AyRa SS: Delusional Lies - Last Part updated p. 3! - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
What a great ending to a great story!!!!

It was completely filmi.!!!
I loved it.

My only issue is that you ended it so soon.
I wanted to read more.

Please tell me you are going to start with something new?
You are an amazing writer.
reading you is a pleasure.

Richa.
Posted: 12 years ago
#22
loved it...
train wala tho amazing tha...
hope show par bhi khuch yasa dekhaye...
thanx alot... for it... and for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
Aww I loved it! ❤️

I love Vikrant as Ayaan. 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
wow... just beautifull...
plz continue n pm me nest tym
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
Omg !👏 I was in AyRa-land ❤️ I loved this 😳 plz write more on AyRa
btw hope we get this train Wala confession in the show too was soo dreamy and filmi
AyRa rock !
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh, loved the ending. Perfect. I love these train incidents, I loved DDLJ and now I love the promos of chennai express too.. I love these train scene. And, I am sure they'll look amazing and adorable!!! P T usha ... hehe this one was too hilarious.

Dee
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was amazing!! I was waiting for someone to write something on them and it was AMAZING😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Curiousmind

Aww that was so adorable. I love humeira and Ayaan. I hope they at least unite them in the show if not asya. But anyways great story and wonderfully written.

Thank you! I know! They have so much potential. I'd hate to see that get wasted.

Originally posted by: richa1792

What a great ending to a great story!!!!

It was completely filmi.!!!

I loved it.

My only issue is that you ended it so soon.

I wanted to read more.

Please tell me you are going to start with something new?

You are an amazing writer.

reading you is a pleasure.

Richa.

Ha! Filmy indeed!

I might start something later when I get some ideas jotted down. But I have written another SS on Ayaan-Humeira if you're interested: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3368193/ayra-ss-ek-main-au-ek-tu-completed

Thank you for the kind words! They mean a lot!

Originally posted by: Reeyana

loved it...
train wala tho amazing tha...
hope show par bhi khuch yasa dekhaye...
thanx alot... for it... and for pm...

Train wala was my favourite part too! Hehe. Thank you for reading!

Originally posted by: ...SankaDevi...

Aww I loved it!

I love Vikrant as Ayaan.

Thank you so much, SankaDevi!

Originally posted by: princesnatasha3

wow... just beautifull...

plz continue n pm me nest tym

Thank you! Unfortunately, this SS is finished here so there is no next time!

Thank you!

Originally posted by: iqii

Omg ! I was in AyRa-land I loved this plz write more on AyRa

btw hope we get this train Wala confession in the show too was soo dreamy and filmi

AyRa rock !

Aww, thank you! I wish we get to see something like that too! They need a proper love story as well! Thanks for the appreciation

Originally posted by: Enchantress

Oh, loved the ending. Perfect. I love these train incidents, I loved DDLJ and now I love the promos of chennai express too.. I love these train scene. And, I am sure they'll look amazing and adorable!!! P T usha ... hehe this one was too hilarious.

Dee

Aw, thank you, Dee! I'm a crazy DDLJ fan too. Tried to change it up a bit and not make it too clichd though!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ms.ObseSSeD

It was amazing!! I was waiting for someone to write something on them and it was AMAZING😃


Thank you so much, ms.obsessed! I'm so happy that you liked it! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It is truly wonderful and I can't get enough of it dear. Please write on AyRa soon and please PM me

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