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Posted: 12 years ago

Taarey ff: DIL MIL GAYE-PART2

Flashback continues:

The sun is not yet hot. Sweet vapors rise from the earth. Night dew clings to the soil makes plants glisten. Birds call to one another. Bees are already at work'''

The sweet rays of sun fall on her face making her more beautiful & angelic but at the same time disturbing her peaceful sleep. Ummm she moaned in her sleep and covered her face with blanket to protect her sleeping mood from those innocent sun rays. But god had another naughty plan to wake up his special child so this time instead of nature he used his creation of science and the alarm rang up with its highest volume!!!! She woke up making irritating face with the sound of alarm and started cursing herself!!!!

Taani: how can you be so stupid taani!!! After the two freaking month you have got a whole day leave from your so called office & work and also got the opportunity to sleep till late at least till 12 and you just wasted it just because yesterday night you are thinking about that stupid date of khadoos & radhs and forgot to turn the alarm off!!!

She sighed in disappointment and went to the washroom for freshen up. While taking her favorite breakfast with banana shake suddenly she noticed the calendar.

Taani: oh freak!!! It's Friday!!! That means kal khadoos ko radhs k sath date pe jana hai aur abhi tak usse ye pata hi nehi!!! Dumbo kaise pata hoga tu batayegi tab to usse pata chalega na (and with this she started to get panic) koi nehi taani just calm down and take a deep breath!!! you still have the whole day and khadoos thodi na kahi bhage ja rahe hai sham ko yehi to ayega office k bad tab bata dena. Yup that sounds great mai sham ko khadoos ko sab batadungi and I really hope & pray ki wo meri bat samajh jaye and date pe jane k liye agree kar de!!! Plz godji aaj at least mujhse aapni dushmani bhul k mera sath de dena plz plz plz (she closed her eyes and prayed to her biggest enemy godji with her joined hands)

Here at the same time in the office khadoos was heading to his cabin in a hurry to bring the new project file and suddenly bang with someone. Before the girl could reach the floor he held her waist protectively and made her stand properly.

Sorry!!! Both blurted together without noticing each other!!!But after hearing sorry from both sides finally they looked at themselves.

Rey: hey radhs. So it's you. Actually I was in a hurry and didn't notice you so the apology should be from my side. (He said this plastering a gentle smile on his face)

Radhs: oh come on reyansh it's perfectly fine. No apologies needed as me too was also engrossed with some random thoughts. (She said this making her cheeks little bit red) On a second thought I should be thankful to you for saving me from the fall.

Rey: now you are making me embarrassed. By the way it's not the way of your cabin so what are you doing here? Is there any special work??? (He asked with a concerned face)

Radhs: ha vo actually I came here to talk with you only (now her cheeks were full on tomato red)

Rey: to talk with me!!! Oh ok (he said this making a confused face). But you have to wait a bit for that as I have to submit the new project file to boss so have to rush now. Really sorry for the inconvenience.

Radhs: hey it's totally cool. I will come some other time. You carry on your work (with a small smile on her face)

Rey: No no you sit here and be comfortable. I am just coming back in 10 minutes (he said this in a convincing manner as he thought that she might need some help from him regarding any official work)

Radhs: ok (she replied with a broad smile on her face)

In the evening at taani's apartment taani was practicing in numerous way to convince rey for the date infront of the mirror and finally got irritated!!!!

Taani: oh godji aap humesha mere sath hi aisa kyu karte ho!!! Khadoos ko settle karne ka idea meri dimag me aapne hi dala tha na ab middle me a k partnership kyu tor rahe ho!!!!!! That's not fare ok!!! Kuch to help karo atleast!!!

She was busy with talking or should say cursing her best enemy godji when suddenly she heard a bang on the door and immediately turned around to find rey standing on the edge of the door and glaring at her angrily. She didn't understand the reasons behind his angry glares and asked him with a little irritated tone...

Taani: what is this khadoos!!! Why you punished my innocent door!!!! Itna shokh hai door torne ka then let me remind you that you have your own apartment too!!!

Rey without uttering any word started moving towards taani and this sudden action of him made taani nervous and forced her taking back steps. Finally taani's back hit the wall and rey stopped at a small distance...



NOTE: ok guyz that is all from chapter 2. I know I again dissapointed you all but guyz believe me I have nothing to do. I wanted to discontinue this ff after all that crap happened in D3 bt I am only continuing it because of my bff to whom I promised i will write her luv stry & also fr all the readers who took out their precious time fr liking nd commenting'

At the end just wanted to wish all my readers & frndz "eId MuBaRaK" may allah bless us all 😊

Edited by samiha_taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was really nice👏👏👏
i just loved it😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Same2u samy
Itna short update to main b nhi krti 😔
Rey banged Taani's door...kuch toh interesting hone wala hai!!
Can't wait fr d next part n u better update soon nahi to main update nhi karungi..
N I love ua way of writing!! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
luvd taani's pts to the core... nyc update..thnx 4 pm.. continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Why this small update???
chalo theek hai..late than never😉😆
Happy Eid to You Misti🤗
You are really writing this beautifully👏👏..aur ho bhi kyu nah..meri friend jo ho😳😆
Now this is enough of praising me..sorry mein bhul gayee thi ke main this update ke baare mein baate karne aaye thi😆😆
Bacchhuu Taani you are sending your rey with radh, but u will feel jealous only..
so be aware😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update! Loved taanis parts! Really cute!! Update soon! N thnx for d pm...:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
aww itna chota update ...bt koi nhi sumthin is bttr dan nthing 😆 bt it was an awsm one yaar ...n update d nxt part asap ...eager to read it 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
I'm glad that you're going to continue updatint this ff. Please pm me whenn you update this next. I really liked how you seem to have let Rey know Taani's plan in advance. Please let that be the case. It'll be very entertaining to see Taani realise that she loves the same man that she could've always had and was trying to set-up with other girls.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hawww... 😲
yeh kaha rok diya yaar??? 😕
and taani baby bichaari ko itna pareshaan q kr rhi ho? 😆
and uss radhs ka toh... 😡
haayo rabaa... itna pareshaan q hai mohalla... 😕
pls update soon... 👍🏼
well her pov was very well written! 👏
ab i m eager to know... 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesom eupdate
pls pls pls pls pls pls continue soon

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