and flowery because frankly, it would not suit them.

All in all, great job and please write more!

Simran

Hi great story I am really glad that you wrote on Ayra again, they are the couple that got me hooked to this show. I really love they have unique innocence that I like about them. Vikrant and Ketki are doing an awesome job. I really appreciated you wrote on them you are a wonderful writer, i have written your previous ayra story to and really hope that you write more on them.

This was an amazing two shot :) love stories where best friends turn to lovers had much more fun reading it than watching the show 👍🏼 . If you ever write something on Ayra again send me a pm :)

Originally posted by: simisworld

LOVE LOVE LOVE! You have done such an amazing job! The pain and confusion that Humaira would likely feel when she regains her memory is simply spot on. You portrayed her emotions and their logical, chronological progression very beautifully. I have to say, I am all about dreamy romances and all that but I hate, absolutely HATE, illogical storylines. Whether they are on TV or written works. And let's be honest, most of our TV writers are all about illogical. They forget storylines and characters left and right; many times, a character's very personality does a complete 180 over the course of the show. I mean it's truly ridiculous at times and thus a major pet peeve.

However, you took the simple event of Humaira regaining her memory and turned it into this beautiful story. I truly cannot pick one part that I liked the best so I'll give you a few favorites:

1. Loved how you started it out. With it all just coming back to her in one go and immediately feeling that low self esteem.

2. Ayaan and Humaira are so in sync with each other that Ayaan immediately knew her memories had returned and she was lying. [Of course I also loved the flirting Ayaan was doing while Humaira was tending to his wound ;) lol]

3. The end. Particularly the way in which they confessed their love. It was so simply and so them. Full of childish fun and flair. I like that it was not something over the top and flowery because frankly, it would not suit them.

All in all, great job and please write more!

Simran

Aww thank you so much! I'm a bit scared about how they're going to take Humeira's track forward. So far, everything's been going really well though, especially with their hug! I hate it when they do that in shows too. When Vikrant first came in as Ayaan, he brought so much intensity that I thought the entire character was so different. But he's brought growth to Ayaan and he's a great actor so I'm glad they got him. He's added layers to Ayaan.

I wish they would show Humeira and Ayaan's "sync" more often. They're literally supposed to be the best childhood friends. Lol I know the flirting was a bit too cliched…

And so was the train wala ending! But I love them being the childish and immature. That gets lost somewhere with the serious storylines.

You should write more too, Simran! I think we're the only two who write ArYa stuff!

Originally posted by: lopli

Hi great story I am really glad that you wrote on Ayra again, they are the couple that got me hooked to this show. I really love they have unique innocence that I like about them. Vikrant and Ketki are doing an awesome job. I really appreciated you wrote on them you are a wonderful writer, i have written your previous ayra story to and really hope that you write more on them.

Thanks for commenting again! They're the couple that got me hooked on the show too! They are very innocent! Kekti is the cutest little doll! If I get another idea, I will definitely write more on them!

Originally posted by: aussie.priya

I love your story! I'm also really glad that at least some people are taking an interest in Humeira and Ayaan :)

I love them! They're so cute. And wonderful actors. Hopefully, more people will give them attention.

Thank you, aussie.priya! I've loved these two from day 1! They are adorable! I hope they get an actual storyline and more people start to appreciate them as well.

Originally posted by: -Eris-

This was an amazing two shot :) love stories where best friends turn to lovers had much more fun reading it than watching the show . If you ever write something on Ayra again send me a pm :)

Thank you so much for the kind words! There's something very sweet and adorable about childhood romance. I will definitely send you a PM if I write something else on AyRa!

Loved the SS .I hope you write again on Arya soon.And hopefully this time a fanfiction

loved it...

Originally posted by: Sabhayata

Loved the SS .I hope you write again on Arya soon.And hopefully this time a fanfiction